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|"health" again for my school leaving examination :)
Writing Feedbackvalentina - May 8, 2010 / valentina - May 8, 2010
|The Reverse Culture essay
Writing FeedbackRajiv - Mar 19, 2010 / Rajiv - May 7, 2010
|Machines have many great features that are impossible for human to compete it
3 - many thanks for your help. i must work hard. god willing i won't have these kinds of problems in...
Writing Feedbacksina1989 - May 5, 2010 / sina1989 - May 7, 2010
|Difficulties faced today are greater than yesterday - GRE Essay Preparation
NEW - I am a beginner here. I am trying to improve my essay writing skills. Below is my first practice...
Writing Feedbacktyro - May 6, 2010 / — -
|Thesis: "Hybridity and Metamorphosis"
4 - Hi again, so if you didn't entirely toss out "self fashioning" just yet, you can still save it. I...
Writing FeedbackBnoel - May 4, 2010 / meisj0n - May 5, 2010
|magnificent historical buildings should not be destroyed: protection by law
2 - ... while others say that it only consumes the place of new ones and they should immediately be knocked...
Writing Feedbackbaris alibeyogl - May 4, 2010 / EF_Susan - May 5, 2010
|Eating at restaurants or at home? TOEFL essay.
Writing Feedbackvijaya - May 4, 2010 / vijaya - May 5, 2010
|GRE-issue8 political leaders withhold information from public
Writing Feedbackcasablancahp - Apr 26, 2010 / casablancahp - May 5, 2010
|City Managar: What is Your Ideal Career Essay
Writing Feedbacknewmt2008 - Apr 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 4, 2010
|Anti-Bullying Informative Paper (Our Brother's Keeper)
NEW - This is to be a Informative Paper in MLA format. Can someone proof read this? I dont see on...
Writing Feedbackqueenlyblessed - May 3, 2010 / — -
|"always obey your parents" Childhood experience which changed my life completely
NEW - Many childhood experinces leave lifelong impressions on people. Write an essay in which you describe a memorable childhood experience...
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|Classification essay: Foreign trade university students
5 - essay 2: priciple: major/faculty I am a second-year student at Foreign Trade University. People have diversed views towards...
Writing Feedbackthuong_lethi - Apr 26, 2010 / kayyao - May 3, 2010
|Study abroad should be encouraged when students are eighteen
Writing FeedbackEujin - May 2, 2010 / Eujin - May 3, 2010
|watching TV is an unhealthy pastime. what do you think about this statement?
3 - Great corrections here!! I also have this advice for you: Let this be paragraph 2: The first benefit can...
Writing Feedbackthuong_lethi - May 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 3, 2010
|Writing a Public Health Policy Analysis paper (apa format)
10 - Pharmacists should be trained before administering vaccines to people. This is a tough one. I think you need...
Writing Feedbackcomet2000 - Mar 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 3, 2010
|Single sex education and coed
7 - Compare and contrast essays are difficult. You need to revise the intro paragraph so that you are...
Writing Feedbackazhar - Apr 30, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 3, 2010
|Jealousy -- a bad human habit!
7 - I think you provide us a very good topic. It's very thought-provoking. Well, maybe you are too young...
Writing Feedbackstranger4ever - Apr 27, 2010 / vivien_wang - May 3, 2010
|"Why people attend to universities or colleges" - Toefl IBT
3 - Hi, good luck on your test!! Generally, people from all nations strive to attend universities. Each individual who wants...
Writing FeedbackShukur - May 2, 2010 / kayyao - May 2, 2010
|Age of the Internet which brings the world so close to each other
2 - Capitalize Internet. capitalize English Use a spell checker. More and more people seem to be interacting with one...
Writing Feedbackbrainlair - Apr 30, 2010 / EF_Kevin - May 1, 2010
|Cbest essay prompt :. Imagine that you could have made one change in the past .
2 - Here are some suggestions hope they help. I think you should go through this paper again and work on...
Writing Feedbackshalini singh - Apr 30, 2010 / monboddie - May 1, 2010
|"dedication to mom" - people who influenced my values in my life
4 - I like the first sentence, but I would add a comma: Though there are many people who influenced my...
