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|emergency money; spend your earned money immediately or save it for future ?
10 - -Hey Sabrina, try to finish Norman Lewis book. It has all you need to have an excellent grammar. Just...
Writing Feedbacksabrinayaa - Jan 22, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jan 26, 2011
|The success of a community and people's willingness to limit their personal interests
4 - When people dream the same dream, all (all what?) becomes one; but if the partners touch an incongruity and...
Writing Feedbackcharpay_k - Jan 17, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 25, 2011
|Some people think robots can improve humans' life in the future
Writing Feedbackrenga78 - Jan 20, 2011 / renga78 - Jan 25, 2011
|Jobs that you enjoy or jobs that you can earn a lot of money
Writing Feedbackwhitney - Dec 30, 2010 / pashnetala - Jan 25, 2011
|IELTS: Is television a very useful tool when it comes to education?
3 - ...and has only insignificant positive effects on a child. This essay will show my opinion for both views. Instead...
Writing FeedbackAlsu - Jan 21, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 24, 2011
|Should juries have access to information about the defendant's. IELTS Task 2.
3 - Let's try to improve this first sentence a little bit: The decisions made by juries, which can interfere with...
Writing FeedbackARIA - Jan 22, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 24, 2011
|MY REASON FOR VIEWING LIFE AS AMAZING (I was in five different hospitals)
2 - You can't start a sentence with Did like this... unless you are using poetic license. :-) Did not have...
Writing Feedbackshurtleffryan - Jan 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 24, 2011
|an essay about why laptop is important to me?
2 - Everyone needs to have an important object in her or his life. Capitalize: Inspiron with the model...
Writing Feedbackwbsxe - Jan 22, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 24, 2011
|No role for teachers in the classroom because of computers?
2 - This sentence needs to have an article before Education: Educational sector is not an exception. I don't mean to...
Writing FeedbackArunj4mast - Jan 21, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 24, 2011
|IELTS-do ads make us to buy more or is it a need?
4 - thankx khushi, i got it right in third try...lol....but no matter how many attempts i take right now...it will...
Writing Feedbackajit88rai - Jan 23, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jan 24, 2011
|An essay about the results of a survey of adults education-IELTS
3 - Hello, As far as I know when you write your introduction for IELTS task 1 you must avoid copying...
Writing FeedbackSuYper - Jan 19, 2011 / Liliya - Jan 23, 2011
|CRIME RATES are increasing due to uneducated people migrating to the cities
3 - Hey, I think this essay is solid. It's a well-made argument that absolutely does show strong evidence that crime...
Writing Feedbackceko - Jan 15, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 23, 2011
|Bringing and grown up a child could be a challenging work, which demand attending of both parents
Writing FeedbackARIA - Jan 21, 2011 / ARIA - Jan 23, 2011
|Job expectations: changing job frequently or not?
Writing FeedbackHelga - Jan 22, 2011 / Helga - Jan 23, 2011
|Book Room - toefl my favorite room
Writing Feedbackwhitney - Jan 18, 2011 / whitney - Jan 23, 2011
|Toefl: knowledge gain from experience or book
2 - hey buddy, -i really feel that this line needs re-framing, especially the latter part. " Some people would like...
Writing Feedbacktaylor kong - Jan 21, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jan 23, 2011
|IELTS- sporting events and their need for easing international tension
3 - thanks Kevin... I will try to improve my essays...I feel I have shown imrpovement ...slowly but steadily..thankx a tonne...
Writing Feedbackajit88rai - Jan 19, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jan 22, 2011
|"Skin already determines a life style" - Race essay
2 - I'm going to eliminate as many unnecessary words as I can: There are various types of shades of "black"....
Writing FeedbackNewyorkerkidd - Jan 20, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 22, 2011
|If we learn to peruse the meaning of happiness, the life will be beautiful - SAT
2 - That first paragraph is very eloquent. All of this is eloquent. Here is a part that is 'extra'...
Writing Feedbackcharpay_k - Jan 19, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 22, 2011
|A new educational system and students' motivation
Writing Feedbackmayko - Jan 14, 2011 / mayko - Jan 22, 2011
|TOEFLE SPEAKING-Most impressive event, Spring Festival China
3 - It sounds awkward if you say sons twice: On Spring Festival Eve, sons get back to their parents'...
