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|TOEFL living in places different weather condition vs same weather condition
6 - Margarita, one of my teacher, who taught writing, told about this limitations. By taking into consideration of time we...
Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 18, 2009 / hitchhike - Nov 26, 2009
|The lifestyle we live today is leading us down the path of an evolutionary disaster; choices we made
2 - Yes, the second para is much stronger than the first. Often, we need to cut the first para, because...
Writing Feedbackneuromancer - Nov 25, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
|IELTS:Are International Sporting Occasions a Safe Way for Releasing Emotions??
Writing FeedbackRuah - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
|TOEFL "why is music important?"
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
|A Descriptive essay about Beauty feedback
Writing Feedbacknursehelp - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
|Today people are using nuclear energy and interested in it!
2 - issue. Moreuse. Then clean and cheap energy [cheaper* really? didn't know that. I thought uranium is very expensive.] choose...
Writing Feedbackchile - Nov 26, 2009 / meisj0n - Nov 26, 2009
|Studying people and events of the past time is very useful
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 18, 2009 / margarita - Nov 25, 2009
|Skepticism in students' study---GRE ISSUE
2 - Doubts lead to experiments, and experiments lead to deeper understanding, to solution, it and in this way skepticism can...
Writing Feedbackbluebonnet - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 25, 2009
|Germany, Italy, France, Britain - The Amount Spent on Consumer Goods
Writing FeedbackRuah - Nov 23, 2009 / Ruah - Nov 24, 2009
|Multi-Language Clash Synthesis essay
6 - Well... in order to see how it actually is an independent clause, think of this sentence: However,...
Writing FeedbackJoeyson - Nov 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 24, 2009
|Advertisement is not a waste of money but an effective method of sales promotion
3 - Hi, ...people can hardly know ... when we use hardly, scarcely and some negative adverbial, inversion structure would...
Writing Feedbackpretty0407 - Nov 24, 2009 / hitchhike - Nov 24, 2009
|TOEFL preference essay " sports vs.arts" - feedback welcomed :)
4 - I believe when you are asked to stay and support your preference about two o more topics, subjects or...
Writing Feedbackeng_student - Nov 18, 2009 / margarita - Nov 23, 2009
|TOEFL - Is it important to donate money to protect environment? New Era diseases
6 - Well this seems to go well with the title... With TOEFL, I assume you are more concerned with...
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 5, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 23, 2009
|Experience is the best teacher; influential person - Preparing for the Clep exam
4 - Susan and Kevin - thank you for the feedback. I studied the mistakes you pointed out and understand now...
Writing Feedbackpaula - Nov 17, 2009 / paula - Nov 23, 2009
|TOEFL EASSY-- the ability of planning and organizing is essential for young
Writing Feedbackpretty0407 - Nov 21, 2009 / pretty0407 - Nov 22, 2009
|Literary Analysis on The Haunting of Hill House
Writing Feedbackkparham322 - Nov 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 22, 2009
|TOEFL ; Recent story that affected me the most was Pig Flu
4 - I don't know the name of the rule associated with this. You can write, "My jacket is here." and...
Writing FeedbackHelin - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 22, 2009
|compare between your childhood and right now.
16 - learned to live in the "jungle"? [note: that was a metaphor? or really where you live?] hahah. what...
Writing Feedbackbilal ABUZENAH - Nov 16, 2009 / bilal ABUZENAH - Nov 22, 2009
|Humankind has undergone many changes in the eating habit - food is easier to prepare
2 - gahhhh! I spent an hour typing stuff up and the browser messed up. o well, guess u'll have to...
Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Nov 20, 2009 / meisj0n - Nov 21, 2009
|essay about Siddhartha's Teachers
Writing Feedbackluny - Nov 20, 2009 / harsha9 - Nov 21, 2009
|COUNTRY BOYS - REACTION PAPER - edit this essay, I'm non native English speaker
2 - "Country boys" is the most unique type of documentary movie that I have ever watched, because it is not...
Writing Feedbackjhung620 - Nov 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 21, 2009
|Toefl essay - "Learning about past has its significance"
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
|Toefl Integrated task" William shakespeare"
2 - Thanks, Mashhadi, for this great work. I know that takes a long time! I hope your teachers will someday...
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
|Toefl essay on Silvio Berlusconi.
Writing Feedbackdar81 - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
|[TOEFL]Tidal Power_Integrated task.
Writing Feedbackyin - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
|TOEFL: "Studying alone or in a group"/ Which do you prefer?
NEW - Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?...
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 20, 2009 / — -
|TOEFL:::working for a small company - more chances are to boost in your job
2 - You did a good job of making clear your thesis statement at the end of the first paragraph. Your...
Writing Feedbackmashhadi - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 20, 2009
|Toefl : lifestyle individualism VS collectivism
Writing FeedbackBabies - Nov 18, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 20, 2009
|IELTS essay"people think children's spending time on TV, video..is good,while.."
NEW - Some people think children's spending time on TV, video and PC games is good, while others think it is...
Writing Feedbackleonyan938 - Nov 20, 2009 / — -
|Smoking ban - essay argumentative
5 - thanks...
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|Toefl"A person you know is planning to move to your town. What do you think..
4 - The beginning is great! It is actually quite interesting at the start, because I think it is intriguing that...
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 19, 2009
|My Two Sons - Thesis statement for Comparison essay
5 - I have two fantastic boys in my family that were born four years apart and are as different as...