Writing Feedbackmarkweeta - Apr 29, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 30, 2010
|"How to Plan a Birthday Party for Adults" - process analysis essay
2 - The next step is to choos e an appropriate place, such as restaurant, history club, hotel's suite or ballroom...
Writing FeedbackTaoTao - Apr 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 30, 2010
|TOEFL: All high school students should be required to study foreign languages
4 - Kevin and Djanat, thank you for your feedbacks. They really helped me. I drew relevant conclusions from your comments...
Writing FeedbackAzeri - Apr 26, 2010 / Azeri - Apr 30, 2010
|Finding an ideal community now a days has become a major problem. Vadalism is the threat.
6 - Thanks kevin!...
Writing Feedbackshalini singh - Apr 27, 2010 / shalini singh - Apr 29, 2010
|Media indeed poses an enormous influence on our opinions as well as attitudes
2 - are actually mastering the thought of individuals and that there are little can be done to eliminate this control....
Writing Feedbackcathyliu - Apr 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 29, 2010
|Honesty - one of the treasured values of human being
Writing FeedbackPhoebe Su - Apr 27, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 29, 2010
|TOEFL: The most important does not come from books
6 - Thanks for your kind words! Well, contributing here is all about helping lots of people. We ask that...
Writing Feedbackmajsiu - Apr 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 29, 2010
|"parants are the best teachers" - I want a band for my essay(IELTS task 2)
3 - Be sure to put a period at the end of this sentence. Tran gave excellent corrections! Let's see...
Writing Feedbackcharming - Apr 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 28, 2010
|Semester Paper Intro (what we did throughout the course of year)
2 - Don't say "many literature." You don't say many water, because water is a substance. Literature is like that. You...
Writing Feedbackqomoco - Apr 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 28, 2010
|'practice and hard work' - Successful sports professionals can earn huge money
3 - Today, famous and successful sports professionals are always on the top of among the rich who earn a huge...
Writing Feedbackthoigiandeyeu - Apr 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 27, 2010
|Should Humanitarian Aid be provided for illegal immigrants?
Writing Feedbackbabydoll - Apr 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 27, 2010
|Homework every day - is it necessary for students? Why / why not?
Writing Feedbackzimone - Apr 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 27, 2010
|Society should ban all forms of the advertising - Essay for IELTS
Writing Feedbackrashidjon - Apr 25, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 27, 2010
|[IELTS] Children must be taught to have balance between competitiveness and co-operation.
Writing Feedbackfakeghost - Apr 23, 2010 / fakeghost - Apr 27, 2010
|Why should it remain the persian gulf? - Argumentative Essay
NEW - why should it remain the persian gulf? The Persian Gulf is located between these countries: UAE, Kuwait, Bahrain,...
Writing FeedbackSarareh - Apr 27, 2010 / — -
|SAT: Are people motivated by personal satisfaction rather than by money or fame?
2 - Waw! The part about Sis A is amazing. I will give you a little version of my life experience....
Writing Feedbacksat_essay - Apr 25, 2010 / a 100 hills - Apr 26, 2010
|TOEFL: students are the only direct receiver of the work of their teachers
3 - but also to help students inwith their studies. Secondly, some teachers need to be evaluated by their students...
Writing Feedbackdjanat - Apr 23, 2010 / zimone - Apr 26, 2010
|TOEFL essay:Twenty years from now, people will have more leisure time than we do
4 - Great! It's hard to explain, though. With more freedom, we may become busier, because we have more competition. But...
Writing Feedbackahhajuly - Apr 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 25, 2010
|Preparing for future career and networking with others- Reasons for attending college
4 - Nowadays, nearly all students graduating from high school are trying to enter college or a university. Every person has...
Writing FeedbackMagsad - Apr 23, 2010 / rmarin - Apr 25, 2010
|Science and religion cannot coexist.Write your views.
3 - thank you very much.it indeed has helped me a lot and also to interpret correctly Einstein's quote! As far...
Writing Feedbackyuvly - Apr 24, 2010 / yuvly - Apr 25, 2010
|Education means developing mind,not stuffing the memory
4 - Hey ya I would also inclucde the sentence that education is power as knowledge is power example can be...
