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|Students should be allowed to study whatever they like
3 - Hi Amrillah, here is some suggestions for you ... on what subjects that students like the most. ...
Writing Feedbackamrillahmk - Nov 9, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Nov 10, 2016
|(Summary Article) Donald Trump wins the presidential election
3 - Hi @alfinkurnia, Here some corrections on your summary: As we know, B before Donald Trump (...) of...
Writing Feedbackalfinkurnia - Nov 10, 2016 / asmaraj96 - Nov 10, 2016
|A balance is required when covering news about celebrities and ordinary people
Writing Feedbackamrillahmk - Nov 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Nov 10, 2016
|Arts classes are essential for students when they have an ability of painting and drawing
3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections for you ... essential for student This is...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Oct 31, 2016 / andika08 - Nov 10, 2016
|Tai Lopez shared his experience how to be successful person
4 - Hi, let me give several advice, perhaps useful for you. 1.He suggests to the people to ...----> suggested (...
Writing Feedbackasmaraj96 - Nov 10, 2016 / Dioba - Nov 10, 2016
|Article Summary: Apple has a new way to get a cheaper iPhone
4 - Hello My Friend Let me give some inputs towards your writing. please pay attention to your subject+verb agreement...
Writing Feedbackorestes - Nov 10, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Nov 10, 2016
|Discussing on the advantages and disadvantages of online computer games for chilren
4 - Hi, let me give several advice for you, perhaps useful for your essay. 1.Online games are valuable by ......
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Oct 23, 2016 / Dioba - Nov 10, 2016
|'A family knows the best way for children' - Childcare Centers Vs Family
5 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections for you It happens because teachers try tohave...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Oct 22, 2016 / andika08 - Nov 10, 2016
|It is known that cities can be free from pollution if the factories are relocated to regional area
3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections for you ... factories are relocated to regionalprovincial...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Oct 22, 2016 / andika08 - Nov 10, 2016
|Reading every day. The law of 33% - Tai Lopez
2 - Sari, your writing above is good; you are able to express your ideas orderly. This is the strength of...
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Nov 10, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 10, 2016
|Discussion about People Taking More Than One Job. Working life today is different than in the past.
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Oct 24, 2016 / andika08 - Nov 10, 2016
|Sources of person's understanding; the comparison of knowledge based on the gaining process
6 - For your Task Achievement, I believe you would get a 4 because you failed to indicate / restate the...
Writing Feedbacklanazaldo - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 10, 2016
|IELTS Writing Task 2 : Is the school subject to academic in orientation ......
Writing Feedbackleopar187 - Nov 10, 2016 / sasariri - Nov 10, 2016
|ARTICLE SUMMARY - