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|Explain the humanistic Approach to Counselling
3 - Thank you so very much for your help. I completely agree with you about my essay jumping here, there...
Writing FeedbackNessie - Sep 27, 2009 / Nessie - Sep 28, 2009
|Treating pets as family members is not a good way for human beings even though they are our friends.
3 - hi jin, i have ever written about this topic. however my essay support that statement. i think there are...
Writing FeedbackJin - Sep 27, 2009 / thinhtvdhtm - Sep 27, 2009
|Personal life of famous person is no longer "personal"
5 - With the remarkable development of public media, the personal life of famous person is no longer "personal". Personally, I...
Writing FeedbackJin - Sep 23, 2009 / thinhtvdhtm - Sep 27, 2009
|Rambo Verses the Boar; Descriptive Narrative Assignment
Writing Feedbackneuromancer - Sep 18, 2009 / EF_Sean - Sep 27, 2009
|how can school help new students get accustomed to new environment?
6 - thanks mrchildchil! ielts 8 band, it means that your english is excellent. in your opinion, with this essay, how...
Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Sep 20, 2009 / thinhtvdhtm - Sep 26, 2009
|Biased Metaphors in the Science of Reproduction
2 - You ought to get a good grade for this essay. You accurately summarize Martin's overall point, illustrating the idea...
Writing Feedbackjason123 - Sep 26, 2009 / EF_Simone - Sep 26, 2009
|'How I adapted to fit in' - Meaningful experience
10 - i really like how you worded your essay it flows and it also describes your personaly like when i...
Writing Feedbacksly634 - Sep 25, 2009 / acat6332 - Sep 26, 2009
|Comparison essay with subject on tolerance and power.
11 - To EF_Sean Hmm, I better be more careful with how I word things next time. Actually it wasn't until...
Writing Feedbackdanielh - Sep 12, 2009 / danielh - Sep 26, 2009
|Reading habits of Leeville citizens - Analyse An Argument. Rate on a scale of 6
2 - No, the argument does not state this. One study found that Leeville citizens reported this. In light of...
Writing Feedbackdesigningsally - Sep 26, 2009 / EF_Simone - Sep 26, 2009
|Good parents influence their children essay
5 - I think your introduction essay is too long. Why don't you make it shorter and divide you essay in...
Writing Feedbackkokidpham - Sep 20, 2009 / essay0405 - Sep 26, 2009
|A paragraph about Dreams
Writing FeedbackMermaid1 - Sep 25, 2009 / designingsally - Sep 26, 2009
|IBT essay - Study for free at the university
Writing Feedbacktuanlnc - Sep 25, 2009 / tuanlnc - Sep 26, 2009
|Reserve Readings - What did I do wrong in this essay?
7 - Research your topic more, and spend some time reflecting on it. Once you know the material well enough, your...
Writing FeedbackJeannie - Sep 13, 2009 / EF_Sean - Sep 25, 2009
|Personal Definition (AP Composition class)
Writing FeedbackTroubledWriter - Sep 24, 2009 / TroubledWriter - Sep 24, 2009
|Cbest Essay - Missing Opportunity in Life
Writing Feedbackelainedlcruz - Sep 21, 2009 / EF_Sean - Sep 24, 2009
|"Preparation Produces Opportunity" (A quote and how it relates to your life)
Writing FeedbackCantWrite - Sep 21, 2009 / EF_Simone - Sep 24, 2009
|A formal education is the problem of my hometown - I would try to eliminate it
Writing FeedbackKeng - Sep 17, 2009 / Keng - Sep 24, 2009
|Interacting with the same kind of people in work on a regular basis
Writing Feedbackpacha - Aug 27, 2009 / Jin - Sep 24, 2009
|students should take apart in lecture or not? why?
Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Sep 20, 2009 / looktor - Sep 24, 2009
|Toefl---TV good or bad?
Writing Feedbacklitingjiao - Sep 21, 2009 / looktor - Sep 24, 2009
|'discussion in Indian parliament' Teens have paid jobs during studying? (Toefl)
8 - And try to avoid overgeneraliztions. For instance, to say that teenagers are uniformly immature, drunken, drug-addicted gamblers as if...
