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Give reasons and make suggestions. unemployment problem , reasons and solutions.

3 - One of serious issues associated with this change is the high young unemployment rate among young people, which in...

Writing Feedbackcathyliu - Feb 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 18, 2010
Revising and ideas..How has your childhood shaped you as a writer

4 - As a child, I was encouraged to be open, focused, as well as descriptive in everything that I did;...

Writing Feedbackashleyfloyd - Feb 17, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 18, 2010
Some people prefer home theater, others cinema at hall, discuss. IELTS GT

3 - hai, Can't you introduce with some dialogue on movie,than starting with your agreement? Even one can review some more...

Writing Feedbackusalma2002 - Feb 17, 2010 / remya - Feb 18, 2010
achieving happiness through relationships - IELTS ESSAY

6 - Thank you sir.I will take care of these mistakes next time....

Writing Feedbackremya - Feb 17, 2010 / remya - Feb 18, 2010
Inspiration Essay about a Broadway star

2 - Not many girls get the opportunity to meet the one person who they idolize, and the one person who...

Writing FeedbackDanni Nicole - Feb 17, 2010 / EF_Susan - Feb 18, 2010
Toefl essay: Grades represent a proper way of motivating and encouraging students to learn

3 - Hi, very well written, but i am not clear with your conclusion para. it helps students know their advantages...

Writing Feedbacklizzielu17 - Feb 12, 2010 / Poojasugandhi - Feb 17, 2010
Reasons to attend college or university -(TOEFL) Writing practice

2 - Hi, are you preparing for the toefl ibt?? Then your essay is incomplete. You should follow proper pattern for...

Writing FeedbackMasterSci - Feb 17, 2010 / Poojasugandhi - Feb 17, 2010
Do you agree or disagree? a jury has access to the defendant's past record

5 - These mistakes should be cleaned up: or BE BETTER INFORMED TO JUDGE OTHER...

Writing Feedbackcathyliu - Feb 14, 2010 / linmark - Feb 17, 2010
Why Life Insurance important? - It has many benefits

6 - I didn't realized how important it is until my grandmother passed away late last year. I feel like...

Writing Feedbackjaneypooh - Feb 12, 2010 / Randyhl - Feb 17, 2010
Smoking at public place should be banned. Argumental essay for IELTS GT

8 - Thank you, Kevin. You really have got the power to raise one's confidence higher. Thanks again for your overwhelming...

Writing Feedbackusalma2002 - Feb 14, 2010 / usalma2002 - Feb 16, 2010
First Impressions from Lasting Impressions (tattoos and piercings essay)

3 - Tattoos and piercings have been around for many years they are even found in the bible as a marking...

Writing Feedbackmonkeygirl76 - Feb 15, 2010 / Nets - Feb 16, 2010
Argu: discuss disad./ad. business and cultral contact bt countries,&your opinion

3 - an intensive discussion on whether it is a positive development or a negative one. Undoubtedly, there is a...

Writing Feedbackcathyliu - Feb 16, 2010 / EF_Susan - Feb 16, 2010
TOEFL - I believe people can get more knowledge from books

3 - This is because books contain more information and knowledge, and people can learn from past. ---- yes, learning from...

Writing Feedbackchlghdgus - Feb 15, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 16, 2010
mobile phones is destroying social interaction. Do you agree? IELTS GT essay

3 - "Due to the contribution of technology, like other electronic devices, mobile phone has penetrated in our daily lives. Application...

Writing Feedbackusalma2002 - Feb 16, 2010 / cathyliu - Feb 16, 2010
About A New Education Essay

8 - When kids are first taught calculus they're usually introduced to something called the 'limiting process'. Say, when we graph...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - Jan 13, 2010 / Rajiv - Feb 16, 2010
Thomas (Tommy) Clement Douglas Essay Gr.10

8 - Well, the essay is your contribution to the site, so that people can find examples of good writing and...

Writing Feedbackcherry99 - Feb 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 15, 2010
Narrative essay about an experience that has changed the way I lean

3 - Good sentence!! Actually, see which one you like more... that way, or this: As I shyly made my...

Writing Feedbackjmoreh10 - Feb 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 15, 2010
It is unrealistic for people to work at the same company for their entire lives.

4 - is this toefl essay? i think this essay is not long enough you should give examples and you...

Writing Feedbacknetseung - Feb 15, 2010 / chlghdgus - Feb 15, 2010
Narrative Essay About My Grandmother - Feedback

2 - Your title of a narrative essay is very broad. What else do you want to communicate besides general narration...

Writing Feedbackchocolatepap - Feb 14, 2010 / linmark - Feb 15, 2010
The new use for salicylates reduce number of headaches

5 - Thanks for your comments! You give me some confidence to deal with GRE analytical writing test!...

