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|I would like to invent an electric-powered harvesting vehicle - energy-friendly and convenient
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 5, 2009 / Keng - Dec 6, 2009
|Toefl Essay - To get a good grade is to encourage?
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 5, 2009 / Keng - Dec 6, 2009
|Toefl essay Other reason that people want money
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 4, 2009 / Keng - Dec 6, 2009
|TOEFL: Spending time with a large number of friends can add more to one's life.
4 - Thank you very much, guys!!! Kevin, thanks!!! Now I am doing some practice on the Integrated Writing task...
Writing Feedbackinrockuptible - Nov 29, 2009 / inrockuptible - Dec 6, 2009
|Short essay about capital punishment - 'should be canceled'
Writing Feedbacksilentheart - Dec 5, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 6, 2009
|Nature Vs Nurture; Which influences early human development?
6 - Cases where an individual lacking marvelous environmental conditions turns out to be the worst scenarios of childhood clearly makes...
Writing Feedbackarchana_s91 - Dec 2, 2009 / aminade - Dec 6, 2009
|Monologue Writing about Monica
9 - Well.. a monologue is a long speech given by a character. If the character is Peter Griffin from Family...
Writing Feedbackmustafa_hussain - Dec 3, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 6, 2009
|A FLOWER OF GRIEF - FAIRY TALE
NEW - I have already read twelve Russian fair tales,and they inspired me to write the following story. Please read the...
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|The theme of a short story called "A Worn Path" by Eudora Welty
Writing FeedbackParadoxx - Dec 3, 2009 / Mustafa1991 - Dec 5, 2009
|Gun Shy - to communicate with my Cultural Diversity teacher
4 - You always refer to your life background. What is the purpose of your communicating with the teacher? An...
Writing FeedbackJeannie - Dec 5, 2009 / Keng - Dec 5, 2009
|Term Paper about Jewish Music in North Africa
Writing Feedbackaminade - Dec 5, 2009 / aminade - Dec 5, 2009
|Excellence Is The New Average (Thesis trouble)
Writing Feedbackelizabeth_h1 - Dec 3, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 4, 2009
|Cbest Essay: Opportunity to travel
4 - quasi-reptilian underpinnings? Mustafa, couple your criticisms with solutions! Don't be one of those people that points out lots of...
Writing Feedbackelainedlcruz - Dec 2, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 4, 2009
|Honesty is always the best policy; Honesty vs. Lying - persuasion essay
Writing Feedbacknicole1234 - Dec 2, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 4, 2009
|Feminism in "Company of Wolves"
3 - It seems strange that the teacher would find fault with the sentences.. they seem very rhythmic and clear to...
Writing Feedbackstrwberrybird - Dec 2, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 4, 2009
|IELTS: The power of advertising depends on society and goods!
5 - In my opinion, the relation between the high sales of popular consumer goods and the power of advertising ,and...
Writing Feedbackkooka - Nov 29, 2009 / margarita - Dec 4, 2009
|THE FIRST FRIEND IN MY LIFE
Writing Feedbackautumnwave - Dec 1, 2009 / autumnwave - Dec 4, 2009
|Toefl Essay The new movie theatre may be built in your neighborhood.
3 - Thank you for your feedback. I feel my writing skill improve better. However, It leaves a lot to be...
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 4, 2009 / Keng - Dec 4, 2009
|David Thoreau and Martin Luther King Jr.
Writing Feedbackcheerchick - Dec 1, 2009 / cheerchick - Dec 3, 2009
|I am many things, but as a seventeen-year old; Class Essay About Myself
9 - Whether or not poetic fragments are okay depends on your teacher. Assess her/him for conventionality vs. creativity. ...
Writing FeedbackNotoman - Dec 1, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 3, 2009
|Creed sentences - I need to check my mechanics
Writing Feedbackstarzia - Dec 3, 2009 / starzia - Dec 3, 2009
|Why don't people take action in issues in their communities? inaction results?
3 - Good essay, I found some grammer errors, although I'm hardly one to talk about those. :). At any rate,...
Writing Feedbackfran9 - Dec 3, 2009 / elizabeth_h1 - Dec 3, 2009
|Is it better to move around or to stay in one place? toefl essays
5 - alright I will follow your advice on the firstly thing. Thank you very much for clarifying my doubts,...
Writing Feedbackivan9210 - Nov 30, 2009 / ivan9210 - Dec 2, 2009
|The United States of America - History Essay (first paragraph)
4 - I always recommend writing the intro last. How can you introduce what does not yet exist? The history...
Writing Feedbackchicmagnet2k4 - Nov 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2009
|A letter from Birmingham Jail- A Argument essay
Writing FeedbackJoeyson - Nov 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2009
|What is Swadhyay?
3 - Use a comma to separate adjectives, and use a hyphen for God-loving: ...innocent, God-loving people in the name of...
Writing FeedbackDPatel - Nov 30, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2009
|Task 1 : The levels of participation in education and science.
3 - Thank you very much Tim , this has been really helpful I really appreciate the helpful corrections you did...
Writing FeedbackRuah - Dec 2, 2009 / Ruah - Dec 2, 2009
|Short essay: baby boomers and different generations
2 - Here are a few thoughts to get you started: You have four different generations that you will be...
Writing Feedbackalex10 - Dec 1, 2009 / Notoman - Dec 2, 2009
|The best solution to over coming traffic problems in your city
3 - Yes, idefinitely agree. This paragraph needs a lot of work. Especially take care about using unnecessary full stops and...
Writing Feedbackheromanmax - Nov 30, 2009 / archana_s91 - Dec 2, 2009
|Food has become easier to prepare. Has this change or improve the way that people live?
