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Soldiers experiences in Iraq, World War II, Vietnam.
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Intro for my essay about army lowing its standards. Sound good so far?
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Catcher in the Rye: reality vs. fantasy
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Karl Marx vs. The Economic Hitman
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review my quote essay ("The desire to know..")
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Gay, lesbian, bisexual teens in America
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Pygmalion Paragraph for brochure
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Goals: Dancer, Hairdresser, Musician
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A short story draft - dirty job, "Dear Diary" comment
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Summary and Personal Response "Hills Like White Elephants" grammar check
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Thesis Statement About My Goals (semi-pro football)
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"What did you want to be when you were a child" - 5 paragraph essay
4 - However, when I got older, I realized that being a dancer was not my top goal anymore, because I... Writing Feedbackanzgurl - Mar 18, 2009 / anzgurl - Mar 19, 2009 |
"The Right To Have an Abortion" - my argumentative paper
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"Lithuania Environmental problems" essay - correct my mistakes
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Essay to Compare your Two Teachers
10 - i agree with snowman...when I make outlines of a subject I'm about to write on, I find that I... Writing Feedbackchubbybear - Mar 3, 2009 / sharkbait09 - Mar 17, 2009 |
Essay for TOEFL: "establishing a new university in your community"
Writing Feedbackmogul - Mar 16, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 17, 2009 |
What do you think composition is? (this is the essay title we were given)
Writing FeedbackPriya Nayer - Mar 16, 2009 / Priya Nayer - Mar 17, 2009 |
a psychology research paper
Writing Feedbackjenhur - Mar 16, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 17, 2009 |
Expository Essay "Keeping Kids Drug Free"
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In the Kitchen: Constructing Identity
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"Life is like riding a bicycle.."
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Achievement of Set goals in Life is a Success
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The Future of the Internet, Globalization, and Mankind
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SAT Essay:One Subject or Multiple?
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Description about a friend of mine
Writing Feedbackcaryngmail - Mar 10, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 13, 2009 |
Summary Writing on the issue of Urbanization
7 - Hi, this looks great, with no errors that I can find. However, when I write an article summary, I... Writing Feedbacks11022734 - Feb 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 13, 2009 |
"Animals should have rights too" - Argumentative Essay (Rogerian Style)
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"Malcolm X and Dr King" esssay, fighting inequality
Writing Feedbackd690meg - Mar 11, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 12, 2009 |
Working in a cubicle - Division\Classification essay with emphasis on Division.
6 - Hi, I see that your first para ends with an assertion that the common idea about cubicle life is... Writing Feedbackakern - Mar 9, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2009 |
Chronic Illness and Family-Analysis paper
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On the Inland of Hispanolia
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Bank of America is a Great Employer - Argumentative Essay Need Suggestions
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"Successful Lie" - 4-5 pages essay for homework.
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The Oregon Runaway Laws
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"You don't choose your family." - Turning Point Essay Edit
4 - Every time I talk to my parents, I always feel that they're always yelling at me and they don't... Writing Feedbackzouter - Mar 6, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 7, 2009 |
Ethics and Values BA Hons Social Work
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Oh Spring! Where is your sense of humor?
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Flight & Growing Up -Comparive Essay
3 - Here are a few other fixes to go with the great advice from Sean; This metaphorically means that... Writing Feedbackmohsin_ahmad - Mar 4, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 6, 2009 |
"That Night I Proposed" - ENGLISH 080 essay
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Help with a letter (Joe Lawry)
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Taking courses of more than one subject prepare students for a broad spectrum of careers
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Narrative Essay, any subject ("jobless rates in America")
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Essay on a personal challenge at school
Writing Feedbackmystery200 - Mar 1, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 5, 2009 |
eating disorders (Anorexia Nervosa), introductory paragraph
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"Unexpected Change" essay
6 - You've got some good stuff, but I'm not sure your last paragraph fits with the rest of the essay.... Writing Feedbackkatj21 - Feb 28, 2009 / akern - Mar 5, 2009 |
Shopping is a necessity in our life
5 - What exactly is the point of your essay? You say you like shopping, but you also say shopping can... Writing Feedbackjurgita - Mar 4, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 4, 2009 |
Castin Characters #1: Jim
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Lit Review (Borderline Personality Disorder)
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Reading - My favorite subject essay
Writing Feedbackmystery200 - Mar 3, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 4, 2009 |
Jame Joyce's Portrait
11 - If this is supposed to be a literary essay, you have some more work to do. The essay doesn't... Writing FeedbackNecrovex - Mar 3, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 4, 2009 |
A creation of the mind - "Imagination" essay
Writing Feedbackbugsy444 - Feb 27, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 4, 2009 |
Write a short story in which the central character is a rebellious teenager
Writing Feedback_cartwheel_ - Feb 28, 2009 / _cartwheel_ - Mar 4, 2009 |
"Green Jeans" / "The love of my life" / "Fathers" - rhetorical essays (finals)
Writing Feedbackjoey2dawn - Feb 23, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 1, 2009 |
Short Story (heart still aches for Darren)
Writing Feedback_cartwheel_ - Feb 27, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 1, 2009 |
Essay on equal gender in university
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When I am in uncertainty I feel my emotions at their strongest
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Reaction paper (reaction to the hotel we just visited)
3 - Actually, you can use "because" to begin a sentence, as long as it is used to begin a dependent... Writing Feedbackeng1 - Feb 25, 2009 / EF_Sean - Feb 26, 2009 |
FIRST NARRATIVE ESSAY (The Miserable Girl)
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motherhood (Motherhood is Amazing)
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Not Mr. Towers, he and his family watched TV; Narrative Essay
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