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|Annual expenditure in Scotland - comparing pie charts
2 - Hi Agus, I have read your writing closely. There I found a few things you are supposed to fix...
Writing Feedbackagus_mono - Mar 29, 2017 / akbarmappiare - Mar 29, 2017
|Argumentative essay "International students should not be allowed to work while study in Aus."
3 - Philip, your essay has a number of grammatical problems. The first problem, is your fondness for using the word...
Writing FeedbackPhilipfeng - Mar 29, 2017 / Holt - Mar 29, 2017
|The advantages of current twenty-first-century technological developments on the society
2 - @venkat_writting hay Venkat, your idea on your essay quite good, but there are several problems that i found on...
Writing Feedbackvenkat_writting - Mar 29, 2017 / agus_mono - Mar 29, 2017
|IELTS TASK 2: environmental topic, fossil fuels / other forms of energy
6 - For help use these websites : 1. ieltsmaterial (Writing task 1 and 2 samples are really good) 2. ielts-mentor...
Writing FeedbackemIELTS - Mar 29, 2017 / Doel Hasan - Mar 29, 2017
|Minority Languages to Die Out? - IELTS, task2
3 - @Holt :( I was confused about the requirement of the question between giving an evaluation for it and consider...
Writing Feedbacknoura_ama - Mar 29, 2017 / noura_ama - Mar 29, 2017
|TOEFL ESSAY: FAMILY vs FORMAL EDUCATION
5 - Lijing, what you did he was create your own prompt to respond to rather than responding to the prompt...
Writing Feedbacklijing822 - Mar 28, 2017 / Holt - Mar 29, 2017
|If the students are underperforming, it is a sign that they have a bad teacher. Discuss
4 - In your essay you blame the teachers, parents, society, but you don't touch the fact that students can be...
Writing Feedbackvynguyn - Mar 27, 2017 / Rich Monte - Mar 29, 2017
|Learning to play team sports is an important part of a child's education.
3 - Mayank, there is a problem with your opening statement because it does not accurately represent the topic for discussion...
Writing FeedbackMayank7g - Mar 28, 2017 / Holt - Mar 28, 2017
|Writing Task 1: Erosion of a headland - effects of waves in the coastal area
3 - Agus, the essay can probably get a 5 because you managed to present the obvious information in the illustration...
Writing Feedbackagus_mono - Mar 28, 2017 / Holt - Mar 28, 2017
|Should children start learning foreign language earlier?
2 - Good work Lee. You were able to properly assess the topic for discussion, present the reason behind the discussion,...
Writing Feedbackbtho - Mar 27, 2017 / Holt - Mar 27, 2017
|Two Coins - A company to build a large factory near your community
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your nice comments. I really needed for such wonderful feedbacks. :)...
Writing FeedbackFaridNoorzad - Mar 27, 2017 / FaridNoorzad - Mar 27, 2017
|Residential housing - Alteration in America Village between 1994 and 2010
Writing Feedbacktamtamii - Mar 27, 2017 / Holt - Mar 27, 2017
|Two Shops: The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010
3 - halo Mr. @restuanlubis Halo Mr. Restu, actually I get your point about your grouping. However, I can understand...
Writing Feedbackrestuanlubis - Mar 27, 2017 / tamtamii - Mar 27, 2017
|Buildings and environment - The maps and changes in an American town between 1994 and 2010
3 - @Diahkn93 Hi Diah, In my opinion, I think your essay quite difficult to understand (caused by your interpretation). You...
Writing FeedbackDiahkn93 - Mar 27, 2017 / Datnguyen - Mar 27, 2017
|Sports stadium - the changes in an American town between 1948 and 2010.
5 - Andi, your essay does not put all of the information that you were provided with to good use. You...
Writing FeedbackReza_Hidayat - Mar 27, 2017 / Holt - Mar 27, 2017
|People house change - the village of Stokeford in 1930
3 - Hermin, while your paragraphs are well representative of the illustrations provided, you did not really manage to present the...
Writing Feedbacktamtamii - Mar 27, 2017 / Holt - Mar 27, 2017
|New buildings - The maps below show village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010
3 - Diah, excellent work in presenting an original take on the illustrations other than simply stating the mechanically obvious information....
Writing FeedbackDiahkn93 - Mar 27, 2017 / Holt - Mar 27, 2017
|Writing IELTS TASK 2 - Topic: Tourism - influence for visited places.
6 - @yuukinohan4 Thank for your comment, it is very precious with me. I will try to improve in next essay....
Writing FeedbackDatnguyen - Mar 23, 2017 / Datnguyen - Mar 27, 2017
|Change in town - the alteration of Stokeford village in 1930 and 2010.
4 - Septi, you can probably get a score of 5 with this essay. The essay could use some less mechanical...
