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|"Swimming or Floating" - need help to locate my comma splices and fused sentences.
2 - Greetings! You have written an interesting and engaging essay! You're right that your sentences could use a bit...
Writing Feedbackcsneed1677 - Feb 19, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
|Monetary Policy Paper - Is this okay... thank you
3 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some feedback: First of all, while there's technically nothing wrong...
Writing Feedbackasianbm - Feb 19, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
|"The Bargain" ; John strikes a bargain with a beggar to replace each other
3 - Thanks for the help. I'm currently taking a break to celebrate CNY(i'm singaporean, and i don't think american/british english...
Writing Feedbackyongen_92 - Feb 18, 2007 / yongen_92 - Feb 19, 2007
|Essay about the disappointments you faced in life
3 - The first disappointment which I faced was when i first knew that my mother had cancer. Tears welled in...
Writing Feedbackaysha - Feb 7, 2007 / aznpoo - Feb 18, 2007
|A constant topic among political discussions is the extent of Gvt Responsibility
2 - Greetings! You have written an interesting essay! I have just a few editing suggestions to offer: Change...
Writing Feedbackkendra - Feb 15, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 16, 2007
|8-paragraph compare & contrast essay
Writing FeedbackKingTiger - Feb 10, 2007 / KingTiger - Feb 12, 2007
|The Majestic Camping Trip; Narrative essay
NEW - Need a little feedback on narrative essay please The Majestic Camping Trip To this day when I...
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|College Journal - English Class / Society Living
NEW - Plz Help to Revise These Two Journals. Thank you! 1) The English-121 is my first course that taken...
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|China, Mexico, USA - "what culture do I identify myself with?"
NEW - I once said to myself, "what culture do I identify myself with?" I never knew the answer to that...
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|Comparison of past thirty years of special education
Writing Feedbackamosborne13 - Jan 30, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Feb 4, 2007
|Describe a potential classmate you believe you could learn from
Writing Feedbackrang555 - Jan 31, 2007 / EF_Team - Jan 31, 2007
|Looking for alternatives. 6-paragraph cause & effect essay
2 - Looking for alternatives Oil production in the United states peaked in 1970. when will it peak world wide who...
Writing FeedbackKingTiger - Jan 30, 2007 / KingTiger - Jan 30, 2007
2 - Greetings! Well, you certainly make some valid points here! You don't say what the exact assignment was. I'm...
Writing Feedbackanf3rnee - Jan 28, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jan 28, 2007
|Essay on out-of-town shopping centres
Writing FeedbackTheGeek - Jan 28, 2007 / TheGeek - Jan 28, 2007
|History Paper on Revolutions
Writing Feedbackrollagasper - Jan 27, 2007 / rollagasper - Jan 28, 2007
|Custom essay about my wallet
NEW - A wallet, or purse for some, is a precious item in which most people carry things more essential than...
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|'the fraternity brothers' - essay
NEW - Everyone has at least one or more defining moments in their life that can change the direction of their...
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|THE 12th CENTURY RENAISSANCE; history class essay
5 - Greetings! You are correct that the literal meaning of the word "renaissance" is "rebirth." It comes from a...
Writing Feedbackalika - Dec 19, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Jan 13, 2007
|Gang Violence. "There will be an escalation in violence on streets"
2 - Greetings! First I'll look at technical things like grammar, sentence structure and punctuation: The level of violence...
Writing FeedbackShergill - Jan 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jan 13, 2007
|short essay for review for police test
2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some input! You have several nouns which require an article...
Writing FeedbackShergill - Dec 30, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 30, 2006
|Repaying a kindness; My aunt was an epitomy of goodness.
Writing Feedbackaysha - Dec 28, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 28, 2006
|Keeping cool - Essay revise
2 - Greetings! I like the way you begin with your own personal reaction to the heat. Your description in...
Writing Feedbackaysha - Dec 28, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 28, 2006
|Minority Report Shortstory Vs. Minority Report Movie
NEW - Hello, I am currently in high school grade 10 level and we are supposed to write an essay about...
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|"Nobody gave me a chance!
Writing Feedbackaysha - Dec 19, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 19, 2006
|PUBLIC UNIVERSITY OR A PRIVATE ONE?
Writing Feedbackalika - Dec 19, 2006 / alika - Dec 19, 2006
|oral history project essay / gender theme
Writing Feedbacksuperkaytee - Dec 16, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 17, 2006
|Essay about rising divorce rate in Turkey
NEW - I am supposed to write an essay about rising divorce rate in Turkey, in cause and effect order, here...
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|Essay: From ARPANET to the Internet
Writing Feedbackbubbledesigns - Dec 13, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 15, 2006
|Essay about the career opportunities
2 - Greetings! I think your essay does a fine job of meeting the criteria for a "logical division of...
Writing Feedbackbernat - Dec 12, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 12, 2006
|Burst of Rainbow. Compare contrast essay: skittles and starbursts
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|Position Paper on Kids and the importance of grammar
NEW - I have not changed my position from my previous argument. I still firmly believe that youth will greatly benefit...
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|My College Writing final: Process Essay
NEW - Rebecca Warrington College Writing Kristy Nelson SEWING: A FUN WAY TO "DRESS" UP YOUR TIME When most...
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|"wake up call" - Evaluation of myself
NEW - I am new to this kind of writing and I don't believe I'm very good, especially when it comes...