Writing Feedbacksaurabhjain162 - Sep 8, 2009 / EF_Sean - Sep 24, 2009
|Writer's Duty (Faulkner's Nobel Prize Speech and Dillard)
3 - The best way to improve grammatical errors is to read English texts of various subjects such as politics, science...
Writing Feedbackluckystar - Sep 23, 2009 / Keng - Sep 23, 2009
|SOME PEOPLE HELP THEIR COMMUNITY DIRECTLY AND SOME THROUGH ORGANISATIONS,DISCUSS
Writing Feedbackniraj - Sep 23, 2009 / eternal flame - Sep 23, 2009
|President Bush's September llth Address to the Nation
Writing Feedbackluckystar - Sep 20, 2009 / EF_Sean - Sep 23, 2009
|the parallels of " The world on the Turtles back" and "The Genesis"
Writing Feedbackleone123 - Sep 20, 2009 / EF_Simone - Sep 22, 2009
|GOOD AND BAD OF MULTICULTURL SOCIETY. DISCUSS
4 - Lol, I see you have discovered that some topics are, um, more sensitive than you thought. You are right...
Writing Feedbackniraj - Sep 21, 2009 / EF_Sean - Sep 22, 2009
|My Essay on Disappearances in Pakistan. Help
3 - If you're going to talk about the U.S. in relation to Pakistan, you have to go back further in...
Writing Feedbackcantonhero - Sep 21, 2009 / EF_Simone - Sep 22, 2009
|Originality is not such a concept that can be categorized in the first group or the other
4 - thanks, yes as i read again, it seems unclear.:( i write these essays as a practice for GRE exam.....
Writing Feedbackmina_sedaghatir - Sep 21, 2009 / mina_sedaghatir - Sep 22, 2009
|Personal Essay: A Dog's Best Friend.
5 - Maybe some advice? My writing prof. explained that i should have a grey conclusion taht goes along with my...
Writing FeedbackJpicker - Sep 18, 2009 / Jpicker - Sep 22, 2009
|Hills Like White Elephants Essay (man and girl frustration)
Writing Feedbackhazelc - Sep 21, 2009 / EF_Sean - Sep 21, 2009
|Summary/Response: Kant's Public and Private Use of Reason
Writing Feedbackmilkee_0923 - Sep 17, 2009 / milkee_0923 - Sep 21, 2009
|"Studying overseas" - I AM PREPARING FOR IELTS EXAM
Writing Feedbackangel_luv - Sep 21, 2009 / elainedlcruz - Sep 21, 2009
|Process Essay. Water Polo.
2 - This is your conclusion right now. It functions weakly as a conclusion and ought to go in the...
Writing FeedbackDEW72 - Sep 20, 2009 / EF_Simone - Sep 21, 2009
|Are you bored doing the same tasks over and over again? - Definition Essay
Writing Feedbackvwyodapink - Sep 20, 2009 / EF_Sean - Sep 21, 2009
|"Get an A, but no brain" - Cheating and plagiarism
12 - While we get a fair number of aspiring freeriders here, the default assumption for anyone new should be that...
Writing Feedbacklorelain - Sep 17, 2009 / EF_Sean - Sep 21, 2009
|solution for new students to get on new school
3 - thank EF_Simone so much!i try to make better comment for others and avoid these mistakes in my essays. i...
Writing Feedbackkhoctham - Sep 20, 2009 / khoctham - Sep 20, 2009
|Descriptive Essay - A media event or a once in a lifetime event
8 - you can use methaphors, similes, analogies to help show and not just say things that describe emotions or feelings...
Writing FeedbackJSteinberger - Sep 20, 2009 / neuromancer - Sep 20, 2009
|toefl -- needed land / protecting environment
5 - I can't help but notice that many of your comments on other people's threads have been a bit brief...
Writing FeedbackJin - Sep 19, 2009 / EF_Sean - Sep 20, 2009
|reformation in education good or not? why?
2 - Certainly. But you must do your part too. I notice that you have posted two essays for feedback,...
