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|Comparing Christine and Penny essay
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|"Designing a hero" - essay about Linda Segers, "Creating the Myth"
2 - Good afternoon. Because this essay deals with specific material that you and your classmates have exclusive access to...
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|My teachers and the teacher's day - essay
NEW - Students and teachers are always on the different bank of the lake. Just like how it goes in my...
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|Choices that define us and Haunt Us Essay
2 - Good morning. The second essay is better constructed and more organized, so I have edited it here: ...
Writing Feedbacktomotomo - Sep 30, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 1, 2008
|Writing an essay about essay - Revising
2 - Good morning. Since the prompt for this assignment was not posted, I can edit for grammar and mechanics...
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|Four ways to control stress, take up a hobbies, exercise regularly, set realistic goals, etc.
2 - Controlling Stress In other words, having fun with family and friends ...If this is the conclusion to the...
Writing Feedbacktimka - Sep 30, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 30, 2008
|Three main reasons that have inspired me to continue my education
4 - I think with the corrections this essay will answer the prompt easily. Your thinking and writing skills are illustrated,...
Writing Feedbackvaldezs - Sep 29, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 29, 2008
|obstacles (definition essay)
2 - Good evening. What is/are the prompt/specifics for this assignment? I am afraid I will need more details to...
Writing Feedbackestherq0901 - Sep 28, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 28, 2008
|Memoir - Analysis of how music changed my life for AP11 English
NEW - Sarah Joncas Nothing's Gonna Change My World Everyone has a favorite song, one that he or she...
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|"americanism means to be proud" - essay
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|Naturalism in all of its naked horror - essay
2 - Good evening. Well, you've definately gotten a topic, haven't you? :) Don't be afraid, it's just a fancy...
Writing Feedbackkaytee - Sep 27, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 27, 2008
|Speed essay - free interpretation
NEW - Hi, can you help me look through this? Thank you! Racing Speed Daemons The rain slicked down...
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|Becoming whistleblowers - Honesty and what we sacrifice
2 - Good evening. "What we sacrifice definitely reveals what we care about the most. I am living in Vietnam....
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 25, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
|Fear of Change - The Lottery Essay
3 - Good afternoon. Without having access to the lecture and notes, I have to say I think you've fulfilled...
Writing FeedbackBradlays - Sep 24, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
|AODAI - MY NATIONAL COSTUME - description paragraph
Writing Feedbackglass2611 - Sep 23, 2008 / glass2611 - Sep 25, 2008
|Essay about the effects of participation in a sport?
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|Debate Essay: Human Cloning Research
NEW - Human Cloning Research The scene of this conversation takes place at Sacramento State University science clubroom. This is...
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|"This is the worst economy I've ever seen." - Personal Essay
3 - Thank you very much for the critique :) Much appreciated! I would say this forum is really helpful for...
Writing Feedbackkids_jessy - Sep 24, 2008 / kids_jessy - Sep 24, 2008
|Diego Maradona. When people succeed, it is because of hard work.
NEW - " When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success". Do you...
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|Health promotion - Article Summary
4 - That depends on the citation style your instructor/institution requires. Once you find that out you can do a quick...
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|'Suicide / LA Diaries' - Essay On A Time In My Life I Felt Desperate
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|Death Didn't Choose Me - THESIS
6 - I'm sorry you couldn't find the assistance you were looking for here; unfortunately, we do not rewrite or create...
Writing Feedbacklokitongue - Sep 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 24, 2008
|Rubik's cube - having trouble with a conclusion
NEW - Could you please give me any grammar mistakes in this essay. Also I am having trouble writing the conclusion,...
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|Snippet Essay, Mita point, Okinawa, Japan.
NEW - Please review this essay for grammar and content. Its my rough draft. The main guideline for this essay is...
Writing Feedbackmichaelfrye1970 - Sep 24, 2008 / — -
|The Good Sides of the Internet Invention
NEW - Internet good sides. "For me, one of the best moments of the 20th century is the invention of...
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|"Dear Joe" - an unhappy experience - essay help
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|Two seasons winter, and fall - check if I ramble, and puncuation
NEW - Prompt: two seasons winter,and fall Note: My teacher wanted me to combine 2 of my paragraphs, without a...
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|"How Advertising Interferes with Parenting - Grammer and logical fallacies
NEW - I have to turn in this paper tomorrow, Its on how advertising effects how we raise our children. I...
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|L.A. brothers - "This is now your new home, welcome home!"
NEW - hello, i made this essay and i had trouble putting more metaphors in it. can u help me change...
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|Super Size Me! - Movie reponse/ Most memorable part
3 - There is one answer: fast food. Super Size Me! The statement immediately provokes the question inside me: Why...
Writing Feedbackmacho - Sep 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|Studying through a computer or studying in school (what students prefer)
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|The Obstinate Man -- Essay on knowing vs. believing and opining vs. ignoran
2 - Good afternoon. What is the prompt for this essay? What kind of assistance are you looking for? ...
