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|Ielts Task 2 Topic: computer skills after writing, reading and maths
2 - @Nhu Tran When you write your paraphrased statement, it would be best if you do so with a clear...
Writing FeedbackNhu Tran - Aug 23, 2017 / Holt - Aug 23, 2017
|Writing task 1 (IELTS). Process of coffee manufacturing
Writing Feedbackngangiang - Aug 21, 2017 / minhphuccttv - Aug 23, 2017
|[IELTS writing task 2] Online shopping: discuss both sides and give your opinion.
3 - @Holt Thank you so much. Your advice is really helpful and important to me. I'm desperately trying to understand...
Writing Feedbackhgianghgiang - Aug 22, 2017 / hgianghgiang - Aug 23, 2017
|[Toefl] Buying a new technological device right away is better than waiting until many people...
4 - Matthew, I enjoyed reading your essay, and you have a clear view of what you are stating. You do...
Writing FeedbackKatthew Kim - Aug 17, 2017 / sumthegoat - Aug 22, 2017
|IELTS Writing Task 2 : Studying History - what's the aim of it?
2 - Valery, your essay became a personal opinion paper because you did not accurately represent the paraphrased statement as requiring...
Writing Feedbackvalerydang - Aug 22, 2017 / Holt - Aug 22, 2017
|GRE argument essay. Prunty County and highway safety.
Writing Feedbackiaryansingh - Aug 19, 2017 / iaryansingh - Aug 22, 2017
|TOPIC - CAUSES AND SOLUTIONS OF THE RISING UNEMPLOYMENT RATE
3 - @MandyTran Hi Tran, your essay impressed me with decent vocabulary in the introduction, but as I processed through the...
Writing FeedbackMandyTran - Aug 22, 2017 / hgianghgiang - Aug 22, 2017
|The best method to decrease the number of traffic jams.
3 - Phuc, there are a number of serious problems with your essay that has affected the possible final score that...
Writing Feedbackminhphuccttv - Aug 22, 2017 / Holt - Aug 22, 2017
|(IELTS TASK 2) The public should be encouraged to use public transportation more. Give your opinio
7 - Hi Emin, your essay appears to be of low level, thus low band score for the following reasons: -...
Writing Feedbackeminhaqi - Aug 21, 2017 / hgianghgiang - Aug 22, 2017
|The share of Oscar winners by genre film for 2003 and 2008
2 - Kien, your essay is missing the most important part, the summary overview. While there is no specific spot for...
Writing Feedbacktrungkienpeter - Aug 22, 2017 / Holt - Aug 22, 2017
|CAE Essay Part 1: Methods schools and universities use to help students find suitable jobs
Writing FeedbackHanh Ngoc - Aug 21, 2017 / minhphuccttv - Aug 22, 2017
|A comparison and projection of five-decade populations between Yemen and Italy
3 - Philo, it is difficult for me to review the work that you did in this essay because you forgot...
Writing Feedbackalfabio - Aug 21, 2017 / Holt - Aug 22, 2017
|[TOEFL] Which do you prefer, traveling with a companion or alone?
2 - Liu, when you write your essays, make sure that you always speak in completed paragraphs. That means, each thought...
Writing FeedbackJayde - Aug 21, 2017 / Holt - Aug 22, 2017
|[IELTS writing task 2] Rising pressure on students, positive or negative?
2 - Nguyen, the strength of your essay lies in the method by which you discuss the body of paragraphs. The...
Writing Feedbackhgianghgiang - Aug 21, 2017 / Holt - Aug 21, 2017
|[IELTS Writing task 1] What UK graduate and postgraduate students did after leaving college in 2008?
3 - @BADJ You did a very good job in presenting the information from the charts on an individual and comparative...
Writing FeedbackBADJ - Aug 21, 2017 / Holt - Aug 21, 2017
|IELTS Writing task 2; some people think that social networking sites have a damaging effect
4 - Good article with construction. Here are my personal views. 1.I think it will be better if we answer...
Writing Feedbacktuanminhnguyen - Aug 21, 2017 / Goldenjohnny - Aug 21, 2017
|IELTs Task2: Advantages and disadvantages do home computers have for children
2 - Van, it is unfortunate that you forgot to upload the complete original prompt instructions along with your response essay....
Writing FeedbackVan Trang - Aug 21, 2017 / Holt - Aug 21, 2017
|IELTS Task2. Is 24-hour television a good thing? Or it may bring some harm.
3 - @Holt Oh, you're right! I was confused by the two words, positive and negative, and jumped into writing immediately....
Writing FeedbackGoldenjohnny - Aug 21, 2017 / Goldenjohnny - Aug 21, 2017
|[TASK 1] Consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European nation
4 - thank you for helping me a lot @Holt and @hgianghgiang I have to spend more time on writing as...
