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|Cosmetic surgery - agree or disagree with this trend?
NEW - Nowadays, people try to change their life by changing their clothing styles, wearing jewelers, changing their appearances through cosmetic...
Writing Feedbackkang - Aug 26, 2010 / — -
|Catostrophic earthquake in Southern Haiti: issue of international significance
5 - Well, I can tell you have a good mind for language. You can write very well. It is important,...
Writing FeedbackMiss_Swiss - Aug 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 26, 2010
|human needs for framland .housing and industry are more than saving land for endan
2 - Hi Goat, I'm glad you are participating here! Do you have any questions about Eugene's corrections? Please type the...
Writing FeedbackWKPKOBE - Aug 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 26, 2010
|Beach vacation are ideal for relaxing
2 - Beach vacations are ideal for relaxing. A beach has a beautiful view for relaxing. The combination of blue...
Writing Feedbackn_tina59 - Aug 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 26, 2010
|Is Experience More book learning or significant in a person 's life ? Why ?
Writing Feedbackthaitam - Aug 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 25, 2010
|'my actions have really touched' - day you made up a mistake which upset other people
Writing Feedbackkingofremix - Aug 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 24, 2010
|TOEFL Topic: Lessons can be learned through playing games
5 - EF Kevin: I am so encouraged and will definitely keep practicing! :-) thank you for your advice. I really...
Writing Feedbackryutei133 - Aug 23, 2010 / ryutei133 - Aug 24, 2010
|IELTS essay: Student behavior, causes and solutions.
5 - Children are our future, and it is crucial that we address this issue as early as possible. Government can...
Writing Feedbackadriennelin - Aug 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 24, 2010
|Gap years between finishing high school and starting university.
Writing Feedbackadriennelin - Aug 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 24, 2010
|SAT essay:Should schools help students understand moral choices and social issues?
4 - Whatever I did may have been because of my own brain malfunction, so let's go back and check... ...
Writing FeedbackSnowWolf - Aug 19, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 24, 2010
|TOPIC Schools should teach students about the overweight burden
NEW - Contemporarily, school students always complain about the overweight burden resulted in myriad of subjects. Yet school never fails to...
Writing Feedbacksonghongbo - Aug 24, 2010 / — -
|'Books cannot meet people demand in time so radio is the appropriate supplement'
4 - With the development of technology, media for communicating information are growing faster and more modern than many years ago....
Writing Feedbacknxthanhxuan - Aug 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 23, 2010
|The simplify of food preparation---toefl essay
3 - Take your time and write a few sentences in that first paragraph. Really explain what you mean to say,...
Writing FeedbackMrTom - Aug 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 23, 2010
|TOEFL: I believe children should not learn a foreign language as they start school
NEW - Topic: do you agree or disagree: children should begin learing a foreign language as soon as they start school....
Writing Feedbackvirtuosoyell - Aug 22, 2010 / — -
|Essay about Moving Image Technique in Advertising and Virtual Photography
4 - So what is that group called? It is called art (n)? That is strange with the parentheses... Be...
Writing Feedbackcvani - Aug 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 22, 2010
|Agricultue as livelihood
Writing Feedbackasokapalama - Aug 19, 2010 / asokapalama - Aug 22, 2010
|The differences and similiraties of PIURA and AREQUIPA -Comparison/Contrast Essay
6 - What do you mean? You are concerned about the last sentence of each paragraph? The topic sentence is the...
Writing FeedbackMakubexD - Aug 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 21, 2010
|Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree?
8 - Students should get to judge their teachers. It could effect their the futures of their peers and people younger...
Writing Feedbackvaishali1980 - Aug 13, 2010 / kaylakay2012 - Aug 21, 2010
|TOEFL- Saving money helps us meet the costs of our further studies; pivotal role
2 - "Them" is not correct with "money." Write like this: I believe that we should save our hard earned money...
Writing Feedbackshashank543 - Aug 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 20, 2010
|GRE:ISSUE218 - "In order for any work of art-whether film, literature, sculpture,
Writing FeedbackEdward_L - Aug 15, 2010 / Edward_L - Aug 19, 2010
|GRE- In any profession, those in power should step down after five years.
