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|Writing IELTS task 1 - Inflow of Foreign Workers in Australia 1992-2001
2 - Hi Muhammad Rinul, I have read your writing closely.Honestly, you have needed some improvements to finalize this writing. ...
Writing Feedbackmrfwijaya - Apr 16, 2017 / akbarmappiare - Apr 16, 2017
|The value and quality of women's work should be more appreciated
3 - Ngai, you have inaccurately discussed the paraphrased statement. The opening statement needs to only deliver your understanding of the...
Writing Feedbackhoiovo - Apr 16, 2017 / Holt - Apr 16, 2017
|The prevalence of Western clothes.
Writing Feedbackfrenchfries - Apr 15, 2017 / mrfwijaya - Apr 16, 2017
|Destination most of students after graduation
3 - Please see my correction of some grammatical errors in the first two paragraphs. ... show about the ratio of...
Writing FeedbackMuhammad Afif - Apr 13, 2017 / az23 - Apr 16, 2017
|IELTS writing task 2: Poor memory in modern life
Writing FeedbackLink - Apr 11, 2017 / Kiki31415 - Apr 16, 2017
|Translation of a short movie to my little brother at school
5 - Bluemoon I have not practiced writing or speaking in English since the last August So I forgot everything ...
Writing FeedbackSawsana - Apr 15, 2017 / Sawsana - Apr 15, 2017
|Choosing an university which is far from home or in your country? (write a compare & contrast essay)
Writing Feedbacksamanhb - Apr 15, 2017 / Bluemoom - Apr 15, 2017
|Causes of agricultural land productivity including three areas in 1990s. IELTS task 1
5 - @Rahma vety hi, there some hints that I want to mention: your essay should not be more that 150words...
Writing FeedbackRahma vety - Apr 5, 2017 / samanhb - Apr 15, 2017
|Driving offenders must face consequences
2 - Muhammad, the English sentence structure of the essay is not very good. It usually confuses the reader while reading...
Writing Feedbackmrfwijaya - Apr 14, 2017 / Holt - Apr 14, 2017
|Destination of UK Graduates and Postgraduates in 2008. Describe Table IELTS Task 1
3 - Hello Nindy, Overall, it is good writing but I have several notes for you. 1. You should better to...
Writing FeedbackAnindyaNindy17 - Apr 12, 2017 / mrfwijaya - Apr 14, 2017
|The percentage of students who studied at four types of secondary schools over a period of ten years
4 - Hello Phanh, it is typical essay for IELTS writing task 1. Overall, it is good but I have several...
Writing FeedbackPhanh - Apr 13, 2017 / mrfwijaya - Apr 14, 2017
|Veganism -- Giving advice on my essay! This is for a final grade.
2 - Fabia, you can actually lengthen the content of your essay if you continue to respond to the questions that...
Writing FeedbackFabia2 - Apr 13, 2017 / Holt - Apr 14, 2017
|The primary reasons behind low productivity of agriculture land. Two graphs description IELTS TASK 1
2 - Hadeel, you must avoid redundancies of information in your essays. Your irst 2 paragraphs contain the same information in...
Writing Feedbackhadeel21 - Apr 13, 2017 / Holt - Apr 13, 2017
|The typical destinations for students after graduating. IELTS Writing Task 1: Comparing the chart
4 - hi there..., I have perused your writing report more closely, then I think some areas for improvement in terms...
Writing FeedbackFarinda Urfah - Apr 12, 2017 / eddies - Apr 13, 2017
|Should we help people from other countries ?
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|West Europe electricity generation resources
2 - Abeeb, when you write the summary overview, it is imperative that you accomplish that paragraph using at least 3...
Writing Feedbackabeerbas - Apr 11, 2017 / Holt - Apr 11, 2017
|Announcement about constructing a great manufacturing plant in the area - TOEFL Independent writing
2 - Yin, there is an extreme prompt understanding problem in your essay. You did not properly parasite the prompt discussion...
Writing Feedbackjoannasephira - Apr 11, 2017 / Holt - Apr 11, 2017
|The employment pressure of graduate students
3 - Mirror, I wish that you had given me an inclination as to what the actual prompt for this essay...
Writing Feedbackmirror - Apr 11, 2017 / Holt - Apr 11, 2017
|How do we eradicate illiteracy in Ghanaian society
2 - Daniel, the topic of your essay is the eradication of illiteracy in Ghana. The premise of the essay is...
Writing Feedbackyaww phanye - Apr 10, 2017 / Holt - Apr 10, 2017
|Reason for learning a foreign language
2 - HIen, in the opening statement, do not use the term "later view" as the correct term is "latter view"....
