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|the crucible-how is John Proctor presented (paragraph about him&elizabeth)
NEW - Hi, just wondering if I am answering the question with this paragraph or have gone of the point completely!!...
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|A four-paragraph essay about The True Meaning of Courage
Writing Feedbackkarroll - Nov 25, 2008 / karroll - Nov 25, 2008
|Computers have made life becomes easier or difficult? Discuss
2 - I suggest that you add a sentence to the first paragraph to say what your opinion is: although computers...
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|Research paper on Poe's "Ligeia"
4 - Excellent! This is a great passage; if you keep your comparisons similar to this, you're going to have a...
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|"My father" - pls. help revise part of my P.S.
NEW - My father works as a senior IT researcher in RICOH, a prestigious Japanese company. Under his influence, I learned...
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|IELTS; COMPUTERS REPLACE MAN POWR IN JOBS
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|Report on whether to diagnose a 6 year old boy who may have autism
2 - Good evening :) I have edited the first two sections of your piece and also given some general...
Writing Feedbackjay45 - Nov 24, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
|Telling the truth is not a best option always
Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
|Cumulative class essay about supervisor
NEW - Hello, we were told to write a 4 page essay on our supervisor at work using the material we...
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|'traffic jam, noisy neighborhood' - New movie theater may be built
3 - Good afternoon :) "Going to movie theater is a hobby for many people; therefore, the number of movie...
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|Biology Creative Essay
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|help with essay #1: experience with soup kitchen
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|ADVANTAGES OF CITY LIVING AND COUNTRY LIVING, can you help me with this?
NEW - Some people, say that living in the countryside is the best choice, because is better for your heath. But...
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|'I was two months pregnant' - A decision that has changed my life
2 - Make sure you are capitalizing the first words of every sentence. "so" should be capitalized. At this point...
Writing FeedbackTMcGee - Nov 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
|Paper about ISA. My teacher said my paper is unorganized.
2 - The main thing about organization is that each subject you want to talk about should have its own paragraph....
Writing Feedbacksadie0910 - Nov 20, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
|Essay about bad effects of the internet on students
2 - Good afternoon :) In regards to meaning, there is no difference between "internet" and "the internet." "The" is...
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|What is Conrad's definition of evil from heart of darkness and the strange
NEW - What is conrad's defintion of evil from heart of darkness and The Strange Case Of Dr. Jekyll and Mr....
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|Realism Essay - the readers choice
NEW - Had to write an essay on realism/romatacism. Please give any grammer corrections and content suggestions you may have. ...
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|Teenagers and alcohol essay - help revise or offer suggestions:
2 - Good evening :) First, avoid contractions in formal academic writing; for instance, "It's" should be "It is." ...
Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 19, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
|Cause and Effect Essay-A Family of Poverty
5 - Don't tell the reader, that you're going to tell him something. Like, " I will describe what my poverty...
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|The Freedom to Choose Death
NEW - The Freedom to Choose Death Euthanasia has become one of the most controversial topics nowadays. Euthanasia means "mercy...
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|Pls. help revise essay: The person who has great influence on me
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|Taking action against moral injustice - English Essay Gr. 12 Level
3 - You're very welcome. This is a very importance stance, and this sentence needs to be included somewhere in...
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|Persuasive Essay Abu Graib Prison Camp-Need Help
NEW - I need help, I am a very WEAK writer. No prisoner should ever feel mortally violated and striped...
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|research essay on novel "monkey beach"
NEW - I have finished an research paper on residential school and it is based on the novel, monkey beach. Can...
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|'Gillian and Mum' - Creative Writing - help needs to be proof read
6 - I see. I've edited the first section and then made some general comments in regards to the rest of...
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|Writing is the basis for all education and is too often overshadowed in schools today
2 - Good afternoon :) What is the prompt for this assignment? Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...
Writing Feedbackd4v1d90 - Nov 17, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 17, 2008
|People have different job expectations for jobs - essay help
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|Studying at traditional schools or via computer or TV
2 - I think your response is a very thorough response to the prompt. It is organized, well structured, and explains...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Nov 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 16, 2008
|Nurture has only limited impact on early human development compared to Nature
2 - One of my main concerns with this piece is that none of the research/statistics/data is cited. Where did this...
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|Literature response- writing like a child, need reviews
NEW - I had to write something similar to a "My Name" fragment by Sandra Cisneros. The Format was ...
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|Essay about "Better communication types"
NEW - Here is another essay. It will be a very great help if you give me any suggestion or comments...