Writing Feedbackbroad - Aug 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 18, 2010
|IELTS Task1: Describing data about travel to and from the UK
Writing Feedbackadriennelin - Aug 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 18, 2010
|Should we encourage children to be competitive or cooperative?
9 - Yes, Sir, I will! :D Write concisely, don't contradict myself, choose one argument and stick to it!...
Writing Feedbackadriennelin - Aug 15, 2010 / adriennelin - Aug 17, 2010
|TOEFL TOPIC:Parents and adult relatives should make decisions for older teenagers
3 - I read Ryan's correction version, but I am sorry, I did not find any correction or change in the...
Writing FeedbackMissS1987 - Aug 15, 2010 / MissS1987 - Aug 17, 2010
|GRE-The arts reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society.
Writing Feedbackbroad - Aug 8, 2010 / broad - Aug 16, 2010
|Transportation is one of the source which convert area from rural to urban
5 - Transportation is one of the source factors which convert areas from rural to urban. It functions to...
Writing Feedbackjems007 - Aug 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 16, 2010
|Parents are the best teachers?--Toefl essay
Writing FeedbackMrTom - Aug 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 16, 2010
|How important are staff working condition? Employers role?
2 - In many companies, staff working condition is a matter of great con cern. --- This is a difficult sentence...
Writing Feedbackthaonhung - Aug 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 16, 2010
|Playing sports teaches people more lessons about life.
2 - First and foremost, if people keep on training hard for a long period of ti me, they will have...
Writing Feedbacktingting - Aug 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 16, 2010
|IELTS Essay : Role of mobile phones.
2 - Work on singular and plural: Mobile phones and its their... This is even better: Mobile phones and...
Writing Feedbacknishanthand - Aug 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 16, 2010
|My relationship with my family (mother / father / step parents / siblings)
5 - You need a comma and an apostrophe: My parents were not married when I was born, and because of...
Writing FeedbackSocialorphan - Aug 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 16, 2010
|GRE AW eassy_ how to raise children who can help bring about a better society.
2 - When it comes to solving the above problem, the first question we have to answer is "What is GOOD...
Writing Feedbackandy_Z - Aug 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 15, 2010
|Choose one resource that is disappearing to save it - toefl test
4 - I like your first sentence a lot! Within Among the resources that are most critical is water....
Writing Feedbackrobchavar - Aug 13, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 15, 2010
|Low salary and more vacation time or high salary and less vacation - TEOFL
3 - Add one more sentence to that first paragraph. Make it a sentence that tells the main idea about why...
Writing FeedbackMissS1987 - Aug 13, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 15, 2010
|Some young people believe not staying with parents and some believe in staying.
2 - Hello Yats, I hope Maria's corrections are easy for you to understand. Do you have any questions? I also...
Writing Feedbackyats - Aug 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 15, 2010
|Why do some students study abroad? Review my TOEFL.
4 - ...that these situation are more common.--- is this supposed to say 'common'?? Also, I think you should list...
Writing Feedbackclaros - Aug 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 15, 2010
|To speak well is more important than to write well
Writing Feedbackhonghee - Aug 5, 2010 / zengrz - Aug 15, 2010
|IELTS essay:the disvantages of cars
6 - Hi, I am also an IELTS student (sometime my opinion may not be 100% correct). I believe that it...
Writing Feedbackstomnus - Aug 7, 2010 / nishanthand - Aug 15, 2010
|It is impossible for a man to stay alone - groups are part of human's life
Writing Feedbackvaishali1980 - Aug 10, 2010 / vaishali1980 - Aug 14, 2010
|IELTS Essay : Should Society Ban All Forms of Advertising?
8 - Good points, Preacherjew, so you think it is not good to ban advertising. I guess I think it is...
Writing Feedbacknishanthand - Aug 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 14, 2010
|Environemtal problem, to inculcate a sense of genuine commitment
4 - I think it is better to be more conventional in this intro: Boosting the price of fuel is one...