Writing Feedbackwhitney - Jan 15, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 21, 2011
|TOEFL-Which one do you prefer, to live in a big city (I incline) or in a small town?
4 - Restaurants would hire more employees to serve their customers. Why should "would" be deleted? It wouldn't, if you were...
Writing Feedbackyecochi - Jan 18, 2011 / KeyJewel - Jan 21, 2011
|The Importance of Brotherhood and Loyalty to Personal Beliefs (obstacles)
3 - No comma necessary here: I look up to his confidence and hate his anger. However, despite everything, there...
Writing FeedbackJasonCahela - Jan 14, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 21, 2011
|IELTS-fatherhood ,motherhood or both?
Writing Feedbackajit88rai - Jan 18, 2011 / ARIA - Jan 21, 2011
|Overwork and Stress - Cause and solution
4 - That's great. I am also impressive your nickname "Shark on diet". Thank you very much for your help. (Lý...
Writing FeedbackNapoleon - Jan 6, 2011 / Napoleon - Jan 21, 2011
|TOEFL - Music bring numerous benefits to human being
4 - candy lovely: I think your essay in the topic,but it still have a drawback except grammer which lack of...
Writing Feedbackcandy lovely - Jan 20, 2011 / taylor kong - Jan 21, 2011
|Live in a big city (more chances, transportation, jobs)
Writing Feedbackmishal alzaid - Jan 20, 2011 / dumi - Jan 21, 2011
|"whenever there is problem they can help each other" -the quality of a good neighbor?
Writing Feedbackcandy lovely - Jan 19, 2011 / TayElliott - Jan 21, 2011
|Eating @ Home or in Restaurants?HOME food comes with freedom, low cost & high quality
Writing Feedbackmishal alzaid - Jan 20, 2011 / Rhettgray - Jan 20, 2011
|TOEFL- Should young people take several jobs before they take a long-term one?
5 - Well...actually...the reason why I choose the opposite side is because there is enough vocabulary relating to this aspect in...
Writing Feedbackstudent7 - Jan 16, 2011 / student7 - Jan 20, 2011
|TOEFL SPEAKING-The most embarrassing moment for me
Writing Feedbackwhitney - Jan 15, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 20, 2011
|IELTS: children spend more time on watching TV
Writing Feedbacklippea - Jan 20, 2011 / lksidestep - Jan 20, 2011
|IELTS：Should the government pay for medical care and education?
Writing Feedbackvena9000 - Jan 13, 2011 / lippea - Jan 20, 2011
|IELTS-Money spent on different forms of entertainment (WT1)
8 - I did this task before and my teacher advice me not to explain every thing and explain the main...
Writing FeedbackSyaza - Jan 15, 2011 / candy lovely - Jan 19, 2011
|The study of history places too much emphasis on individual - SAT
2 - ...to the efforts of Churchill or Stalin, Ignoring ignoring uncountable and ordinary soldiers who risk their lives in...
Writing Feedbackmuzhihao1 - Jan 17, 2011 / EF_Susan - Jan 19, 2011
|TOEFL: amusing movies or serious movies
Writing Feedbacktaylor kong - Jan 19, 2011 / TayElliott - Jan 19, 2011
|A person you know is planning to move to your town or city (Bangkok, Thailand)
6 - Hi,Linying... Thank you very much for correcting my mistake and I will try my best to avoid them.. And...
Writing Feedbackcandy lovely - Jan 19, 2011 / candy lovely - Jan 19, 2011
|Hard choice - neither between life and death nor between love and freedom, but between truth and lie
Writing Feedbacklinying - Jan 14, 2011 / linying - Jan 19, 2011
|Do you think that ease does not challenge us and that we need adversity to help us...
3 - I want to hear some overall comments in fact... But anyway thanks for checking my essay. I'd like...
Writing FeedbackJealous0503 - Jan 18, 2011 / Jealous0503 - Jan 19, 2011
|I recommend that government should spend more money on improving highway
2 - A public debate has arisen on should government spend more money on improving highways or public transportation has arisen...
Writing Feedbacktaylor kong - Jan 18, 2011 / wendy_the - Jan 18, 2011
|Some believe universities are responsible to prepare people for employment
NEW - Some people believe that universities are responsible for preparation of young people for employment. Others believe universities have other...
