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|Essay about a young woman
2 - Greetings! What an excellent and compelling essay! I love the dramatic opening! I think you did an outstanding...
Writing Feedbackjhon_lam - Mar 15, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
|history or mathematics?
3 - Greetings! You make some good points in your essay! It just needs a bit of tweaking. I've made...
Writing Feedbackmahdi - Mar 14, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
|ANALGY; Composition class
2 - Greetings! I think perhaps you got off to a bad start with your essay's opening and it somewhat...
Writing Feedbackgoombaking209 - Mar 14, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
|Community college student essay - asking for a little feedback
2 - Greetings! You have a good essay here, with lots of important information! Your opening sentence is good; it...
Writing FeedbackTinyjn - Mar 14, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 15, 2007
|"Human Trafficking Today's Modern Day Slavery"
2 - Greetings! You have found a lot of information about a powerful subject. Here are some editing tips: ...
Writing Feedbackrh07391 - Mar 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 13, 2007
|Orwell's prejudice against the colonized is inexcusableI; Multi-Source Essay
2 - Greetings! I think you do an excellent job of relating the three essays to the theme of prejudice!...
Writing Feedbackrusshen - Mar 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 12, 2007
|Two different methods of losing weight
2 - Greetings! You have a good essay here! I just have a few suggestiosns: My father suggested me...
Writing FeedbackMaggie8802 - Mar 11, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 12, 2007
|All Quiet on the Western Front - Comradeship
2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to make a few editing suggestions to your excellent essay! The distinction of...
Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Mar 11, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 11, 2007
|Feedback: An incident report written specifically by a bus driver
Writing FeedbackShergill - Mar 10, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 10, 2007
|Can you edit my essay? "Ethics"
2 - Greetings! I think you have done a very thoughtful analysis of the poem. Good job! I have just...
Writing Feedbackmkatts19 - Mar 9, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 10, 2007
|Emperor Jones' flight is a progress in self-understanding
2 - Greetings! The thing that stands out the most to me is that you use the thesis statement, "Emperor...
Writing Feedbackwolface - Mar 7, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 8, 2007
|Tongan Immigration(2nd draft)
2 - Greetings! This is an interesting essay about a people that most of us know little about! I have...
Writing Feedbackjone1113 - Mar 6, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 7, 2007
|Education-sat practice essay; other than school influences on education?
4 - Greetings! I'm afraid I'm not that familiar with the SAT essay requirements. If there is a word limit,...
Writing Feedbackkendra - Mar 5, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 6, 2007
|The Courtroom - Essay
NEW - I just wrote this essay for my english class. I can't quite grasp what is wrong with it. Most...
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|"Reasons to smoke" I wrote this essay for tommorow's class
2 - Greetings! It can be a real challenge to write essays in a foreign language. You make some good...
Writing FeedbackBBgirl - Mar 4, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 5, 2007
|example essay about and amazing artists
Writing Feedbackokuna - Mar 1, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Mar 3, 2007
|Differences between Mongolian and American Foods
NEW - hi all!! first of all i wan to thank you all EF team workers for helping us and encouraging...
Writing FeedbackMaggie8802 - Mar 2, 2007 / — -
|The moral education aim in the Alive 0-8 and Alive 0-4
Writing Feedbacksuperkaytee - Feb 28, 2007 / superkaytee - Mar 1, 2007
|CATS; Indoor/ Outdoor / Indoor-Outdoor
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|"Living at the time of Copernicus" - Proper Thesis For a 4-page Paper
5 - It's a rewarding job, but knowing that makes it even more worthwhile! You made my week! (And I hope...
Writing Feedbackmanogamez - Feb 24, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 27, 2007
|All Quiet On the Western Front - academic essay on Betrayal
2 - Greetings! What an excellent essay! I enjoyed reading it very much! I have only a few editing suggestions:...
Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Feb 25, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 26, 2007
|Behavioral Support, Social relationships & Peer support.
2 - Greetings! I think you've written a great essay! Most of my observations have to do with punctuation. ...
Writing FeedbackCeressie - Feb 25, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 25, 2007
|Memories are something everyone has! - SAT
2 - Greetings! It's good to get input from someone who has just been through it, so thanks, aznpoo! I...
Writing Feedbackkendra - Feb 24, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 24, 2007
|Short Essay on The Crucible
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|'Do not stop questioning' - essay regarding my 3 core traits
3 - Wow! I am surprised that I only made a few mistakes. I agree that my conclusion needs work. I...
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|Money is one of the greatest tools in life
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|Your career must compliment yourself; Career Choice
Writing Feedbackkendra - Feb 21, 2007 / kendra - Feb 22, 2007
|'My Friend Moni' - this is my first descriptive essay for grade
4 - Greetings! Sometimes when we have been working intensely on a piece of writing, it can be difficult to...
Writing FeedbackMagstar0202 - Feb 20, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 21, 2007
|William Osler - Can someone edit my introduction
10 - Greetings! I know it is difficult when you have an instructor who sees things entirely differently from you...
Writing Feedbackaznpoo - Feb 17, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
|"Swimming or Floating" - need help to locate my comma splices and fused sentences.