Writing Feedbacksingingbird - Apr 23, 2010 / alibaba 1983 - Apr 25, 2010
|Genes, physical traits - I need help in my point by point essay.
2 - I'm not quite sure I understand the point of this essay, that is, the topic that you are supposed...
Writing Feedbackfishergus - Apr 23, 2010 / McGregor10 - Apr 24, 2010
|Just relationship between society and the individual Paper for poli sci theory
2 - Simplify: Determining a just relationship between the individual and society is the basis of the tension between arguments supporting...
Writing Feedbackmett87 - Apr 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2010
|Literary devices in in Dutchman and Native Son
Writing Feedbackxxyellow - Apr 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2010
|Today artists pass their privilege of revealing of hidden facts and meaning to the audience.
2 - You have to say "accessible to (someone or something)" like this: Art is derived from everyday life, and at...
Writing Feedbacksolotripper - Apr 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2010
|Teenagers work while they are studying - argumentative essay
6 - I think working part-time, while attending school is a good working experience. Especially in these economics times that are...
Writing Feedbackthuong_lethi - Apr 23, 2010 / babydoll - Apr 24, 2010
|I completely agree with the point that the ability to plan and organize is essential to young people
Writing Feedbackahhajuly - Apr 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2010
|A Brief Essay on the Struggle of Coping with an Undiagnosed Eye Condition
3 - This is brilliant descriptive and introspective writing. One moment I would be reading a paragraph about Thomas Jefferson, and...
Writing Feedbackrupee2 - Apr 23, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2010
|DISCONTENT IS VITAL TO GROWTH AND DEVELOPMENT
Writing Feedbacksingingbird - Apr 22, 2010 / singingbird - Apr 24, 2010
|The Warrior (telling a story): mark-up my essay and give any advice
2 - When you insert an "extra" word or phrase, use a comma on each side: My son, Nathaniell, was two...
Writing Feedbackreannen77 - Apr 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2010
|TOEFL essay: It is more important to work at a job that you enjoy...
5 - Well, you write very well now and have a large vocabulary. The level of skill you have now is...
Writing FeedbackAzeri - Apr 20, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2010
|Looking back for an understanding of the past
4 - I'll scratch out the first part, because it does not make sense: It is such point of view that...
Writing Feedbackvincentcgs - Apr 22, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2010
|Solutions for traffic problems - using public transportation system
2 - In between the first and second sentence, it would be great to add another sentence to help introduce the...
Writing FeedbackSarareh - Apr 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 23, 2010
|How to Make a Good Presentation
2 - You should begin sketching out the presentation first. And most presentations have three...(I suggest you do not use "and"...
Writing Feedbackbeginer - Apr 22, 2010 / thuong_lethi - Apr 23, 2010
|A Country's Development Should Thrive on Education
Writing Feedbackvivien_wang - Apr 21, 2010 / thuong_lethi - Apr 23, 2010
|SHOULD MODERN SOCIETY BE CRITICIZED FOR BEING MATERIALISTIC
Writing Feedbacksingingbird - Apr 21, 2010 / singingbird - Apr 22, 2010
|Football match - Creative essay; 'The tension was getting more and more intense'
3 - We were sitting in the dressing room, waiting to go out to Wembley Stadium, the dream stadium of every...
Writing FeedbackAlexjewkes - Apr 21, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2010
|[IELTS-TASK1]Multi-chart Music Preference
6 - Yep. Some writers are skillful enough that they can get away with breaking the rules. When you write...
Writing Feedbackvivien_wang - Apr 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2010
|'students' interests in culture learning'; Learning A Language Through Culture
4 - Ha ha, yeah, you are right. So the most powerful communicators speak in proverbs, like Yoda. "Do, or...
Writing Feedbackvivien_wang - Apr 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Apr 22, 2010
|TOEFL:living in the dormitories or in an apartment
5 - Sorry, I didn't read carefully directions to your essay. This is probably another type of toefl essays, that I...
Writing Feedbackdjanat - Apr 16, 2010 / Azeri - Apr 22, 2010
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