Writing Feedbackkhoctham - Sep 20, 2009 / EF_Simone - Sep 20, 2009
|'I would like to live in a big city' - For Toefl writting - need a score
Writing Feedbackfishbaby - Sep 17, 2009 / khoctham - Sep 20, 2009
|'Korean student died'; The advantage and disadvantage of the Internet
2 - In your conclusion, you list recommendations related to only two of your points. If you're going to list recommendations,...
Writing Feedbackessay0405 - Sep 20, 2009 / EF_Simone - Sep 20, 2009
|toefl -- success and luck
Writing FeedbackJin - Sep 18, 2009 / thinhtvdhtm - Sep 20, 2009
|A meal is not only the original resource for daily energy and health but also the spirit feast
Writing FeedbackJin - Sep 14, 2009 / thinhtvdhtm - Sep 20, 2009
|Narrative essay / the street artist
5 - The story is too pat to be realistic. Also, the theme of the etching, according to the website you...
Writing Feedbackal_nadwani - Sep 19, 2009 / EF_Sean - Sep 20, 2009
|Toefl Topic -- "A person you know is coming to your town"
5 - You're not doing too badly for a TOEFL essay. You should reorder either your paragraphs or your introduction, however,...
Writing Feedbackzhigoolet - Sep 19, 2009 / EF_Sean - Sep 19, 2009
|discuss advantages and disadvantages of building a new shopping center
4 - It is comment considered thatN othing in the world is perfect, and everything always comes at a price. ...
Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Sep 18, 2009 / EF_Simone - Sep 19, 2009
|'advantages outweigh annoyance' - people have a close friendship with their pets
Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Sep 17, 2009 / thinhtvdhtm - Sep 18, 2009
|"All Cultures Are Created Equal" - Is this categorized as an analytical paper?
3 - Your problem here is that you haven't defined "equality," or, for that matter, "culture." In a whole host of...
Writing FeedbackBrianne - Sep 17, 2009 / EF_Sean - Sep 18, 2009
|students should get jobs or not? why or why not? 'to be more confident'
3 - thank DJKessler very much. your comment encourages me very much; because, my teacher often says that my essays are...
Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Sep 18, 2009 / thinhtvdhtm - Sep 18, 2009
|motherhood and father hood
Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Sep 17, 2009 / EF_Simone - Sep 18, 2009
|Skill is more important than a theory, but without any experience - knowledge, it fails.
Writing FeedbackJin - Sep 16, 2009 / Jin - Sep 18, 2009
|When a huge factory is built, the job demand is high, and it attracts thousand persons to move there
6 - i think that you repeat pollution issue. in the second reason u refer to this problem, however in the...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Sep 16, 2009 / thinhtvdhtm - Sep 18, 2009
|Critique my essay; American Sports : Sportsmanship or to win at any cost
12 - Computer programs are notoriously difficult to use as a grammar learning tool, unless you are dealing with ESL software...
Writing Feedbackxubis - Sep 4, 2009 / EF_Sean - Sep 17, 2009
|Toefl--- fossil fuels will soon be replaced?
7 - Maybe not oil, but coal is abundant. We cannot use contractions in written English? Never noticed this problem before......
Writing Feedbacklitingjiao - Sep 16, 2009 / litingjiao - Sep 17, 2009
|"Truth it self doesn't exist" - truth in the relationship
6 - i think that u should not make question in the essays, most people consider that it is not very...
Writing FeedbackPatricia - Sep 16, 2009 / thinhtvdhtm - Sep 17, 2009
|the way to achieve good health and fitness in modern society
2 - I'm trying to figure out how you've managed to post two essays while only giving feedback -- and not...
Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Sep 17, 2009 / EF_Simone - Sep 17, 2009
|-- Writing from India (essay about holidays and truth)
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Jul 30, 2009 / Rajiv - Sep 17, 2009
|the problems of balancing school, job and a family.
Writing Feedbackmoneyka - Sep 11, 2009 / Jin - Sep 16, 2009
|MANY PEOPLE DO BUSINESS AT HOME AND STUDY DUE TO COMPUTER TECHNOLOGY.DISCUSS
Writing Feedbackniraj - Sep 13, 2009 / EF_Simone - Sep 15, 2009
|TOEFL: Good or bad for more information?
Writing Feedbackjiaxing - Sep 15, 2009 / jiaxing - Sep 15, 2009
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