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|Resource paper on violence and kids
2 - Greetings! You're off to a good start with your essay! You have stated your case and given one...
Writing Feedbacktodorusa - Dec 5, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 7, 2006
|Abortion should be allowed but with certain restrictions!
2 - Greetings! You've written a very good essay that you only need to proofread to catch a few mistakes....
Writing Feedbackcarolina5501 - Dec 5, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 6, 2006
|The Importance of Having Lots of friends
Writing Feedbackhappymaa - Dec 5, 2006 / happymaa - Dec 5, 2006
|Political Science Argumentative Essay
NEW - I haven't had the time to really sit down, and write this, I wrote half of it today...and it...
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|Euthanasia Essay Feedback (Ethics class)
2 - Greetings! Sounds like this is due soon, right? I'll be happy to give you a few pointers. Time...
Writing Feedbackcarolina5501 - Dec 4, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 4, 2006
|CCF - Tommy Douglas - A Scottish Baptist minister family member
NEW - Please tell me if this layout, grammar, punctuation, is ok and to college standards A Scottish Baptist minister...
Writing Feedbacklawenforcer - Dec 4, 2006 / — -
|essay episodic content (1447 words)
5 - The essay is due today. I'm sitting in one of my teachers' classroom and trying to proofread everything. Thanks...
Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Dec 3, 2006 / samuraitom - Dec 4, 2006
|Canadian Identity -- Highway's Rez Sisters and Hall's Diaspora
4 - Greetings, and good morning! It really helps to get someone else's perspective, doesn't it? Glad to be of...
Writing FeedbackBahradun - Nov 29, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Dec 1, 2006
|Tracking an Evolving Thesis (Concern about education versus degree essay)
2 - Greetings! You raise some interesting issues and make some good points in your thesis. I'd be happy to...
Writing Feedbackhanhtienng - Nov 14, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Nov 15, 2006
|Letter to the Editor ; "Tamiami Trail Scenic Highway"
2 - Greetings! While I'd agree that science writing has its own style (as do other fields, such as law),...
Writing FeedbackInternsRUs - Nov 3, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Nov 3, 2006
|Religion is Great? OR it isn't ?; Satirical essay
2 - Greetings! You have a great start here on a satirical essay! You have some good lines (jokes) in...
Writing Feedbackthomasrules - Nov 2, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Nov 3, 2006
|What is the career that most appeals to you?
Writing Feedbacklawenforcer - Oct 29, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2006
|Did Somebody Say Genocide?; response/summary essay
2 - Greetings! You have written an excellent, informative essay which does a good job of explaining the complex factors...
Writing Feedbackcalvinphoon - Oct 23, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 25, 2006
|Cause and effect paper - getting over abuse
2 - Greetings! You have written a good essay with a strong, personal perspective. I do have some minor corrections...
Writing Feedbackjkolhagen - Oct 23, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2006
|On the morning I've been waiting for all year!
2 - Greetings! Technically a "run-on sentence" is actually two complete sentences with no punctuation dividing them. I don't see...
Writing Feedbackfiguresk8tingchik - Oct 15, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 19, 2006
|Something Deeper - What am I looking for? Why am I here? Meaning of Life?
2 - Greetings! This is an interesting topic! I'll point out a few things I noticed that you might consider...
Writing Feedbackstarphyre - Oct 17, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 18, 2006
|Do you like to smell the strong cigarette smoke at public places? NO!
Writing Feedbackjanice - Jul 21, 2006 / figuresk8tingchik - Oct 15, 2006
|'Woods Riding and The Dirt Bike' - Process essay review
2 - Greetings! You have done a wonderful job of describing the process of riding a dirt bike. I almost...
Writing FeedbackBadAngel299 - Oct 11, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 12, 2006
|The damnation of the canyon is one man's account
2 - Greetings! You've done a good job of expressing your disagreement with the author's views. I'm guessing "The damnation...
Writing Feedbackarkaudio123 - Oct 4, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 5, 2006
|Future of Media Conclusion - (High School)
Writing Feedbacknjbignell - Oct 4, 2006 / njbignell - Oct 4, 2006
|Doctor Faustus Essay
Writing Feedbackjeffspears - Oct 2, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 2, 2006
|'Attack of the Bees' - essay bout a day I will never forget
3 - Greetings! Your essay does, indeed, have details and coherence! Just a few little things pop out to me....
Writing FeedbackBadAngel299 - Sep 24, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Sep 25, 2006
|Nazi Germany was a totalitarian state
2 - Greetings! It is always important to keep in mind that the function of writing is to communicate. If...
Writing Feedbackougoah - Sep 16, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Sep 16, 2006
|MAJOR CONCERNS on T.S. Eliot's context revealed in The Love Song of J Alfred
Writing Feedbackougoah - Sep 12, 2006 / ougoah - Sep 13, 2006
|Christianity in Beowulf ; Is Beowulf is a Christian poem or not?
2 - Greetings! You have written an excellent essay! While it is impressive and very nearly perfect, I have just...
Writing Feedbackjeffspears - Sep 11, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Sep 11, 2006
|What can people do to live a long life?
4 - Greetings! While I can understand why you might want to edit your post or to have "private messaging"...
Writing Feedbackstartanewlife - Aug 14, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Sep 2, 2006
|The Enlightenment: Adolescence of Modern Western SOciety
2 - Greetings! I am happy to provide you with some feedback! The primary suggestion I can make is...
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