Writing Feedbackranman - Sep 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|Essay on addiction - what does it mean?
4 - How about something like "Lesser Known Addictions" or "Addicted to Technology"? You're welcome....
Writing Feedbackrivoltaleandro - Sep 20, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 21, 2008
|Movie review essay "The Pursuit of Happyness"
NEW - Please look this over for me and tell me what you think. I would appreciate any changes in grammer...
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|Beautiful death of Hektor
NEW - Hey, I was just wondering if you could correct my essay for grammar and whether I proved my thesis....
Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Sep 19, 2008 / — -
|Studying abroad: seeking better opportunities for students?
NEW - I have some questions. I was certainly effected I do not get why using 'effected' instead of 'affected'...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 19, 2008 / — -
|"forced to build...the Fort" - Personal Experience
NEW - Hi does my essay sound tight enough and is my thesis pretty clear. Thank you so much for taking...
Writing FeedbackCavortingChickn - Sep 18, 2008 / — -
|The Freedom Writers Diary - Why it is Important to Read such Novels
NEW - Yes, I feel it is important for readers to read such novels within the school system because it inspires...
Writing Feedbackaioghps - Sep 18, 2008 / — -
|COLLECTIVE STORY about my Family; Father's & Mother's Side
NEW - This is my narrative about my family that tells the collective story of them. If someone could edit any...
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|Essay: "Video surveilance is essential"
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|Literary Response on "The man who loved levittown" by wheatherall
2 - Good morning. It looks like you are on the right track. Your questions are leading to a close...
Writing Feedbackjeseniainsc - Sep 17, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 18, 2008
|Role Model Parent - The Perfect parent-child relationship essay
NEW - I was wondering if someone could read my essay on the characteristics of a Role Model Parent and critique...
Writing Feedbackshan00ts - Sep 17, 2008 / — -
|The story of "Hunters In The Snow" - an essay on arguing from experience
Writing Feedbackjrobertson49 - Sep 17, 2008 / — -
|'Never, never give up' - students meeting obstacles
NEW - This is today essay. Opinion about the expression 'Never, never give up' "Every time I meet obstacles on...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 17, 2008 / — -
|Reduce stress, body and mind; GED Essay - Why people enjoy hobbies
NEW - Could you please advise and comment my essay. I am preparing for GED writing at the moment. Your feed...
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|"My art is me"; Early childhood eassy on creativity
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|Comparative Analysis Essay of Heroes
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|Preconception attitude towards writing
3 - A few thoughts that you could include to make your essay more rounded. Do you think that instructors do...
Writing Feedbackkincade - Sep 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 16, 2008
|Many people base on advertising to assess things. Getting know about a country.
2 - Let's see: "Many people use advertising as a base to assess things. To me, advertising is not reliable...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 15, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 15, 2008
|More education than required at job site equals dissatisfaction? - essay
NEW - People who receive more education than they need to function their jobs will feel dissatisfaction. Do you agree or...
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|Drunk - sad story
Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Sep 15, 2008 / — -
|I am essay - being a baseball player and being a guitar player
2 - Your essay is disorganized. Try taking one subject at a time, discuss it, and then move on to the...
Writing Feedbackgo cardinals - Sep 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 14, 2008
|Essay: "the Father of Medical Healthcare" - Tommy Douglas
4 - Good evening. What kind of assistance are you seeking? Usually essays posted to this forum are rough drafts...
Writing Feedbacklozer244 - Dec 20, 2007 / EF_Team5 - Sep 12, 2008
|Are real events, real people, and established facts the best for studying?
2 - You're welcome. ... real people, and established facts. ...books will provide me the ability to imagine, the motivation...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 12, 2008
|What Morrow has to say about writing history; Essay for Time Magzine article
3 - Here is what I have so far, it someone could please peer edit and give suggestions I would greatly...
Writing Feedbackldixon - Sep 9, 2008 / ldixon - Sep 12, 2008
|UF Essay - exited about the maturing experience
Writing Feedbackmollyrama09 - Sep 11, 2008 / mollyrama09 - Sep 11, 2008
|Plato "The Republic" essay topic " what does Plato mena by "do better then"
Writing FeedbackEka - Sep 10, 2008 / Eka - Sep 11, 2008
|Some people trust their first impression about a person, while some do not.
2 - Thank you, Gloria. Can you help me figure out why 'gaining experiences' in the introduction paragraph is ok...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 9, 2008 / jerry - Sep 11, 2008
|Playing game is not only fun if I win - there are many other factors I prefer in playing a game
2 - "Some people think that a game cannot be fun without winning. Whenever I play soccer, it brings me...
Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 10, 2008
|'Sound of a man and a woman' - Freshman Composition 1 essay
2 - I think your diction and your use of active verbs is pretty good; you use varied sentence beginnings; your...
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