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|Is it better to move around or to stay in one place? toefl essays
5 - alright I will follow your advice on the firstly thing. Thank you very much for clarifying my doubts,...
Writing Feedbackivan9210 - Nov 30, 2009 / ivan9210 - Dec 2, 2009
|The United States of America - History Essay (first paragraph)
4 - I always recommend writing the intro last. How can you introduce what does not yet exist? The history...
Writing Feedbackchicmagnet2k4 - Nov 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2009
|A letter from Birmingham Jail- A Argument essay
Writing FeedbackJoeyson - Nov 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2009
|What is Swadhyay?
3 - Use a comma to separate adjectives, and use a hyphen for God-loving: ...innocent, God-loving people in the name of...
Writing FeedbackDPatel - Nov 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2009
|Task 1 : The levels of participation in education and science.
3 - Thank you very much Tim , this has been really helpful I really appreciate the helpful corrections you did...
Writing FeedbackRuah - Dec 2, 2009 / Ruah - Dec 2, 2009
|Short essay: baby boomers and different generations
2 - Here are a few thoughts to get you started: You have four different generations that you will be...
Writing Feedbackalex10 - Dec 1, 2009 / Notoman - Dec 2, 2009
|The best solution to over coming traffic problems in your city
3 - Yes, idefinitely agree. This paragraph needs a lot of work. Especially take care about using unnecessary full stops and...
Writing Feedbackheromanmax - Nov 30, 2009 / archana_s91 - Dec 2, 2009
|Food has become easier to prepare. Has this change or improve the way that people live?
Writing Feedbackrobertsheperd80 - Dec 1, 2009 / archana_s91 - Dec 2, 2009
|TOEFL ESSAY CHOOSE WHERE TO GO
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 1, 2009 / Keng - Dec 2, 2009
|An essay about build a new factory near our community
Writing Feedbackrobertsheperd80 - Dec 2, 2009 / robertsheperd80 - Dec 2, 2009
|Early believe assumptions vs Science new findings about Altruism
4 - The sense exposed more clear in this variant for me. the provided information provided supports It acts...
Writing Feedbackmargarita - Dec 1, 2009 / kooka - Dec 2, 2009
|An Indian milieu
12 - Ha ha, yes, for now help me correct some of these essays! I'm having trouble keeping up. :-)...
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Oct 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2009
|Do you agree that one should never be judged by their external appearances-fback
Writing Feedbacklook416 - Nov 29, 2009 / look416 - Dec 1, 2009
|Face-to-face communication is not anymore the more effective way to communicate.
4 - Parthew and Kevin, I really appretiate your feedback. Kevin, thanks so much for letting me see and understand...
Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 28, 2009 / margarita - Dec 1, 2009
|Spirits and rituals concept essay
7 - Not gonna lie, didn't understand most of it...but the admin might. so it's not a college essay?...
Writing Feedbacksoul997 - Nov 27, 2009 / yang - Nov 30, 2009
|TOEFL: "people are living longer now"; 'Healthier life, well educated people'
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 29, 2009 / shahps41592 - Nov 30, 2009
|TOEFL; Public transportation keeps society from the depletion of natural resources
3 - people can usetake public ..., train, and subway, the oil and gasoline nonrenewable will run out quickly. Using...
Writing Feedbacklyhongyen - Nov 30, 2009 / s011208 - Nov 30, 2009
|TOEFL ESSAY " Shools should ask students to evaluate their teachers"
13 - thanks a lot...
Writing Feedbacklyhongyen - Nov 16, 2009 / lyhongyen - Nov 30, 2009
|TOEFL "Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done."
4 - Hi, s011208, One thing that catch my eye in your essay is the expressions "suffer from pressure", "not...
Writing Feedbacks011208 - Nov 25, 2009 / kooka - Nov 30, 2009
|traveling the world is educational. it has changed me. uc prompt 1.
Writing Feedbackprincess01 - Nov 29, 2009 / ashtene - Nov 29, 2009
|I can not arcoss the gap
2 - The twenty first century witnessed a world transforma tion. With the development of society ,our lives are more...
Writing Feedbackwyl_steven - Nov 29, 2009 / protesturhero - Nov 29, 2009
|TOEFL Why do some students study abroad?
3 - Thanks Susan! I appreciate your help on my writing. It will be great if you can,please, take a look...
Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 27, 2009 / margarita - Nov 29, 2009
|TOEFL Parents are natural teachers
16 - hitchhike, no problem, we are learners. Thanks for your thoughts on my writing. kevin, thanks for helping us!...
Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 15, 2009 / margarita - Nov 29, 2009
|Forward or first page - A Book I am Writing
Writing FeedbackJeannie - Nov 17, 2009 / Jeannie - Nov 29, 2009
|"Categories of Criminals" - Stanford Intellectual Vitality Essay
5 - wow, i really like yours. its interesting, but is it related to what major you're applying for? also, i...
Writing Feedbackfallen92 - Nov 20, 2009 / luu123 - Nov 29, 2009
|Argument Essay on Security Cameras - Feedback / Revision
2 - The growing use of surveillance cameras in today's society has led to several privacy issues being raised. The...
Writing Feedbacksonic_fanrs - Nov 27, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 28, 2009
|Essay about city living and country living
Writing FeedbackJannaiska - Nov 28, 2009 / ayida365 - Nov 28, 2009
|'A few years ago, boarding school was a fresh coming thing for us' - IELTS: Boarding school
3 - Hi maymay513,thanks for helping me. You help me find some errors which I did not realize. Thanks again!!! You...