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|(prepare for future job/increase knowledge) Why people attend college or university?
Writing Feedbackfranklamparden - Nov 15, 2008 / franklamparden - Nov 15, 2008
|How the internet has improved your academic experience.
5 - Good evening. This website is to assist students with their academic writing. We help with editing, proofreading, grammar,...
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|I prefer working in the large company - more chances of promotion
Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 14, 2008
|Children should grow in big cities
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|Travel is in a group led by a tour guide may be expensive
2 - Good afternoon :) Because you did not describe what kind of assistance you are seeking, I have edited...
Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 13, 2008
|Traffic and housing problems can be solved by decentralisation.Agree or not
NEW - good morning. could you help me to assess this essay, please? Thank you so much. Topic in details;...
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|Invisible Children (sociology essay)
2 - Good evening. Mechanically, only one correction; make sure you consistently refer to the group as "the Invisible Children"...
Writing Feedbackbgibson8708 - Nov 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 12, 2008
|Being involved in or witnessed a trouble situation - Essay Help
2 - Good evening :) As you did not describe what type of assistance you were seeking, I have made...
Writing FeedbackMementoMori - Nov 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 12, 2008
|Senior executives encouraged to leave at the age of 55. Agree or not?
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|Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure.
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|Prevention is better than therapy-Correct my mistakes in this brief article
3 - Hi Gloria . thanks for your feedback . actually i didn't want to focus on details . my intention...
Writing Feedbackmrjojo - Nov 10, 2008 / mrjojo - Nov 11, 2008
|Hypothesis essay on the book, Out of This Furnace
2 - Good evening :) I have some general comments about the piece. First, mechanics. Make sure you are...
Writing Feedbackldixon - Nov 11, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 11, 2008
|Essay Comparing 2 poems with the theme of "Women"
2 - Good evening :) I suggest beginning with an outline. List all of the topics you absolutely want to...
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|Changing My Lifestyle - check my expressions and grammar in this essay
2 - This seems a bit disorganized. Try grouping your thoughts together. For instance, when you talk about the food you...
Writing Feedbackdawnnguyen - Nov 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 11, 2008
|Parents are the best teachers in terms of commitment and emotional support
Writing Feedbacklayaili - Nov 9, 2008 / layaili - Nov 11, 2008
|Essay on "Prevention is better than Cure."
Writing Feedbackmasih_essay - Nov 10, 2008 / layaili - Nov 11, 2008
|Let's make the world a better one! ;essay on compassion
NEW - Hello. this my essay on compassion. please give me some advices. especial conclusion. it is the hardest part for...
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|Research paper review :online gambling should be illegal
Writing Feedbackcarebear - Nov 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 10, 2008
|Public smoking bans---Persuasive essay
2 - Good evening :) Since you did not describe what kind of assistance you were seeking, I have made...
Writing FeedbackBritton87 - Nov 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 10, 2008
|The expansion of higher education from 1970~2000; leadership of the Presidents
2 - Good afternoon. "With Louise's instruction, I analyzed the expansion of higher education in from 1970~2000, and discussed leadership...
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|Personal Response (Ten Things the Chinese Do Much Better Than We Do)
3 - Thanks!...
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|"women are solely responsible for bringing children up"; I completely disagree
4 - Good morning :) OK, let's see. How about reworking it to something like: "The optimal lifestyle for a...
Writing Feedbackmasih_essay - Nov 8, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 9, 2008
|IELTS essay -Young people taking study break for work or travel
NEW - Hi there, Please help me to rate my essay. Topic in details : In some countries, young people...
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|Character Analysis of "Lust": how the author creates a helpless character.
3 - Thank you. I've changed the we to readers, and have worked out a conclusion, though it is rough. I'm...
Writing FeedbackRuby3561 - Nov 6, 2008 / Ruby3561 - Nov 6, 2008
|Distance learning and online computer classes - rate my essay.
2 - Good afternoon. Make sure you are including linking verbs in your sentences to make them structurally sound. Linking...
Writing Feedbacksonali - Nov 6, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 6, 2008
|Decline of Complexity in Music, Criticism and Help on Personal Belief Essay
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|The seasons of sunshine summer and winter paradise - comparison essay
2 - Good afternoon. As I'm not sure what the specifics of this assignment are, I have commented on grammar...
Writing Feedbackgalxrulz - Nov 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 5, 2008
|short essay about presidential election, pls help me this essay
NEW - Why it is important for American citizens to participate in presidential election First of all I'm not American....
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