Writing Feedbackminh2310 - Aug 18, 2017 / minh2310 - Aug 21, 2017
|To succeed, It is necessary to make sure that others know about your strengths or accomplishments.
4 - @sweetkick Well, I think you do have a clear mindset in organizing your article. While I am not a...
Writing Feedbacksweetkick - Aug 19, 2017 / Goldenjohnny - Aug 21, 2017
|IELTS Writing Task 2: should information be freely accessible?
3 - Long, this essay will get an automatic failing score. It will not pass any of the criteria for consideration...
Writing Feedbackhaugiangguny - Aug 20, 2017 / Holt - Aug 21, 2017
|This simple electronic deveice should be banned in school. Do you agree or not.
Writing Feedbackfastweb - Aug 20, 2017 / Holt - Aug 20, 2017
|Salary must be consider top priority in choosing a job. Do you agree or disagree with this statement
3 - Kim, did you post the complete prompt instructions along with your essay response? It does not seem like you...
Writing FeedbackMimi123 - Aug 20, 2017 / Holt - Aug 20, 2017
|Ad vs disad of a young population - IELTS task 2 essay
3 - @Holt I'm truly thankful for your remark. Regarding your advice on opening and concluding statements, I was following some...
Writing Feedbackxbb84 - Aug 20, 2017 / xbb84 - Aug 20, 2017
|4 creteria: Coherence and cohesion, Lexical resource, Grammar, Task respond and comment
2 - Hi wind0111, Is the essay requirement correct? In my opinion, there are basic grammar errors in this topic...
Writing Feedbackwind0111 - Aug 20, 2017 / sarahna - Aug 20, 2017
|Museums are interesting mostly for tourists not locals. Reasons and solutions?
2 - Richard, this is a good essay with some slight problems. The first problem, is that you mentioned that there...
Writing Feedbackbangyeuemlam - Aug 19, 2017 / Holt - Aug 19, 2017
|ESSAY: Downloading songs and books is considered a crime. Do you agree or disagree?
2 - Nguyen, this is a very well developed discussion of a controversial topic. Your statements have made a mark on...
Writing Feedbacktianangbandem - Aug 19, 2017 / Holt - Aug 19, 2017
|The percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents.
3 - Yulia, there are number of problems with your essay that indicate a possible failing score for it in an...
Writing FeedbackYulia Indah - Aug 19, 2017 / Holt - Aug 19, 2017
|IELTS Task 2 [direct question] Why do people want to research their family history?
5 - @Danstand Thank you for your word choice corrections. I'll fix those mistakes in my second draft. Hope you can...
Writing FeedbackLinh Tran - Aug 18, 2017 / Linh Tran - Aug 19, 2017
|Ielts 2: Comic, Books, Radio, TV, Film, Theater - Advantages and disavantages.
2 - @tran14 I think your essay is good but you need to cross-check your vocabulary and sentence structure for example,...
Writing Feedbacktran14 - Aug 19, 2017 / LAudrey - Aug 19, 2017
|Should young people follow traditions of their society or be free to behave as they will?
3 - @Holt Thank you for giving me so many constructive suggestions about IELTS writing! I have been struggling for improvement...
Writing FeedbackGoldenjohnny - Aug 19, 2017 / Goldenjohnny - Aug 19, 2017
|Gender equality at schools controversial topic research
Writing Feedbacknguyenthibichhan - Aug 18, 2017 / nguyenthibichhan - Aug 18, 2017
|Map of Brandfield. New shopping mall project.
Writing Feedbacktran14 - Aug 18, 2017 / tran14 - Aug 18, 2017
|The table and the pie chart below shows the numbers of visitors and the survey of satisfaction.
5 - Hello Try In your writing has many mistakes: The table with a set of data present => presents,...
Writing FeedbackTryToImprove - Aug 12, 2017 / minhphuccttv - Aug 18, 2017
|Working from home: Effects? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
5 - Hello Giang, Here is my view on your essay: modern employees => recent employees, conventional => general,...
Writing Feedbackhgianghgiang - Aug 16, 2017 / minhphuccttv - Aug 18, 2017
|The number of passenger in three distinct types of railway in The United Kingdom
3 - You need to attach the illustration once you submit your work because withou it, we hardly can help you...
Writing FeedbackAhmad1103 - Aug 17, 2017 / tran14 - Aug 18, 2017
|(IELTS) Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities
5 - @Holt Hello Mary Rose, Thank you very much for your feedback. It is really detail and useful to my...
Writing FeedbackSerena11 - Aug 17, 2017 / Serena11 - Aug 18, 2017
|Ielts; demand for electricity in England, common consumer usage
Writing Feedbacktran14 - Aug 16, 2017 / tran14 - Aug 18, 2017
|Some say that combative sports should be left out from the school curriculum, I disagree.
Writing Feedbackzeal - Aug 16, 2017 / zeal - Aug 17, 2017
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] The charts below show the comparison of water usage for three important
3 - Abdul, your summary overview must include the type of measurement being used in the pie charts (percentages) and the...