Writing Feedbackbmerrell - Nov 17, 2009 / TFS109201 - Nov 19, 2009
|my art essay, parthenon vs pantheon
Writing Feedbackstockwell - Nov 17, 2009 / sesudita - Nov 19, 2009
|Essay on events that have changed Australia's multicultural society - feedback.
3 - Looking good. If you get inspired, maybe you will come up with a more intriguing first line. This is...
Writing Feedbackdubulee - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 19, 2009
|International Studies Paper on the effects of war.......
2 - How true and terrible that Twain quote is! Hey, I don't understand that last sentence of the first...
Writing FeedbackMGH1989 - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
|Toefl- Do you think it is good for teenagers to work while schooling?
3 - Good corrections! But, you are wrong to think they can be corrected by reading aloud. People learning English...
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 16, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
|Toefl - "not everything in life is according to our wish"
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 17, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 18, 2009
|Toefl essay which changed people's lives automobiles bicycles airplanes
3 - Although new invention will changed the world more or less, only a few inventions can take the significant change...
Writing Feedbackrmli - Nov 18, 2009 / Jin - Nov 18, 2009
|What are the problems with English Education in Korea?
9 - Throughout my middle school and high school educational courses, I had a good grade in English. I earned good...
Writing Feedbackkimster79 - Nov 16, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
|Toefl essay"What are the qualities of the good coworker?"
4 - Throughout in my experience, I noticed that good co worker should have certain qualities. She or he should work...
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 16, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
|Comparative Essay for ENG 1100... subject: Depression
Writing FeedbackMaethirion - Nov 15, 2009 / Maethirion - Nov 17, 2009
|Important teenage decisions should be taken by parents or elders
Writing Feedbackhatung94 - Nov 16, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
|Are human needs for farmland, housing, industry more important than saving lands
3 - Nowadays, a growing number of people focus on an issue that which is the most important for human beings...
Writing Feedbacktiantianwenzi - Nov 16, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 17, 2009
|Failed Descriptive Essay Subject Costa Rica
2 - No using cliches at EssayForum! :-) Just kidding... cliches are people, too. By the way, thanks so...
Writing FeedbackMaethirion - Nov 15, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
|Toefl;Government should definitely spend money in improving transportation services
Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 15, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
|Cbest Essay - Person Most Instrumental in Shaping Your Life
Writing Feedbackelainedlcruz - Sep 15, 2009 / elainedlcruz - Nov 16, 2009
|ESSAY ON "THE WAR ROOM" MOVIE ABOUT CLINTON'S '92 PRESIDENTIAL ELECTION CAMPAIGN
2 - Wow, you're a very good writer! Your essay is powerful and interesting all the way through. The election...
Writing Feedbackkyleroland - Nov 15, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 16, 2009
|Compare and contrast between living in the countryside and the suburbs
3 - I am impressed! Most compare/contrast essays are very rigid and robotic, but your opening paragraph is so natural and...
Writing FeedbackThuy Nguyen - Nov 15, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 16, 2009
|TOEFL essay "homework - necessary or not"
6 - I think some statements in your essay don't develop well. For example" If a teacher wants to assign homework...
Writing Feedbacksilver_bullet - Nov 8, 2009 / tiantianwenzi - Nov 16, 2009
|the main purposes of a country's education system
6 - talk about the variety in public school curriculum, private schools, boarding schools, athletes, scholarships, neighborhood, admission process, money. ...
Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Sep 19, 2009 / kyleroland - Nov 15, 2009
|Advertisement Analysis Essay Help - A $385 Billion Dollar Image
2 - Thanks for posting, long-time lurker! your last para needs help: As we have analyze these advertisements, we...
Writing FeedbackMCafOcc - Nov 13, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 15, 2009
|"Why people love watching action movies" Formal Essay
3 - "Action movies are full filling to many movie watchers because it supplies audiences with electrifying excitement, presents us a...
Writing FeedbackYojimbo_bobobo - Nov 10, 2009 / car3n - Nov 15, 2009
|Water is the most common element for ordinary people; A paragraph about water
Writing Feedbackapi - Nov 13, 2009 / api - Nov 15, 2009
|TOEFL:External appearances can provide important clues to a person
6 - I am a chinese student who will take toefl test. My essay's structure is similiar with yours. I think...
Writing Feedbacklyqinyi - Nov 2, 2009 / tiantianwenzi - Nov 15, 2009
|TOEFL essay What are some important qualities of a good supervisor
2 - What does this mean? ----> good perception on the man. Do you mean to say this instead? ---->...
Writing Feedbackrmli - Nov 13, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
|The Graduation Day... (the best day of my life)
Writing Feedbackbilal ABUZENAH - Nov 11, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
|TOEFL Physical exercise should be required part of every school day
7 - Excellent, at this point, the way to improve it is to cite reliable research data from journals such as...
Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 11, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 14, 2009
|IS BEOWULF TRULY A HERO?
Writing FeedbackMGW698 - Nov 12, 2009 / caslyn1 - Nov 13, 2009
|CBEST - 'Working abroad'; Making Important Decision
Writing Feedbackelainedlcruz - Nov 12, 2009 / elainedlcruz - Nov 13, 2009
|Creative Essay "The Truth" about Poland
2 - These fields contain the utmost beautiful flowers, and the weather is out of this world. It only snows delicious...
Writing Feedbackevildanny2009 - Nov 12, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 13, 2009
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