Writing FeedbackGladchenko - Jan 18, 2011 / — -
|People care too much about their appearance than before. Do you agree?
6 - To add to the other suggestions, how about societal pressures? The fact that we as a society often judge...
Writing FeedbackChim Can Cook - Jan 17, 2011 / ameddy - Jan 18, 2011
|Essay about work hours Long or short work hours - feedback
2 - rephrase this sentence....it is not having a good structure i feel "Long-standing and till nowadays; we have been living...
Writing Feedbacksalam237 - Jan 18, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jan 18, 2011
|"My sociable mother" - describe a person you admire
NEW - Hi Please tell me about this essay I wrote about a person I admire, and I choose 2 characteristics...
Writing Feedbackploniite - Jan 18, 2011 / — -
|How money was spent in different entertainment- IELTS task
4 - cool....I think this time it was quite precise and related to the shown graph. cheers and good luck.please do...
Writing FeedbackARIA - Jan 17, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jan 18, 2011
|'Aladdin's lamp antique aroma' - Do memories hinder or help people?
5 - Thank you. I consider that I should state clearly at the beginning in my conclusion and leave a space...
Writing Feedbackcharpay_k - Jan 16, 2011 / charpay_k - Jan 17, 2011
|Personal thoughts about meaning of living
2 - Well I have been thinking about how life it occasionally is for nearly two years, duringirrevelant different times; while...
Writing Feedbackfekfek - Jan 17, 2011 / kungpo91 - Jan 17, 2011
|(IELTS topic) shopping has become a favorite past time among young people..
Writing Feedbackkode336 - Jan 16, 2011 / lokesh - Jan 17, 2011
|Expressing my inner world through Photoshop
5 - --> this sentence makes me think that you are often unconfident about your works. what about just...
Writing Feedbackltpvan - Jan 13, 2011 / mimiQ - Jan 17, 2011
|TOEFL: TRANSPORTION (subway is the most efficient and environmently friendly?)
Writing Feedbackwhitney - Jan 16, 2011 / pashnetala - Jan 17, 2011
|the 20th page of Time magazine.
Writing Feedbacklucky_mimi8592 - Jan 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 17, 2011
|IELTS ACADEMIC WRITING ABOUT GOVERNMENT FUNDING ART.
3 - I think you should say standards of living instead of life standards. I also think you should add another...
Writing Feedbackmyosotis214 - Jan 15, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 17, 2011
|Job satisfaction: factors, element of well-being
5 - thanks a tonne lokesh...well its really nice to get guidance and opinions ...please do give me your reviews about...
Writing Feedbackajit88rai - Jan 16, 2011 / ajit88rai - Jan 17, 2011
|5 senses essay - "Why are you at Columbia Basin College?"
Writing Feedbacksupremeacy - Jan 12, 2011 / supremeacy - Jan 17, 2011
|TOEFL -AMBITION (to teach Chinese as a froeign language)
2 - your answer is good but not great use adverbs as much as you can and use besides, furthermore, however,......
Writing Feedbackwhitney - Jan 15, 2011 / pashnetala - Jan 16, 2011
|Younger people are not suitable for important positions in government of countries?
Writing Feedbackcharpay_k - Jan 14, 2011 / charpay_k - Jan 15, 2011
|Everyone should have a person who you interested (my nephew)
Writing Feedbacklwshing - Jan 9, 2011 / peevzeeweez - Jan 15, 2011
|"Blame the government" - SAT PRACTICE ESSAY: (practicing for the sats)
4 - Well, first, I consider that you'd better add some examples into your essay, since it is important to write...
Writing Feedbackivantav - Jan 12, 2011 / charpay_k - Jan 15, 2011
|Theory of Knowledge: Evidence to support beliefs
2 - I think every area of knowledge required requires a varied amount of evidence. Ethics is also an...
Writing Feedbacktanyasilva11 - Jan 13, 2011 / EF_Kevin - Jan 14, 2011
|TOEFL: small town has some advantages such as healthy life and better facilities
4 - ... according to some factors, Some people prefer to live in tall ... One of the conditions that...
Writing Feedbackazar1921 - Jan 4, 2011 / linying - Jan 14, 2011
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