Writing Feedbackhenryo2 - Aug 16, 2017 / Holt - Aug 17, 2017
|America the Land of the Confined
3 - Sage, I don't get the point of this research paper. The extremely ill formatted opening paragraph does not contain...
Writing Feedbacksagecamp - Aug 16, 2017 / Holt - Aug 16, 2017
|IELTS Task 2 Topic: sports events. Type: Discuss both view
2 - Anh, there is a clear disconnection between what the original essay instructions are and what you are discussing in...
Writing FeedbackNhu Tran - Aug 16, 2017 / Holt - Aug 16, 2017
|Job satisfaction and how to have job satisfaction from all workers
3 - Annie, you misunderstood the last question in the prompt. The question relates to whether or not an employee can...
Writing FeedbackAnnie Tran 162 - Aug 16, 2017 / Holt - Aug 16, 2017
|Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. Agree?
Writing FeedbackSkynet - Aug 16, 2017 / Skynet - Aug 16, 2017
|IELTS task 2 - The pros and cons of being watched
2 - Jennie, you used the wrong representation in the final sentence of you opening paraphrase. It is important that you...
Writing Feedbackchopresident981 - Aug 16, 2017 / Holt - Aug 16, 2017
|Ielts task 2, topic: management, type, money reward: Discuss and solution.
4 - Hi @tran14, I think you essay is good,but you have some grammar mistake like: this act: this action...
Writing Feedbacktran14 - Aug 16, 2017 / Nhu Tran - Aug 16, 2017
|Methods of measuring learning in educational settings
5 - Nguyen, you are only being asked for your opinion about exams. Therefore, there was no requirement for you to...
Writing Feedbackchocuatt - Aug 16, 2017 / Holt - Aug 16, 2017
|Besides making money, enterprises should also have public responsibilities
3 - Bui, here is something that you need to know about the prompt requirements. Unless the instruction says "Discuss both...
Writing Feedbackchauanhbui99 - Aug 15, 2017 / Holt - Aug 16, 2017
|The benefits of teaching art, music or ports subjects at schools
4 - @Holt Dear Holt, thank you so much for your comment, I realized that I should learn more and more...
Writing FeedbackThuHangLC - Aug 15, 2017 / ThuHangLC - Aug 16, 2017
|A permanent job and work under same company for the whole life
3 - 1) Your introduction contains too many details that are not really necessary. Just paraphrase the topic and give your...
Writing FeedbackMimi123 - Aug 15, 2017 / tran14 - Aug 16, 2017
|Apartment vs. Dormitory - University student living
Writing Feedbacktrongtuan441996 - Aug 14, 2017 / trongtuan441996 - Aug 15, 2017
|I have just graduated from Hue University of Education - autopresentation
2 - @Tran Trinh the subject is Physics, with an S at the end, not Physic as you mistakenly spell it...
Writing FeedbackTran Trinh - Aug 15, 2017 / Holt - Aug 15, 2017
|How many tonnes of goods were transported in the UK over a 28-year period
2 - Anh, the presentation has a number of minor problems that need to be addressed. For the summary overview, you...
Writing Feedbacktienanh - Aug 15, 2017 / Holt - Aug 15, 2017
|Chinese Civil War. Major historical events have powerful impact to people.
Writing Feedbacktoseanliu - Aug 15, 2017 / Holt - Aug 15, 2017
|Working while studying pfenomenon.
3 - Liu, it would be in your best interest to always post the complete prompt and not just the discussion...
Writing Feedbacktoseanliu - Aug 15, 2017 / Holt - Aug 15, 2017
|Ban for fast food adverts? [WRITING TASK 2]The best way to prevent obesity in children!
3 - Phuc, did you use an online translator for your essay? It sounds that bad. There is no way that...
Writing Feedbackminhphuccttv - Aug 15, 2017 / Holt - Aug 15, 2017
|Leadership skills: Some people could be naturally good leaders. Or people just can learn leadership?
2 - Vu, when you are given a "2 points of view plus personal opinion" instruction, you must never combine your...
Writing FeedbackVu Thanh - Aug 15, 2017 / Holt - Aug 15, 2017
|Travel during Public Holidays - Problems & Solutions
4 - Holt, I'm sorry if the request mentioned above is offensive to you. I didn't mean any kind of privilege...
Writing Feedbackearlnguyen - Aug 13, 2017 / earlnguyen - Aug 15, 2017
|[Toefl] It is crucial for youngsters to have the planning and organizing skills.
4 - @Katthew Kim These are a few comments for you and I hope it is helpful. Firstly, the opening paragraph...
Writing FeedbackKatthew Kim - Aug 14, 2017 / Mimi123 - Aug 15, 2017
|IT IS BETTER TO SPEAK WELL RATHER THAN TO WRITE WELL IN OUR WORK/LIFE
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