Writing Feedbackxymivy - Feb 8, 2010 / xymivy - Feb 15, 2010
Foster Care definition essay - grammatical assistance requested.

4 - Thanks guys you rock! I may have over done it with the commas, but I tried to add in...

Writing FeedbackChillkindacat - Feb 13, 2010 / Chillkindacat - Feb 15, 2010
Taking vacation is one of the most important needs of each student.

4 - Short or long vacation, does not matter. The importance is to take advantage from the free time. In conclusion,...

Writing Feedbacknabg - Feb 13, 2010 / cathyliu - Feb 14, 2010
"Good night daddy, I love you too" - Historical Narritive Essay

2 - Use commas whenever you have 2 or more adjectives in a row: make a gentle arc into the flat,...

Writing Feedbackmsdenna - Feb 13, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 14, 2010
Opinion on famous people's personal news, their hobbies in the media - IELTS

2 - In open market economy, all businessmen want to make money selling items that are in demand - regardless of...

Writing Feedbackusalma2002 - Feb 13, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 13, 2010
"a great nation indicator" - GRE Issue essay

2 - Recently means "not very long ago" I'm going to take GRE analysis writing test soon. Would you please help...

Writing Feedbackchencong0320 - Feb 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 13, 2010
Schools are the only place to receive true education? toefl essay

4 - thank you very much~:)...

Writing Feedbackchlghdgus - Feb 11, 2010 / chlghdgus - Feb 12, 2010
My Last weekend: "working around the house"

3 - Capitalize Internet. ...by watching TV and various kinds of movies. I really enjoyed my weekend this way...

Writing Feedbackserkitinati - Feb 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 12, 2010
The surest indicator of a great nation, welfare, GRE Issue Writing

2 - I think you should add one more sentence to that first paragraph. After telling the 2 different opinions, you...

Writing Feedbackjuliachen - Feb 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 12, 2010
Issue of local concern - parent-child relationship

4 - The essay is very good, except for the story you told about the little girl. It doesnt capture the...

Writing Feedbackjjinko - Feb 11, 2010 / RShemanski - Feb 12, 2010
"I want a wife" - is it a good tittle?

4 - I want a wife is really amazing title. and you did a good job. i have nothing to say...

Writing Feedbackanwarhazamah - Feb 5, 2010 / serkitinati - Feb 12, 2010
The Hijab: Friend or foe? (argumentative essay on 2 authors essays)

7 - make your opinion clear. Make the opinion mara longer. The reader really wants to know what YOUR thoughts are....

Writing FeedbackJoeyson - Jan 25, 2010 / sineadkachroo - Feb 12, 2010
Maternity and faternity - correct my essay and give some suggestions

4 - It is thoughtful, and your topic sentences do express the meaning of the paragraph as they are supposed to,...

Writing Feedbackabduoo - Feb 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 11, 2010
My best friend (despite of living in different countries)

5 - Thank you so much Yani....

Writing Feedbackserkitinati - Feb 7, 2010 / serkitinati - Feb 11, 2010
Toefl; Do clothes have any influence on how people behave?

7 - SHABAIL thank you, Sharla , you really give me a good advice, I'll try that. Sometimes I just...

Writing Feedbacknicol018nie - Feb 9, 2010 / nicol018nie - Feb 10, 2010
GRE Essay on::Success in any realm of life comes more often from taking ..

2 - Success is the ultimate goal most people work for. Success has its own definition and limits for individuals. Some...

Writing Feedbackprakashraj - Feb 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 10, 2010
"Imagination is not enough. Knowledge is necessary." - GAMSAT essay practices

4 - thank you so much guys! I will work on your suggestions....

Writing Feedbackkumara - Feb 7, 2010 / kumara - Feb 9, 2010
'no control' - The mass media and their influence on people's ideas

7 - hmm! not bad for a bigginer ,but i think you only concertrated on the image the media potrays,check things...

Writing Feedbacktramhuong - Feb 5, 2010 / BORE - Feb 9, 2010
LEGALIZATION OF SAME SEX MARRIAGE - revise my introduction, argumentative paper.

32 - I personally would simply talk about the essence of human rights; how essentially we are all equal and that...

Writing FeedbackBrianne - Oct 16, 2009 / Envie - Feb 9, 2010
Theory of Knowledge Essay- Comparing scientific and historical facts

2 - They use very strict approaches when looking for the "truth." However, the problem with history is that it...

Writing Feedbacksaad91 - Feb 7, 2010 / jen50192 - Feb 8, 2010
Toefl essay: Mass media influences people's ideas

NEW - Hope you guys give feedbacks to my essay.thank you so much. have a nice day! The mass media,including...

