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|Children should grow in big cities
Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 13, 2008 / Asselya - Nov 14, 2008
|Travel is in a group led by a tour guide may be expensive
2 - Good afternoon :) Because you did not describe what kind of assistance you are seeking, I have edited...
Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 13, 2008
|Traffic and housing problems can be solved by decentralisation.Agree or not
NEW - good morning. could you help me to assess this essay, please? Thank you so much. Topic in details;...
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|Invisible Children (sociology essay)
2 - Good evening. Mechanically, only one correction; make sure you consistently refer to the group as "the Invisible Children"...
Writing Feedbackbgibson8708 - Nov 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 12, 2008
|Being involved in or witnessed a trouble situation - Essay Help
2 - Good evening :) As you did not describe what type of assistance you were seeking, I have made...
Writing FeedbackMementoMori - Nov 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 12, 2008
|Senior executives encouraged to leave at the age of 55. Agree or not?
Writing Feedbacklayaili - Nov 12, 2008 / — -
|Prevention is better than therapy-Correct my mistakes in this brief article
3 - Hi Gloria . thanks for your feedback . actually i didn't want to focus on details . my intention...
Writing Feedbackmrjojo - Nov 10, 2008 / mrjojo - Nov 11, 2008
|Hypothesis essay on the book, Out of This Furnace
2 - Good evening :) I have some general comments about the piece. First, mechanics. Make sure you are...
Writing Feedbackldixon - Nov 11, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 11, 2008
|Essay Comparing 2 poems with the theme of "Women"
2 - Good evening :) I suggest beginning with an outline. List all of the topics you absolutely want to...
Writing Feedbackstacy32 - Nov 11, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 11, 2008
|Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure.
2 - Since you didn't include what kind of assistance you are seeking, I have just made some general comments. ...
Writing Feedbackmasih_essay - Nov 11, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 11, 2008
|Changing My Lifestyle - check my expressions and grammar in this essay
2 - This seems a bit disorganized. Try grouping your thoughts together. For instance, when you talk about the food you...
Writing Feedbackdawnnguyen - Nov 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 11, 2008
|Parents are the best teachers in terms of commitment and emotional support
Writing Feedbacklayaili - Nov 9, 2008 / layaili - Nov 11, 2008
|Let's make the world a better one! ;essay on compassion
NEW - Hello. this my essay on compassion. please give me some advices. especial conclusion. it is the hardest part for...
Writing Feedbacksdalex - Nov 10, 2008 / — -
|Research paper review :online gambling should be illegal
Writing Feedbackcarebear - Nov 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 10, 2008
|Public smoking bans---Persuasive essay
2 - Good evening :) Since you did not describe what kind of assistance you were seeking, I have made...
Writing FeedbackBritton87 - Nov 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 10, 2008
|Essay on "Prevention is better than Cure."
2 - As the prompt for this essay was not included, I have made some general comments. First, my main...
Writing Feedbackmasih_essay - Nov 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 10, 2008
|The expansion of higher education from 1970~2000; leadership of the Presidents
2 - Good afternoon. "With Louise's instruction, I analyzed the expansion of higher education in from 1970~2000, and discussed leadership...
Writing Feedbackirenecc - Nov 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 10, 2008
|Personal Response (Ten Things the Chinese Do Much Better Than We Do)
3 - Thanks!...
Writing FeedbackFissionMailed - Nov 8, 2008 / FissionMailed - Nov 9, 2008
|"women are solely responsible for bringing children up"; I completely disagree
3 - Good afternoon :) Thanks Gloria for your cooperation. I'm beginner in English and you find funny mistake in my...
Writing Feedbackmasih_essay - Nov 8, 2008 / masih_essay - Nov 9, 2008
|IELTS essay -Young people taking study break for work or travel
NEW - Hi there, Please help me to rate my essay. Topic in details : In some countries, young people...
Writing Feedbacklayaili - Nov 8, 2008 / — -
|Character Analysis of "Lust": how the author creates a helpless character.
3 - Thank you. I've changed the we to readers, and have worked out a conclusion, though it is rough. I'm...
Writing FeedbackRuby3561 - Nov 6, 2008 / Ruby3561 - Nov 6, 2008
|Distance learning and online computer classes - rate my essay.
2 - Good afternoon. Make sure you are including linking verbs in your sentences to make them structurally sound. Linking...
Writing Feedbacksonali - Nov 6, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 6, 2008
|Decline of Complexity in Music, Criticism and Help on Personal Belief Essay
Writing FeedbackQuautemoc - Oct 30, 2008 / Quautemoc - Nov 5, 2008
|The seasons of sunshine summer and winter paradise - comparison essay
2 - Good afternoon. As I'm not sure what the specifics of this assignment are, I have commented on grammar...
Writing Feedbackgalxrulz - Nov 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 5, 2008
|short essay about presidential election, pls help me this essay
NEW - Why it is important for American citizens to participate in presidential election First of all I'm not American....
Writing FeedbackBBgirl - Nov 4, 2008 / — -
|Love experience - Narrative essay
2 - Good afternoon. Since the prompt was not included in this posting, I have given suggestions for grammar and...
Writing FeedbackSherali - Nov 3, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 4, 2008
|a comparison and contrast from two tales from the canterbury tales
4 - Good evening. Make sure you are capitalizing only proper nouns and the first words of sentences. Your bib,...
Writing Feedbacklowryder49 - Nov 2, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 3, 2008
|Intro and Thesis statement on Globalization
3 - Gloria, Thank you for the prompt feedback. It is much appreciated! Now to the task of completing the essay....
Writing Feedbacklinooz - Nov 3, 2008 / linooz - Nov 3, 2008
|An education can be defined a million different ways
4 - Good afternoon. Thank you for clarifying about the quotation; you are right to write it exactly as how...
