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|"forced to build...the Fort" - Personal Experience
1 - Hi does my essay sound tight enough and is my thesis pretty clear. Thank you so much for taking...
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|The Freedom Writers Diary - Why it is Important to Read such Novels
1 - Yes, I feel it is important for readers to read such novels within the school system because it inspires...
Writing Feedbackaioghps - Sep 18, 2008 / — -
|COLLECTIVE STORY about my Family; Father's & Mother's Side
1 - This is my narrative about my family that tells the collective story of them. If someone could edit any...
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|Essay: "Video surveilance is essential"
Writing Feedbackrsgino7 - Sep 17, 2008 / rsgino7 - Sep 18, 2008
|Literary Response on "The man who loved levittown" by wheatherall
2 - Good morning. It looks like you are on the right track. Your questions are leading to a close...
Writing Feedbackjeseniainsc - Sep 17, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 18, 2008
|Role Model Parent - The Perfect parent-child relationship essay
1 - I was wondering if someone could read my essay on the characteristics of a Role Model Parent and critique...
Writing Feedbackshan00ts - Sep 17, 2008 / — -
|The story of "Hunters In The Snow" - an essay on arguing from experience
Writing Feedbackjrobertson49 - Sep 17, 2008 / — -
|'Never, never give up' - students meeting obstacles
1 - This is today essay. Opinion about the expression 'Never, never give up' "Every time I meet obstacles on...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 17, 2008 / — -
|Reduce stress, body and mind; GED Essay - Why people enjoy hobbies
1 - Could you please advise and comment my essay. I am preparing for GED writing at the moment. Your feed...
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|"My art is me"; Early childhood eassy on creativity
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|Comparative Analysis Essay of Heroes
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|Preconception attitude towards writing
3 - A few thoughts that you could include to make your essay more rounded. Do you think that instructors do...
Writing Feedbackkincade - Sep 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 16, 2008
|Some people trust their first impression about a person, while some do not.
4 - Thank you, Gloria. [Is there any way other than a 'thank you' to express my gratitude for your help?...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 9, 2008 / jerry - Sep 16, 2008
|Many people base on advertising to assess things. Getting know about a country.
2 - Let's see: "Many people use advertising as a base to assess things. To me, advertising is not reliable...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 15, 2008
|More education than required at job site equals dissatisfaction? - essay
1 - People who receive more education than they need to function their jobs will feel dissatisfaction. Do you agree or...
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|Drunk - sad story
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Sep 15, 2008 / — -
|I am essay - being a baseball player and being a guitar player
2 - Your essay is disorganized. Try taking one subject at a time, discuss it, and then move on to the...
Writing Feedbackgo cardinals - Sep 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 14, 2008
|Essay: "the Father of Medical Healthcare" - Tommy Douglas
4 - Good evening. What kind of assistance are you seeking? Usually essays posted to this forum are rough drafts...
Writing Feedbacklozer244 - Dec 20, 2007 / EF_Team5 - Sep 12, 2008
|Are real events, real people, and established facts the best for studying?
2 - You're welcome. ... real people, and established facts. ...books will provide me the ability to imagine, the motivation...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 12, 2008
|What Morrow has to say about writing history; Essay for Time Magzine article
3 - Here is what I have so far, it someone could please peer edit and give suggestions I would greatly...
Writing Feedbackldixon - Sep 9, 2008 / ldixon - Sep 12, 2008
|UF Essay - exited about the maturing experience
Writing Feedbackmollyrama09 - Sep 11, 2008 / mollyrama09 - Sep 11, 2008
|Plato "The Republic" essay topic " what does Plato mena by "do better then"
Writing FeedbackEka - Sep 10, 2008 / Eka - Sep 11, 2008
|Playing game is not only fun if I win - there are many other factors I prefer in playing a game
2 - "Some people think that a game cannot be fun without winning. Whenever I play soccer, it brings me...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 10, 2008
|'Sound of a man and a woman' - Freshman Composition 1 essay
2 - I think your diction and your use of active verbs is pretty good; you use varied sentence beginnings; your...
Writing FeedbackMyles18 - Sep 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 10, 2008
|Lewis Carroll - biography and style/literary devices.
2 - Good afternoon. What are the requirements for the assignment? Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...
Writing FeedbackRAJIV26 - Sep 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 10, 2008
|"Who was the strongest character in 12 Angry Men, and why?"
1 - The topic: "Who was the strongest character in 12 Angry Men, and why?" Due: tomorrow :o Start: ...
Writing Feedbacknclester - Sep 9, 2008 / — -
|"Women of Their Time"; Mrs. Mallard and Calixta - Thesis (essay) The Storm and The story of an hour
Writing Feedbackjeseniainsc - Sep 3, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 9, 2008
|Parents should choose the best univ. possible for their kids. Agree or dis.
1 - Nowadays, many parents feel that their children should enter the best university possible. That's somehow may sound right, but...
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|Children should learn household tasks to survive
2 - You're welcome. When it comes to the issue of whether or not children should be required to help...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 8, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 8, 2008
|Tell us what you do for the pleasure of it - short essay b
1 - this is the second short essay I must write. Can someone please correct grammar? thank you very much! ...
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|"children park" - Places of my interest - essay
2 - "Among the various places the place of my interest is the children's park that is 15 minutes away from...