Writing Feedbacknguyenhien - Apr 10, 2017 / Holt - Apr 10, 2017
|Is eating meat good for health or not ?
3 - Hi You should take more notice of verbs as well as some structures.For example:contain-contains,avoid to eat-avoid eating In addition,your...
Writing FeedbackAgustina Nababan - Apr 10, 2017 / nguyenhien - Apr 10, 2017
|Popular movie goers - 1 ietls academic
3 - @Strikeracad30 The sentence "The age group of 7-14 and 25-35 has similar figures in 1984" must be in past...
Writing FeedbackStrikeracad30 - Apr 10, 2017 / Agustina Nababan - Apr 10, 2017
|Transported goods and rail - task 1 academic for correction and comments
3 - @Holt Thank you for your advice and comment, I am sorry it that the graph was not uploaded. I...
Writing FeedbackStrikeracad30 - Apr 10, 2017 / Strikeracad30 - Apr 10, 2017
|Life among the crowd or in a remote area?
Writing FeedbackHoang Linh - Apr 9, 2017 / Strikeracad30 - Apr 10, 2017
|The best way to solve the problem of traffic is to force people to pay toll. Agree or Disagree?
3 - Thank you Holt for the great feedback. Could you write an introduction for this essay that would respond to...
Writing Feedbackadib_yz - Apr 9, 2017 / adib_yz - Apr 10, 2017
|The information on water use in six regions of the world. Task 1
2 - Sheryl, please do not expect me to rate your essay based on the band score because you did not...
Writing FeedbackSherylCheung - Apr 9, 2017 / Holt - Apr 9, 2017
|Free education without any tuition for those who can't afford it
2 - Sayed, while your thought organization can possibly score up to a 4 in this essay, your overall score cannot...
Writing Feedbacksaleme - Apr 8, 2017 / Holt - Apr 9, 2017
|Undergraduate essay on sleep deprivation and doctors.
2 - Rio, your thesis statement is not very clear. You make a statement of fact within the paragraph without an...
Writing Feedbackalannahmills - Apr 8, 2017 / Holt - Apr 9, 2017
|Task 1 IELTS Australian teenager's eating fast food
2 - Amjad, the essay that you wrote could have been better if you had followed the format requirements for the...
Writing FeedbackAmjad_345 - Apr 8, 2017 / Holt - Apr 8, 2017
|Child Education / Parents / Social Institutions
2 - Nguyen, the opening statement which is supposed to be a paraphrasing of the original prompt is not very clear....
Writing Feedbackmuathuthattuyet - Apr 8, 2017 / Holt - Apr 8, 2017
|Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave?
Writing Feedbacksamanhb - Apr 5, 2017 / samanhb - Apr 8, 2017
|Energy Production Chart In America
Writing Feedbackgiahuy141 - Apr 3, 2017 / muathuthattuyet - Apr 8, 2017
|IELTS - Task 1 - movie theater attendance by age group in Great Britain
Writing FeedbackLynapharma - Apr 7, 2017 / Lynapharma - Apr 7, 2017
|Some believe that studying at university or college is the only, proper way to have a good career
2 - Nguyen, you almost got the opening paraphrasing of the instructions completely right. You made a mistake when you said...
Writing Feedbackmuathuthattuyet - Apr 7, 2017 / Holt - Apr 7, 2017
|The cities are becoming busier, the traffic jams are more often..
3 - Nowadays, it is obvious that traffic jam is a regular occurrence as cities are becoming more and more populated...
Writing Feedbackimlost88 - Apr 4, 2017 / muathuthattuyet - Apr 7, 2017
|The controversial issue of whether the arts have to be governmental funded for flourishing or not
4 - you could replace governmental funding with fiscal aid, monetary support from the government, financial aid coming from the national...
Writing Feedbacksssasss1 - Apr 5, 2017 / muathuthattuyet - Apr 7, 2017
|IELTS Task1 writing British donating people
2 - Hello Amal, I have read your review in this writing. I found many improvements you need. Please, you meet...
Writing Feedbackamal_93 - Apr 6, 2017 / akbarmappiare - Apr 6, 2017
|GRE topic Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders
NEW - leaders must yield to public opinion Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must...
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|The attendance of Higher education students in the class
3 - Hi Sriwidayani, I have read your writing closely. Turning to a detailed description, I have found you have needed...
Writing FeedbackAnhy chan - Apr 6, 2017 / akbarmappiare - Apr 6, 2017
|Which factor is important to stop the poverty and hunger in a country.
Writing Feedbackfrenchfries - Apr 6, 2017 / frenchfries - Apr 6, 2017
|Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relation
3 - Hi @muathuthattuyet I have read your essay closely. I think it is a good essay since your writing is...