Writing Feedbacksupersophie - Nov 26, 2009 / supersophie - Nov 27, 2009
|TOEFL "Building a new movie theater in nighborhood.."
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 27, 2009
|What are the aims of academic study and how can they be achieved?
4 - Hi! thank you so much...that was really helpful... Il take care about all that the next time!! I edited...
Writing Feedbackarchana_s91 - Nov 9, 2009 / archana_s91 - Nov 27, 2009
|TOEFL living in places different weather condition vs same weather condition
6 - Margarita, one of my teacher, who taught writing, told about this limitations. By taking into consideration of time we...
Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 18, 2009 / hitchhike - Nov 26, 2009
|The lifestyle we live today is leading us down the path of an evolutionary disaster; choices we made
2 - Yes, the second para is much stronger than the first. Often, we need to cut the first para, because...
Writing Feedbackneuromancer - Nov 25, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
|IELTS:Are International Sporting Occasions a Safe Way for Releasing Emotions??
Writing FeedbackRuah - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
|TOEFL "why is music important?"
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
|A Descriptive essay about Beauty feedback
Writing Feedbacknursehelp - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
|Today people are using nuclear energy and interested in it!
2 - issue. Moreuse. Then clean and cheap energy [cheaper* really? didn't know that. I thought uranium is very expensive.] choose...
Writing Feedbackchile - Nov 26, 2009 / meisj0n - Nov 26, 2009
|Studying people and events of the past time is very useful
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 18, 2009 / margarita - Nov 25, 2009
|Skepticism in students' study---GRE ISSUE
2 - Doubts lead to experiments, and experiments lead to deeper understanding, to solution, it and in this way skepticism can...
Writing Feedbackbluebonnet - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 25, 2009
|Germany, Italy, France, Britain - The Amount Spent on Consumer Goods
Writing FeedbackRuah - Nov 23, 2009 / Ruah - Nov 24, 2009
|Multi-Language Clash Synthesis essay
6 - Well... in order to see how it actually is an independent clause, think of this sentence: However,...
Writing FeedbackJoeyson - Nov 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 24, 2009
|Advertisement is not a waste of money but an effective method of sales promotion
3 - Hi, ...people can hardly know ... when we use hardly, scarcely and some negative adverbial, inversion structure would...
Writing Feedbackpretty0407 - Nov 24, 2009 / hitchhike - Nov 24, 2009
|TOEFL preference essay " sports vs.arts" - feedback welcomed :)
4 - I believe when you are asked to stay and support your preference about two o more topics, subjects or...
Writing Feedbackeng_student - Nov 18, 2009 / margarita - Nov 23, 2009
|TOEFL - Is it important to donate money to protect environment? New Era diseases
6 - Well this seems to go well with the title... With TOEFL, I assume you are more concerned with...
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 5, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 23, 2009
|Experience is the best teacher; influential person - Preparing for the Clep exam
4 - Susan and Kevin - thank you for the feedback. I studied the mistakes you pointed out and understand now...
Writing Feedbackpaula - Nov 17, 2009 / paula - Nov 23, 2009
|TOEFL EASSY-- the ability of planning and organizing is essential for young
Writing Feedbackpretty0407 - Nov 21, 2009 / pretty0407 - Nov 22, 2009
|Literary Analysis on The Haunting of Hill House
Writing Feedbackkparham322 - Nov 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 22, 2009
|TOEFL ; Recent story that affected me the most was Pig Flu
4 - I don't know the name of the rule associated with this. You can write, "My jacket is here." and...
Writing FeedbackHelin - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 22, 2009
|compare between your childhood and right now.
16 - learned to live in the "jungle"? [note: that was a metaphor? or really where you live?] hahah. what...
Writing Feedbackbilal ABUZENAH - Nov 16, 2009 / bilal ABUZENAH - Nov 22, 2009
|Humankind has undergone many changes in the eating habit - food is easier to prepare
2 - gahhhh! I spent an hour typing stuff up and the browser messed up. o well, guess u'll have to...
Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Nov 20, 2009 / meisj0n - Nov 21, 2009
|essay about Siddhartha's Teachers
Writing Feedbackluny - Nov 20, 2009 / harsha9 - Nov 21, 2009
|COUNTRY BOYS - REACTION PAPER - edit this essay, I'm non native English speaker
2 - "Country boys" is the most unique type of documentary movie that I have ever watched, because it is not...
Writing Feedbackjhung620 - Nov 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 21, 2009
|Toefl essay - "Learning about past has its significance"
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
|Toefl Integrated task" William shakespeare"
2 - Thanks, Mashhadi, for this great work. I know that takes a long time! I hope your teachers will someday...
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
|Toefl essay on Silvio Berlusconi.
Writing Feedbackdar81 - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
|[TOEFL]Tidal Power_Integrated task.
Writing Feedbackyin - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
|TOEFL: "Studying alone or in a group"/ Which do you prefer?
NEW - Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?...
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|TOEFL:::working for a small company - more chances are to boost in your job
2 - You did a good job of making clear your thesis statement at the end of the first paragraph. Your...
Writing Feedbackmashhadi - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 20, 2009
|Toefl : lifestyle individualism VS collectivism
Writing FeedbackBabies - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 20, 2009
|IELTS essay"people think children's spending time on TV, video..is good,while.."
NEW - Some people think children's spending time on TV, video and PC games is good, while others think it is...
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|Smoking ban - essay argumentative
5 - thanks...
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