Writing Feedbackseptyndid - Mar 27, 2017 / Holt - Mar 27, 2017
|IELTS Task 2 - Recent figures shown an increase in violent crime among youngsters
2 - Mayank, the first thing that struck me in your opening statement is the mistake in your term usage. You...
Writing FeedbackMayank7g - Mar 27, 2017 / Holt - Mar 27, 2017
|Celebrating Food - Traditional food will change by fast food ?
4 - Hallo miss nisa, I have some mistakes from your essay. I do not only find many mistakes of your...
Writing FeedbackNisa_sultan - Mar 20, 2017 / tamtamii - Mar 27, 2017
|The different condition of American town in 1948 and 1950
Writing Feedbackkoganta - Mar 27, 2017 / agus_mono - Mar 27, 2017
|Replacing Factories : The map below shows the alteration in an US town between over 62 years
3 - @restuanlubis Pay attention on your word choosen and subject verb agreement: The maps illustrate regarding ... (It will better...
Writing Feedbackrestuanlubis - Mar 27, 2017 / Anhy chan - Mar 27, 2017
|IELTS Task 2_women who do not plan to have careers should be allowed to get post-grad degrees or not
2 - Phone, your opening paragraph was almost perfect. Almost perfect because you dropped the ball in the last sentence. You...
Writing Feedbackzeal - Mar 27, 2017 / Holt - Mar 27, 2017
|Which school facilities should receive money from the local authorities?
3 - Dang, the entire premise of the essay is not clearly presented in the opening statement. The topic for discussion...
Writing Feedbackthunga251090 - Mar 27, 2017 / Holt - Mar 27, 2017
|"The importance of biodiversity" task 2 writng module IELTS
4 - Hi @Sabrena_amal It is really alike with the prompt, even so you really need to paraphrase the...
Writing FeedbackSabrena_amal - Mar 25, 2017 / yuukinohan4 - Mar 26, 2017
|There are several reasons why nuclear technology is really worthwhile for humans life
3 - Hi @anonym28 First of all, please insert the prompt so that essay forum members are able to give you...
Writing Feedbackanonym28 - Mar 23, 2017 / yuukinohan4 - Mar 26, 2017
|Railroads vs Road Budget - IETLS CAMBRIDGE 11 TASK 2
5 - hi @daiha20082009 it should be better to say "carbon dioxide" rather than write the formula Sometimes i...
Writing Feedbackdaiha20082009 - Mar 23, 2017 / yuukinohan4 - Mar 26, 2017
|Ielts task 2 - An increasing trend of living or studing abroad
Writing FeedbackMaitouyen282 - Mar 25, 2017 / yuukinohan4 - Mar 26, 2017
|Writing IELTS TASK 2 - Topic: Paper NEWS importance
Writing FeedbackDatnguyen - Mar 26, 2017 / Datnguyen - Mar 26, 2017
|Fastfood is good or bad for our lives?
5 - @mastindersingh Thank you so much for your support, your comment is very precious to me. I hope next essays...
Writing FeedbackAndreiWindy - Mar 26, 2017 / AndreiWindy - Mar 26, 2017
|Sentence Outline- Top 7 Steps To Make Your IoT More Secure
2 - Roy, your steps 2 and 3 are redundant. If you read the outlines very well, you will discover that...
Writing Feedbacknezumi - Mar 26, 2017 / Holt - Mar 26, 2017
|Which is better for children? to grow up in the countryside or in a big city?
3 - @pirFena In my opinion, your essay is quite good, although sometimes I feel hard to understand. You used Academic...
Writing FeedbackpirFena - Oct 14, 2012 / AndreiWindy - Mar 26, 2017
|Cars on road, climate, and the level of pollution in many cities.
2 - Mayank, save for a number of grammatical problems related to sentence structure and lexical resources, you have presented a...
Writing FeedbackMayank7g - Mar 25, 2017 / Holt - Mar 25, 2017
|People can be closer eachother. How Internet affect on our life?
6 - @hain3dessay @Holt @thunga251090 Thank you very much for your opinions, I will try to improve my writing skill....
Writing FeedbackAndreiWindy - Mar 24, 2017 / AndreiWindy - Mar 25, 2017
|How to support developing countries ?
Writing Feedbackfrenchfries - Mar 25, 2017 / frenchfries - Mar 25, 2017
|IELTS writing task 2. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken?
Writing Feedbackblu - Mar 14, 2017 / Maitouyen282 - Mar 25, 2017
|Flowers are something I feel; One thing to represent human race
Writing Feedbackjennnyyyy - Feb 28, 2013 / Holt - Mar 25, 2017
|TOEFL IBT Independent Writing: Owning smart phones or not? Your point of view
3 - @Holt Thank you, it was very helpful. I will try to rewrite this essay. Could you please take your...
