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| Expository Essay "Keeping Kids Drug Free"
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| In the Kitchen: Constructing Identity
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| "Life is like riding a bicycle.."
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| Achievement of Set goals in Life is a Success
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| The Future of the Internet, Globalization, and Mankind
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| SAT Essay:One Subject or Multiple?
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| Description about a friend of mine
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| Summary Writing on the issue of Urbanization
7 - Hi, this looks great, with no errors that I can find. However, when I write an article summary, I... Writing Feedbacks11022734 - Feb 26, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 13, 2009 |
| "Animals should have rights too" - Argumentative Essay (Rogerian Style)
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| "Malcolm X and Dr King" esssay, fighting inequality
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| Working in a cubicle - Division\Classification essay with emphasis on Division.
6 - Hi, I see that your first para ends with an assertion that the common idea about cubicle life is... Writing Feedbackakern - Mar 9, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2009 |
| Chronic Illness and Family-Analysis paper
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| On the Inland of Hispanolia
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| Bank of America is a Great Employer - Argumentative Essay Need Suggestions
Writing FeedbackUnshella - Feb 28, 2009 / akern - Mar 9, 2009 |
| "Successful Lie" - 4-5 pages essay for homework.
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| The Oregon Runaway Laws
Writing Feedbackmileybiley - Mar 6, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 7, 2009 |
| "You don't choose your family." - Turning Point Essay Edit
4 - Every time I talk to my parents, I always feel that they're always yelling at me and they don't... Writing Feedbackzouter - Mar 6, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 7, 2009 |
| Ethics and Values BA Hons Social Work
Writing Feedbackelzbietabielec - Mar 6, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 7, 2009 |
| Oh Spring! Where is your sense of humor?
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| Flight & Growing Up -Comparive Essay
3 - Here are a few other fixes to go with the great advice from Sean; This metaphorically means that... Writing Feedbackmohsin_ahmad - Mar 4, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 6, 2009 |
| "That Night I Proposed" - ENGLISH 080 essay
Writing Feedbackic3 - Feb 26, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 6, 2009 |
| Help with a letter (Joe Lawry)
Writing Feedbackrandysnyc - Feb 21, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 6, 2009 |
| Taking courses of more than one subject prepare students for a broad spectrum of careers
Writing Feedbackcici510988 - Feb 20, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 6, 2009 |
| Narrative Essay, any subject ("jobless rates in America")
Writing Feedbackakern - Feb 22, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 5, 2009 |
| Essay on a personal challenge at school
Writing Feedbackmystery200 - Mar 1, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 5, 2009 |
| eating disorders (Anorexia Nervosa), introductory paragraph
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| "Unexpected Change" essay
6 - You've got some good stuff, but I'm not sure your last paragraph fits with the rest of the essay.... Writing Feedbackkatj21 - Feb 28, 2009 / akern - Mar 5, 2009 |
| Shopping is a necessity in our life
5 - What exactly is the point of your essay? You say you like shopping, but you also say shopping can... Writing Feedbackjurgita - Mar 4, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 4, 2009 |
| Castin Characters #1: Jim
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| Lit Review (Borderline Personality Disorder)
Writing FeedbackChicitaGatita - Feb 27, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 4, 2009 |
| Reading - My favorite subject essay
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| Jame Joyce's Portrait
11 - If this is supposed to be a literary essay, you have some more work to do. The essay doesn't... Writing FeedbackNecrovex - Mar 3, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 4, 2009 |
| A creation of the mind - "Imagination" essay
Writing Feedbackbugsy444 - Feb 27, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 4, 2009 |
| Write a short story in which the central character is a rebellious teenager
Writing Feedback_cartwheel_ - Feb 28, 2009 / _cartwheel_ - Mar 4, 2009 |
| "Green Jeans" / "The love of my life" / "Fathers" - rhetorical essays (finals)
Writing Feedbackjoey2dawn - Feb 23, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 1, 2009 |
| Short Story (heart still aches for Darren)
Writing Feedback_cartwheel_ - Feb 27, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 1, 2009 |
| Essay on equal gender in university
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| When I am in uncertainty I feel my emotions at their strongest
Writing Feedbackfitz1901 - Feb 26, 2009 / GHouse - Feb 27, 2009 |
| Reaction paper (reaction to the hotel we just visited)
3 - Actually, you can use "because" to begin a sentence, as long as it is used to begin a dependent... Writing Feedbackeng1 - Feb 25, 2009 / EF_Sean - Feb 26, 2009 |
| FIRST NARRATIVE ESSAY (The Miserable Girl)
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| motherhood (Motherhood is Amazing)
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| Not Mr. Towers, he and his family watched TV; Narrative Essay
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| People are Living Longer (causes of this phenomenon)
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| Math is Crucial for Society
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| Midsummer Night's Dream Character Essays
5 - Better. Now, take all of the references you make to specific passages [Act 2 scene I line 30-35 ,... Writing Feedbackicemaster2340 - Feb 21, 2009 / EF_Sean - Feb 22, 2009 |
| Yet another essay on television...
6 - This is very good, you have alot of talent. I wish my teacher let me write first-person, or even... Writing Feedbackakern - Feb 15, 2009 / drmemo - Feb 20, 2009 |
| Help rewriting Lead paragraph and Conclusion - Computer History Paper
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| Experiencing a rescue just in time
Writing Feedbackceberus - Feb 19, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Feb 19, 2009 |
| Analysis of an Art Piece, Creativity of Re-Use essay
Writing FeedbackSomeone18 - Feb 18, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Feb 19, 2009 |
| Critic my "Education" essay
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| How many money was spend on different forms of entertainment over a five - year period.
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| wording problems in a paragraph
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| "Where is my Desktop screen?"
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| We should discuss the balance of the life quality and the powerful tourism
Writing Feedbackpamfan0810 - Feb 15, 2009 / pamfan0810 - Feb 17, 2009 |
| Essay: Who is more important in the family? Mother or Father?
Writing Feedbackceberus - Feb 11, 2009 / GHouse - Feb 17, 2009 |
| English Class -- persuasive essay -- School Uniforms
Writing Feedbackdrasagon - Feb 16, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Feb 17, 2009 |
| Thesis Statement About Things I Like
Writing FeedbackGHouse - Feb 16, 2009 / arbennett - Feb 17, 2009 |
| Essay On Comparisons of Trials and Their Respective Jury Proceedings
Writing FeedbackSeanMasih - Feb 12, 2009 / EF_Sean - Feb 17, 2009 |
| Honours Social Work (privilege, power)
Writing Feedbacknaomi - Feb 15, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Feb 16, 2009 |
| "I was running" essay. Grammar and punctuation help.
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