Writing FeedbackWonderfulloser - Nov 2, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 3, 2008
|Rocky Balboa: The American Dream Personified
2 - Good afternoon. A few mechanical suggestions. First, make sure that your quote at the beginning is correct; "ain't"...
Writing Feedbacksweetcherokee74 - Nov 3, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 3, 2008
|Concert report - essay for my music class
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|Oates and Stone- A comparative research essay- I need a grammar review!
3 - Thank you for your help however: - Americans cannot invade other americans (as far as wars go). Therefore...
Writing Feedbackalexcuk - Nov 2, 2008 / alexcuk - Nov 2, 2008
|Satirical essay; The topic is how lazy American's are.
Writing Feedbackxxcookiesxx - Nov 1, 2008 / alexcuk - Nov 2, 2008
|Everything begins at any circumstance in life - FSU essay
2 - You have some good points in this essay, but overall it is a bit disorganized. Focus on a couple...
Writing Feedbacknemiperuvian - Oct 30, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 31, 2008
|[Argument]The residents of San Perdito should vote Montoya out of office
3 - I really appriate your help. Please point out in details what I can do to improve my essay. Are...
Writing Feedbackfranklamparden - Oct 30, 2008 / franklamparden - Oct 30, 2008
|Gardner's theory of multiple intelligences - Persuasive essay on why music should be in school
Writing Feedbackchazbell - Oct 29, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 30, 2008
|A passage about some measures to protect endangered animals
Writing Feedbacksweetbitterrose - Oct 29, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
|Is Consumerism a good or bad thing?
NEW - Do you think consumerism is a good or bad thing? Given your response, how do you respond to the...
Writing Feedbackrivoltaleandro - Oct 29, 2008 / — -
|Presidential Comparison paper (sociology)
Writing Feedbackbgibson8708 - Oct 29, 2008 / bgibson8708 - Oct 29, 2008
|Essay: marry someone familiar or different?
3 - Good afternoon. Devotion has really great feedback, all of which I agree with. Since he/she has covered all...
Writing Feedbacksonali - Oct 29, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
|topic - condom machines in school
Writing FeedbackshatterX - Oct 27, 2008 / — -
|The theme of the contest is WOW - my short story
2 - Good afternoon. Since you didn't really provide specifics about the prompt (I don't know what "WOW" is), I...
Writing Feedback4ever2bleed - Oct 26, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
|how my writing has changed - my self-evaluation essay
2 - You have a good self-evaluation here. You examine your strengths and weaknesses, and are very honest about both. You...
Writing Feedbackfabiola017 - Oct 26, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
|Classical Essay - Abortion The Right to Choose
Writing Feedbacktaiyaki - Oct 24, 2008 / taiyaki - Oct 27, 2008
|Society of Notes...revision and comments
NEW - Last essay, I swear! I'm glad I found this site though, as it's been an invaluable resource. I'm thinking...
Writing Feedbackjangoc44 - Oct 26, 2008 / — -
|Successful organization / Something what seems to be is not always the same as it actually is?
2 - Good evening. "...jobs and get promoted ." "...employees in this company begi n to ..." "...individualism...
Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 25, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 25, 2008
|Definition of Education-Need filter words & eliminate repetition paragrap.
14 - hey babydoll, well i was researching for the same paper that you have discussed here. Do you still have...
Writing Feedbackbabydoll - Mar 26, 2008 / jolly - Oct 25, 2008
|Diversity to me is an intrinsic part of life; a lifelong learning essay
3 - Good afternoon. It seems a bit disorganized. Are you trying to explain these events in the order in...
Writing Feedbacklilveni - Oct 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
|'Young people are no longer interested in religion.' What is your view?
Writing FeedbackThuyChi - Oct 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
|Without academic excellence, most students nowadays are squeezed out of the competition
3 - I think your paragraphs are appropriate lengths; if you divide the essay further you risk making the flow too...
Writing FeedbackshatterX - Oct 20, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
|"realistic or optimistic" + "hardship and misfortune" -- essays edit help
NEW - Assignment: Do people truly benefit from hardship and misfortune? As an old saying in my hometown goes,"Adversities are...
Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 23, 2008 / — -
|Essay: What dish holds a strong associative power for you?
Writing Feedbacknikokoskinas - Oct 22, 2008 / nikokoskinas - Oct 23, 2008
|It is better to have one long school vacation than to have a few short one?
6 - I think your organization is fine. You start off with a good introduction followed by a body that explains...
Writing FeedbackThuyChi - Oct 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
|Responsibility- through example or behavior of others?
Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 20, 2008 / helenalqy - Oct 23, 2008
|Essay: What will you bring along to Sahara + unforgettable experience
Writing Feedbacksweetbitterrose - Oct 21, 2008 / sweetbitterrose - Oct 22, 2008
|Check for my essay about my holiday trip to Singapore
2 - Good afternoon. OK, let's see: It is the smallest nation in SoutheastAs this is neither a proper...
Writing Feedbackwindcloud232 - Oct 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 22, 2008
|Twin Pregnancies-Impact on the family
2 - Please help me shorten this paragraph, is it possible? My biggest problem is staying within the page limits, is...
Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Oct 21, 2008 / hunnybun39 - Oct 21, 2008
|The Quality of the Decision: The Power of Thinking Without Thinking
2 - My own experience shows the reason why I want to make decisions slowly and cautiously. Decisions, when devoted enough...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Oct 21, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 21, 2008
|This is my 9/11 essay intro - is it OK?
NEW - Hey there!! I would really appreciate it if someone can please take a look at the inroduction of...
Writing FeedbackNeelam - Oct 20, 2008 / — -
|Describe a person... A rough draft thrown together i need some insight
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