Writing Feedbackhain3dessay - Mar 24, 2017 / hain3dessay - Mar 25, 2017
|Should children do household chares?
Writing FeedbackHilary88 - Mar 24, 2017 / Holt - Mar 25, 2017
|Discussion about young people ignoring some traditional beliefs
Writing Feedbackzeal - Mar 19, 2017 / zeal - Mar 24, 2017
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Is it useless to keep traditional skills and ways of life?
4 - I think you are conscious of using connected words, that is so valuable in your essay. From my experience,...
Writing Feedbackenglishholic - Mar 21, 2017 / daiha20082009 - Mar 24, 2017
|Unhealthy convenience food - Task 2 IELTS Writing module
Writing Feedbackhadeelhekmat - Mar 22, 2017 / blu - Mar 24, 2017
|SOLUTIONS ON CLIMATE CHANGE
5 - Your idea, grammar and vocabulary are really good. But you seem to get the essay requirement wrong. In your...
Writing Feedbackfrenchfries - Mar 24, 2017 / blu - Mar 24, 2017
|Writing IELTS Task2: Topic Food products. Imported or local?
Writing Feedbacknguyensonhdtk94 - Mar 24, 2017 / nguyensonhdtk94 - Mar 24, 2017
|"Pen and Paper Exams - IELTS exam task 2
Writing Feedbackmaya_diab - Mar 23, 2017 / maya_diab - Mar 24, 2017
|[IELTS] Pros and cons of studying abroad
2 - Dang, supply the full prompt for this essay please as it cannot be accurately reviewed without it....
Writing Feedbackxizon7777 - Jun 28, 2014 / Holt - Mar 24, 2017
|IELTS Task 1 : Passing high school competency exams, by subject and gender, from 2010 to 2011
2 - Ani, when you write a chart summary essay, never use fractions to describe the measurements that are given in...
Writing Feedbackaniani - Nov 21, 2015 / Holt - Mar 24, 2017
|Writing IELTS task 2 : Convenience Food and Preparation Time
2 - Frisilia, with this kind of sloppy sentence development and lack of focus on proper grammar presentation, your essay is...
Writing FeedbackFrisilia - Mar 22, 2017 / Holt - Mar 23, 2017
|High school graduate or experience which important to get job?
3 - Nisa, it is very unfortunate that the errors in this essay limits your score to a failing mark of...
Writing FeedbackNisa_sultan - Mar 22, 2017 / Holt - Mar 23, 2017
|Don't be a victim of interview bias
3 - Thien, the clarity of your opinion is lost due to the manner of your discussion. You failed to make...
Writing FeedbackRogerPham - Mar 21, 2017 / Holt - Mar 23, 2017
|Writing 2: Computers replacing teachers / Money Education
2 - Arlenliu, it is of utmost importance that you post the exact prompts of your essay alongside your draft so...
Writing FeedbackArlen - Mar 22, 2017 / okorobiadimma14 - Mar 23, 2017
|Convenience food / city people for writing IELTS task 2
2 - Heru, your essay failed to answer the prompt as it seems you did not understand the requirements of the...
Writing FeedbackTongalere - Mar 22, 2017 / okorobiadimma14 - Mar 23, 2017
|The first day of learning oral English
Writing FeedbackZona - Mar 21, 2017 / d2ny - Mar 22, 2017
|Environment problems, who would be responsible for this? - IELTS essay topic
Writing Feedbackdemi34 - Mar 11, 2017 / demi34 - Mar 21, 2017
|IELTS writing the topic is about laws and society
3 - Hi Michele, I have read your writing closely and found some you have to improve. Please, meet my notes...
Writing Feedbackmichele - Mar 20, 2017 / akbarmappiare - Mar 20, 2017
|Why do we use Smartphones?
3 - You did not point out your statement clearly in the first paragraph, and what is the purpose you write...
Writing Feedbackwealthy life - Dec 3, 2012 / ERIC SUNG - Mar 20, 2017
|The children should be allowed to have smart phones along with maintaining some restrictions - TOEFL
2 - Rajeeb, you cannot discuss this essay by staying in the middle or taking the "up to a certain degree"...
Writing FeedbackTechRinser - Dec 19, 2015 / Holt - Mar 20, 2017
|A Picnic I enjoyed; it was marvellous to leave the grey building of a city behind
2 - Ayreen, when you write a descriptive essay, the first thing you have to learn to do is accurately describe...
Writing Feedbackayreen akrami - Dec 11, 2012 / Holt - Mar 20, 2017
|The honesty importance in a relationship
3 - For me, I CONSIDER HONESTY ESSENTIAL IN ALL ASPECTS OF LIFE, AND TELLING THE TRUTH FORMS A LARGE PART...
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