2 - Greetings! You have written an interesting and engaging essay! You're right that your sentences could use a bit...
Writing Feedbackcsneed1677 - Feb 19, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
|Monetary Policy Paper - Is this okay... thank you
3 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some feedback: First of all, while there's technically nothing wrong...
Writing Feedbackasianbm - Feb 19, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
|"The Bargain" ; John strikes a bargain with a beggar to replace each other
3 - Thanks for the help. I'm currently taking a break to celebrate CNY(i'm singaporean, and i don't think american/british english...
Writing Feedbackyongen_92 - Feb 18, 2007 / yongen_92 - Feb 19, 2007
|Essay about the disappointments you faced in life
3 - The first disappointment which I faced was when i first knew that my mother had cancer. Tears welled in...
Writing Feedbackaysha - Feb 7, 2007 / aznpoo - Feb 18, 2007
|A constant topic among political discussions is the extent of Gvt Responsibility
2 - Greetings! You have written an interesting essay! I have just a few editing suggestions to offer: Change...
Writing Feedbackkendra - Feb 15, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 16, 2007
|8-paragraph compare & contrast essay
Writing FeedbackKingTiger - Feb 10, 2007 / KingTiger - Feb 12, 2007
|The Majestic Camping Trip; Narrative essay
NEW - Need a little feedback on narrative essay please The Majestic Camping Trip To this day when I...
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|College Journal - English Class / Society Living
NEW - Plz Help to Revise These Two Journals. Thank you! 1) The English-121 is my first course that taken...
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|China, Mexico, USA - "what culture do I identify myself with?"
NEW - I once said to myself, "what culture do I identify myself with?" I never knew the answer to that...
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|Comparison of past thirty years of special education
Writing Feedbackamosborne13 - Jan 30, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 4, 2007
|Describe a potential classmate you believe you could learn from
Writing Feedbackrang555 - Jan 31, 2007 / EF_Team - Jan 31, 2007
|Looking for alternatives. 6-paragraph cause & effect essay
2 - Looking for alternatives Oil production in the United states peaked in 1970. when will it peak world wide who...
Writing FeedbackKingTiger - Jan 30, 2007 / KingTiger - Jan 30, 2007
2 - Greetings! Well, you certainly make some valid points here! You don't say what the exact assignment was. I'm...
Writing Feedbackanf3rnee - Jan 28, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jan 28, 2007
|Essay on out-of-town shopping centres
Writing FeedbackTheGeek - Jan 28, 2007 / TheGeek - Jan 28, 2007
|History Paper on Revolutions
Writing Feedbackrollagasper - Jan 27, 2007 / rollagasper - Jan 28, 2007
|Custom essay about my wallet
NEW - A wallet, or purse for some, is a precious item in which most people carry things more essential than...
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|'the fraternity brothers' - essay
NEW - Everyone has at least one or more defining moments in their life that can change the direction of their...
Writing Feedbackasianbm - Jan 15, 2007 / — -
|THE 12th CENTURY RENAISSANCE; history class essay
5 - Greetings! You are correct that the literal meaning of the word "renaissance" is "rebirth." It comes from a...
Writing Feedbackalika - Dec 19, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Jan 13, 2007
|Gang Violence. "There will be an escalation in violence on streets"
2 - Greetings! First I'll look at technical things like grammar, sentence structure and punctuation: The level of violence...
Writing FeedbackShergill - Jan 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jan 13, 2007
|short essay for review for police test
2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some input! You have several nouns which require an article...
Writing FeedbackShergill - Dec 30, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 30, 2006
|Repaying a kindness; My aunt was an epitomy of goodness.
Writing Feedbackaysha - Dec 28, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 28, 2006
|Keeping cool - Essay revise
2 - Greetings! I like the way you begin with your own personal reaction to the heat. Your description in...
Writing Feedbackaysha - Dec 28, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 28, 2006
|Minority Report Shortstory Vs. Minority Report Movie
NEW - Hello, I am currently in high school grade 10 level and we are supposed to write an essay about...
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|"Nobody gave me a chance!
Writing Feedbackaysha - Dec 19, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 19, 2006
|PUBLIC UNIVERSITY OR A PRIVATE ONE?
Writing Feedbackalika - Dec 19, 2006 / alika - Dec 19, 2006
|oral history project essay / gender theme
Writing Feedbacksuperkaytee - Dec 16, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 17, 2006
|Essay about rising divorce rate in Turkey
NEW - I am supposed to write an essay about rising divorce rate in Turkey, in cause and effect order, here...
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|Essay: From ARPANET to the Internet
Writing Feedbackbubbledesigns - Dec 13, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 15, 2006
|Essay about the career opportunities
2 - Greetings! I think your essay does a fine job of meeting the criteria for a "logical division of...
Writing Feedbackbernat - Dec 12, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 12, 2006
|Burst of Rainbow. Compare contrast essay: skittles and starbursts
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|Position Paper on Kids and the importance of grammar
NEW - I have not changed my position from my previous argument. I still firmly believe that youth will greatly benefit...
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