Writing Feedbackgreentea93 - Feb 8, 2010 / — -
Essay about My Classmate from Cambodia

5 - Luong and Allen, great job here! Thanks for the excellent contributions you make to help others at EF....

Writing FeedbackPov - Feb 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 5, 2010
'I studied in the Philippines'; Spending money on travelling or saving?

7 - Thanks your advice :) I'll keep my mind...

Writing Feedbackduke616 - Feb 2, 2010 / duke616 - Feb 5, 2010
Competition or cooperation---GRE ANALYSIS WRITING ISSUE

3 - Thanks,Kevin! I wil keep on working!...

Writing Feedbacklola2010 - Feb 2, 2010 / lola2010 - Feb 4, 2010
Editorial on Martin Luther King Day

4 - Hahahahahah hah, you are funny... Yeah, I think everyone should be a die hard mlk fan. And...

Writing FeedbackNotoman - Feb 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 4, 2010
Cool vs uncool - an argumentive definition essay

7 - really good essay, i just feel that you said the word cool about 19 too many times maybe try...

Writing FeedbackJoeyson - Feb 2, 2010 / Rachach6 - Feb 3, 2010
essay about yasser arafat

5 - Yes, I see that Paradokht already told you to capitalize proper nouns. Also, write Nobel Prize, not...

Writing Feedbackzahoora - Feb 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 2, 2010
work that one finds fulfilling or work that pays well? Van Gogh, C.Marx examples

3 - Yes, add a sentence to the end of that first paragraph. Make it a sentence that answers the question...

Writing FeedbackODIE - Feb 1, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 2, 2010
Machiavelli and Lao Tzu - compare and contrast essay

2 - Check verse 17 of the Tao. I see that you ended this essay with an inaccurate statement about what...

Writing Feedbacklink2314 - Jan 31, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 2, 2010
Trying to be "Little Miss Perfect" - Can someone give me feedback on this essay

3 - Let's do this part in the past tense and omit some unnecessary words: I feel that I have always...

Writing Feedbackcjharris24 - Jan 31, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 1, 2010
Why do you want to be a part of Teach for India?

5 - as a process to not only to sharpen our brain but...

Writing Feedbackvineela - Jan 17, 2010 / niloo - Feb 1, 2010
Experience is the best teacher - THE RELATIVE VALUES OF EXPERIENTIAL AND ACADEMIC LEARNING

3 - Very well written essay...good balance. ...

Writing FeedbackTAL - Jan 26, 2010 / Wanderer_x - Jan 31, 2010
the trend:throw away old one instead of repairing. causes and effects?

6 - Maybe it will take a few days to get a response. I'll try to find out about it for...

Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Jan 27, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 29, 2010
tobacco adverts should be banned?

13 - :-) hahah, right on. Now you know what I meant. "Sump" is a funny word....

Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Jan 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 29, 2010
'bedroom is essential' Toefl essay: The most important room in your house

4 - Nowadays, life is getting more and more busy busier and busier. That causes a new century disease called "stress"...

Writing FeedbackArielruan - Jan 27, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 28, 2010
a job at Shell Plaza:An experience that significantly led the setting your goals

3 - Last summer, of 2009, I started my first job. I was thrilled with excitement but fear was present at...

Writing Feedbacklic12 - Jan 26, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Jan 28, 2010
TOEFL:At present we rely on oil for most our energy needs!

4 - Many thanks you guys for your helpful feedbacks. Have a nice day.^^...

Writing Feedbackgreentea93 - Jan 23, 2010 / greentea93 - Jan 28, 2010
my mother Pamela Miller, need help. descriptive essay :)

3 - A few suggestions to start with: Clariden Leu (is this the name?) not to laugh at her when...

Writing FeedbackStarbucksxo - Jan 27, 2010 / kiwitahi1 - Jan 28, 2010
Musqueam and UBC Golf Course Research Paper, Part 2

3 - Thanks, I just really dissaprove of our current Premier cause he is repeatedly abusing his power and adding extra...

Writing Feedbackicemaster2340 - Jan 26, 2010 / icemaster2340 - Jan 27, 2010
the defendant's past criminal record - IELTS Writing Task 2.

2 - Crime is one of the most discussed problems in the world, and governments of countries spend lots of time...

Writing Feedbackgabrielesan - Jan 26, 2010 / EF_Susan - Jan 27, 2010
Air Pollution in Hong Kong - ( 500-word essay )

2 - Let's begin with the cause of the problems, which includes three main aspects. You should add this sentence to...

Writing Feedbacknarrow1234 - Jan 26, 2010 / EF_Susan - Jan 27, 2010

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