Writing FeedbacklittleJenny - Aug 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 14, 2010
|A two-paragraph essay about speaking in front of a crowd of people.
4 - I think it should be like this: They have are not used to speaking reasonably and choosing proper...
Writing FeedbackZubaida - Aug 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 14, 2010
|CBEST essay (Hiking and camping): Memorable childhood experience
3 - After this sentence, I think you should add a thesis statement that intriguingly expresses the main theme of the...
Writing Feedbackfenrir - Aug 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 14, 2010
|IELTS ESSAY : CONSUMER SOCIETIES
5 - Hi Dong, I'm taking IELTS at the end of August and I understand how frustrating it is to write...
Writing Feedbacklin54390 - Aug 9, 2010 / adriennelin - Aug 14, 2010
|GRE AW eassy_ individuals VS groups of people in the significance of history study
5 - Overwatch_UA Hi Alexandr Thank you very much for your revised work!! I will make the sentences more...
Writing Feedbackandy_Z - Aug 11, 2010 / andy_Z - Aug 13, 2010
|self assesment : attitude towards writing
Writing Feedbackmcolome - Aug 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 13, 2010
|Summarise information about expenses on different items in five different countries in 2002
Writing Feedbackgugacb - Aug 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 13, 2010
|"Learning is power" - toefl-why people go to colleges or universities?
Writing Feedbackmonicacho - Aug 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 12, 2010
|Baku-- a short paragraph about the hometown
Writing FeedbackAzeri - Aug 8, 2010 / Azeri - Aug 12, 2010
|My Dad; He always stands by my side - A Person That Has Influenced My Life
Writing Feedbackqbt512 - Aug 10, 2010 / mikkychy - Aug 12, 2010
|'Digital life' -The 21st century has begun. What changes this new century will bring?
7 - Good question, my friend! As usual, I'm impressed with your careful study. All of these are correct:...
Writing Feedbackvaishali1980 - Aug 6, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 12, 2010
|People attend university because they want to prepare themselves for future career
Writing Feedbacknhoc_tini - Aug 10, 2010 / nhoc_tini - Aug 11, 2010
|A paragraph about something that makes me angry.
2 - Having picnics at beaches and lakes is not enjoyable because of sickening smells. "Unenjoyable" is not in my...
Writing FeedbackZubaida - Aug 11, 2010 / EF_Susan - Aug 11, 2010
|TOEFL Essay: Are there times when lying is acceptable?
2 - Since childhood, we have been told that we should be honest no matter what happens. A lie can...
Writing Feedbackcanto - Aug 11, 2010 / EF_Susan - Aug 11, 2010
|GRE-Should governments solve the immediate or the anticipated problems?
4 - Is this supposed to say closer? -----> Local governments are more closed closer to the common people and...
Writing Feedbackbroad - Aug 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 11, 2010
|my Toefl: which do you prefer?get up early and start day work or get up later...
4 - Others are inclined to get up ... When you use 'incline' it should be like this: "inclined to" example:...
Writing Feedbackoceanyang - Aug 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 11, 2010
|GRE Issue: The intellectual benefits of attending a university or college are vast
3 - ...There are successful self-taught individuals such as Minhong Yu, who is the owner of trains of English training school...
Writing Feedbackinspiration - Aug 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 11, 2010
|Cooperating of fathers in child rearing
3 - Yes, cooperation is better in the title. However... cooperating is not exactly wrong. It can be a kind of...
Writing Feedbackhaghshenas - Aug 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 11, 2010
|Arts such as painting,music and dancing are the most colorful compositions.
2 - We all know that nearly all the outstanding humans have some hobbies involving art.---- good point!!! This is a...
Writing Feedbackmathsgao - Aug 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 11, 2010
|Children may be stimulated by some new subjects and enjoy a more colorful and meaningful childhood
4 - Oceanyang you have an interesting username!! In Chinese medicine, the top of the head is considered yang, and it...
Writing Feedbackoceanyang - Aug 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Aug 11, 2010
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