Writing Feedbackmuathuthattuyet - Apr 2, 2017 / Anhy chan - Apr 6, 2017
|Natural Versus Nurture, which do you consider to be the major influence?
Writing FeedbackReza_Hidayat - Apr 4, 2017 / akbarmappiare - Apr 4, 2017
|IELTS: energy use and greenhouse gas emissions in an average Australian household
7 - @matteo1222 I have red your essay, and I think you should make comparison among the feature as overview in...
Writing Feedbackmatteo1222 - Mar 28, 2017 / Reza_Hidayat - Apr 4, 2017
|Smartphone today - how to live without them?
Writing Feedbackhoanglong - Mar 31, 2017 / kacanakya - Apr 4, 2017
|Both views betweeen having an enjoyable life and making a lot of money
2 - Agus, the essay cannot receive a score higher than a 4 due to the missing elements of the prompt...
Writing Feedbackagus_mono - Apr 3, 2017 / Holt - Apr 3, 2017
|Writing Task 1: Two mail companies: TNT and FedEx
6 - hy meirkhan,, this is my suggestions: firstly, you have to introduce the graph by paraphrasing the question. i think...
Writing Feedbackmeirkhan - Mar 28, 2017 / agus_mono - Apr 3, 2017
|Process of producing tealeaves
Writing FeedbackReza_Hidayat - Apr 3, 2017 / Holt - Apr 3, 2017
|Two maps show an island before and after development - IELTS TASK 1
3 - @NataliiaNechv Based on your essay, I think you should mention key feature of the map, it could be similarities...
Writing FeedbackNataliiaNechv - Apr 3, 2017 / Reza_Hidayat - Apr 3, 2017
|The line graph show the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007 - TASK 1 IELTS
3 - @mygoals Hello! Make sure that you have at least 150 words in your essay. Besides, there aren't any paragraphs....
Writing Feedbackmygoals - Apr 3, 2017 / NataliiaNechv - Apr 3, 2017
|Driver's license - should or should not?
Writing Feedbacktrnngcmnh - Apr 2, 2017 / trnngcmnh - Apr 3, 2017
|Main Reason for Studying Based on Age
2 - Andi, how many times have I told you that one of the most important considerations in this summary essay...
Writing FeedbackReza_Hidayat - Apr 2, 2017 / Holt - Apr 3, 2017
|The line chart illustrates the number of viewers for channel one news during 12 months.
3 - hay syamsiahRahim i have read your essay, in the beginning paragraph, your introduction is too similar with the question....
Writing FeedbacksyamsiahRahim - Apr 1, 2017 / agus_mono - Apr 2, 2017
|IELTS writing task 2 - Punishments for environmentally unfriendly acts
4 - With the rapid growth of population, many problems such as water shortage and energy pollutionare beginning to surface. These...
Writing FeedbackMikaTan - Apr 1, 2017 / muathuthattuyet - Apr 2, 2017
|Donating Fixed Amount of Income
2 - Lizara, when you are asked to discuss how far you share a point of view, your opening statement should...
Writing Feedbackararara07 - Apr 2, 2017 / Holt - Apr 2, 2017
|England female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom
3 - @Emma Nguyen You should pay attention with spelling, you also do not cover all key features, try to...
Writing FeedbackEmma Nguyen - Mar 27, 2017 / Reza_Hidayat - Apr 2, 2017
|Cheerleading Is a Sport - 7th grade essay worth 20% of my grade
2 - Ayeshah, when you write a debate paper, you cannot just write the reasons that justify your claim. You must...
Writing Feedbackcassiecat - Jun 12, 2014 / Holt - Apr 2, 2017
|TOEFL: Why go to university? It is important for our future.
Writing Feedbackdaonguyen123 - Mar 31, 2017 / daonguyen123 - Apr 1, 2017
|Each roles are significant - who should teach kids how to be good members of the society? IELTS W2
4 - take such responsibility=sense of responsibility a worth discussing=a heated debate/discussion equally important roles and reasons are following=increasingly important role...
Writing FeedbackArlen - Apr 1, 2017 / MikaTan - Apr 1, 2017
|The information about the average viewers number of daily program Channel One News
2 - Reza, the information that you provide in the summary is incomplete. The line graph information indicates the start of...
Writing FeedbackReza_Hidayat - Apr 1, 2017 / Holt - Apr 1, 2017
|Ielts task 1 Wi-fi café, internet express and café cool in New York
7 - @Maitouyen282 Your overview was very detail, you only need to mention the general trend and make comparison, it is...
Writing FeedbackMaitouyen282 - Mar 28, 2017 / Reza_Hidayat - Apr 1, 2017
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