Writing Feedbacksangita - Sep 7, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 7, 2008
|Do students prefer traditional house or modern house?
2 - Good morning. "Although older people have gained a lot of knowledge and experience , the assertion that older...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 7, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 7, 2008
|Should high schools let students learn what they choose?
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 5, 2008
|Desbribing a person - Julian, my soul mate
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|essay on describing a friend
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|Success can lead people into danger by changing a person's personality
2 - Businessmen also find that success can bring about greed, by them not being satisfied of their achievements. They would...
Writing FeedbackSATHelp - Sep 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 4, 2008
|This is list of my acrylic / pastel paintings - portfolio explanation
1 - 1 The plant is being recharged by the rain-Charcoal, 47.2cm X 63.6cm, 2008 To express rough and comfortable feeling...
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|Changing and staying the same in life. Which would you prefer?
2 - Good to hear! These are my thoughts: "Humans' life perceptions are diverse. Some people believe that changes...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 3, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 3, 2008
|'Examinations'; A good teacher should assign homework. Agree or disagree?
1 - Examinations have become an effective method to test the student's capabilities. To pass the exam, we [ it is...
Writing Feedbackhattrick3011 - Sep 2, 2008 / — -
|Movies show us wonderful things and people who we cannot find in the real world
2 - "Nowadays, movies are very popular and become an important part of our lives . There are hundreds of films...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 2, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 2, 2008
|the most important reasons for Europeans to migrate to New Zealand, XVIII c
1 - Question: What were the most important reasons for Europeans to migrate to New Zealand in the 1800s? New...
Writing Feedbacksylock232 - Sep 1, 2008 / — -
|I used to fear the Night - essay
1 - Please help me look through this essay. I need it urgently. Thanks so much for your help! When...
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|annual car and truck safety survey - An argument essay
1 - Hi all, I'm newbie here. Please help me to check my essays Thanks so much:) The following appeared...
Writing Feedbackfranklamparden - Sep 1, 2008 / — -
|Social Identity assignment
2 - Nice work. Your content is very strong and you are very confident in your text. You give good examples...
Writing Feedbackelibats - Aug 29, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 29, 2008
|Personal Response Essay On Lee Fong Gwo Case
1 - Well this is a personal response essay about whether I agree or not agree that Lee Fong Gwo should...
Writing Feedbackken - Aug 27, 2008 / — -
|Essay: Who should pay tuition fees? STUDENTS or the GOVERNMENT?
Writing Feedbackstressful - Aug 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 26, 2008
|Initial Assessment Essay on the "The Story of an Hour"
4 - Got it pulled together.. It is a little better any suggestions on what can improve or what I am...
Writing Feedbackjrobertson49 - Aug 25, 2008 / jrobertson49 - Aug 25, 2008
|Global warming presents a genuine risk to our existence; INTRODUCTION
2 - Great job! One small change though: "After years of research scientists have finally come to the conclusion that...
Writing Feedbacknangy - Aug 25, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 25, 2008
|no other tools than face-to-face talk can replace human needs to meet and share joys and sorrows
4 - Both of those are fine; they are still used frequently today. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...
Writing Feedbackurgent - Aug 19, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 24, 2008
|'Invisible things' - Religion Argumentative Essay
1 - prompt: R.D. Gold in his book Bondage of the Mind basically says that religious dogmas, and religion itself, is...
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|Darfur, Sudan - people, history, identity essay
1 - hey! im getting marked out of 60 10 for background info-family size, geo, assets, jobs Description of conflict -10marks...
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|Outer space explore vs. Basic needs essay
2 - You make some really good points in this essay. If you can find some research supporting how much the...
Writing Feedbackngngmaiphuong - Aug 19, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
|Being in the middle of the spiral staircase. Essay on Education
5 - Sure :) Well, what about personal improvement? As one rises through the levels of education is it not...
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Aug 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 16, 2008
|essay on Juliets speech in Romeo and Juliet Modernized
2 - Make sure that everything in quotation marks is properly cited according to the specifics of your required citation style....
Writing Feedbacksylock232 - Aug 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 16, 2008
|Topic 4: prohibite smoking in public places
3 - Let's see: Nowadays, people go to public places such as cinemas,restaurants, or bars after long days at offices....
Writing FeedbackSophie - Jun 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 12, 2008
|"The Waste Land" as a Manifestation of Dream Content
4 - Sure thing! You know, it really depends on your citation style. MLA requires the complete citation each time...
Writing Feedbackelibats - Aug 11, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 12, 2008
|Opposition to new ideas - Taking a position in a timed essay
3 - I really appreciate your valuable comments. I am preparing for an essay writing test and picking differnt topics to...
Writing Feedbacksummer - Aug 10, 2008 / summer - Aug 11, 2008
|Paragraph about School and Writing
Writing Feedbacktomotomo - Aug 9, 2008 / tomotomo - Aug 11, 2008
|Behemoth (a rollercoaster): Recount of an event
Writing FeedbackFissionMailed - Aug 9, 2008 / — -
|ALWAYS TELLING THE TRUTH, SHOULD OR SHOULD NOT? - Essay Revision
1 - Please correct this essay for me. Thank you so much. ALWAYS TELLING THE TRUTH, SHOULD OR SHOULD NOT?...
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