Writing Feedbackrobertsheperd80 - Dec 1, 2009 / archana_s91 - Dec 2, 2009
|TOEFL ESSAY CHOOSE WHERE TO GO
Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 1, 2009 / Keng - Dec 2, 2009
|An essay about build a new factory near our community
Writing Feedbackrobertsheperd80 - Dec 2, 2009 / robertsheperd80 - Dec 2, 2009
|Early believe assumptions vs Science new findings about Altruism
4 - The sense exposed more clear in this variant for me. the provided information provided supports It acts...
Writing Feedbackmargarita - Dec 1, 2009 / kooka - Dec 2, 2009
|An Indian milieu
12 - Ha ha, yes, for now help me correct some of these essays! I'm having trouble keeping up. :-)...
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Oct 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2009
|Do you agree that one should never be judged by their external appearances-fback
Writing Feedbacklook416 - Nov 29, 2009 / look416 - Dec 1, 2009
|Face-to-face communication is not anymore the more effective way to communicate.
4 - Parthew and Kevin, I really appretiate your feedback. Kevin, thanks so much for letting me see and understand...
Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 28, 2009 / margarita - Dec 1, 2009
|Spirits and rituals concept essay
7 - Not gonna lie, didn't understand most of it...but the admin might. so it's not a college essay?...
Writing Feedbacksoul997 - Nov 27, 2009 / yang - Nov 30, 2009
|TOEFL: "people are living longer now"; 'Healthier life, well educated people'
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 29, 2009 / shahps41592 - Nov 30, 2009
|TOEFL; Public transportation keeps society from the depletion of natural resources
3 - people can usetake public ..., train, and subway, the oil and gasoline nonrenewable will run out quickly. Using...
Writing Feedbacklyhongyen - Nov 30, 2009 / s011208 - Nov 30, 2009
|TOEFL ESSAY " Shools should ask students to evaluate their teachers"
13 - thanks a lot...
Writing Feedbacklyhongyen - Nov 16, 2009 / lyhongyen - Nov 30, 2009
|TOEFL "Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done."
4 - Hi, s011208, One thing that catch my eye in your essay is the expressions "suffer from pressure", "not...
Writing Feedbacks011208 - Nov 25, 2009 / kooka - Nov 30, 2009
|traveling the world is educational. it has changed me. uc prompt 1.
Writing Feedbackprincess01 - Nov 29, 2009 / ashtene - Nov 29, 2009
|I can not arcoss the gap
2 - The twenty first century witnessed a world transforma tion. With the development of society ,our lives are more...
Writing Feedbackwyl_steven - Nov 29, 2009 / protesturhero - Nov 29, 2009
|TOEFL Why do some students study abroad?
3 - Thanks Susan! I appreciate your help on my writing. It will be great if you can,please, take a look...
Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 27, 2009 / margarita - Nov 29, 2009
|TOEFL Parents are natural teachers
16 - hitchhike, no problem, we are learners. Thanks for your thoughts on my writing. kevin, thanks for helping us!...
Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 15, 2009 / margarita - Nov 29, 2009
|Forward or first page - A Book I am Writing
Writing FeedbackJeannie - Nov 17, 2009 / Jeannie - Nov 29, 2009
|"Categories of Criminals" - Stanford Intellectual Vitality Essay
5 - wow, i really like yours. its interesting, but is it related to what major you're applying for? also, i...
Writing Feedbackfallen92 - Nov 20, 2009 / luu123 - Nov 29, 2009
|Argument Essay on Security Cameras - Feedback / Revision
2 - The growing use of surveillance cameras in today's society has led to several privacy issues being raised. The...
Writing Feedbacksonic_fanrs - Nov 27, 2009 / EF_Susan - Nov 28, 2009
|Essay about city living and country living
Writing FeedbackJannaiska - Nov 28, 2009 / ayida365 - Nov 28, 2009
|'A few years ago, boarding school was a fresh coming thing for us' - IELTS: Boarding school
3 - Hi maymay513,thanks for helping me. You help me find some errors which I did not realize. Thanks again!!! You...
Writing Feedbacksupersophie - Nov 26, 2009 / supersophie - Nov 27, 2009
|TOEFL "Building a new movie theater in nighborhood.."
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 27, 2009
|What are the aims of academic study and how can they be achieved?
4 - Hi! thank you so much...that was really helpful... Il take care about all that the next time!! I edited...
Writing Feedbackarchana_s91 - Nov 9, 2009 / archana_s91 - Nov 27, 2009
|TOEFL living in places different weather condition vs same weather condition
6 - Margarita, one of my teacher, who taught writing, told about this limitations. By taking into consideration of time we...
Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 18, 2009 / hitchhike - Nov 26, 2009
|The lifestyle we live today is leading us down the path of an evolutionary disaster; choices we made
2 - Yes, the second para is much stronger than the first. Often, we need to cut the first para, because...
Writing Feedbackneuromancer - Nov 25, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
|IELTS:Are International Sporting Occasions a Safe Way for Releasing Emotions??
Writing FeedbackRuah - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
|TOEFL "why is music important?"
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
|A Descriptive essay about Beauty feedback
Writing Feedbacknursehelp - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 26, 2009
|Today people are using nuclear energy and interested in it!
2 - issue. Moreuse. Then clean and cheap energy [cheaper* really? didn't know that. I thought uranium is very expensive.] choose...
Writing Feedbackchile - Nov 26, 2009 / meisj0n - Nov 26, 2009
|Studying people and events of the past time is very useful
Writing Feedbackhitchhike - Nov 18, 2009 / margarita - Nov 25, 2009
|Skepticism in students' study---GRE ISSUE
2 - Doubts lead to experiments, and experiments lead to deeper understanding, to solution, it and in this way skepticism can...
Writing Feedbackbluebonnet - Nov 24, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Nov 25, 2009
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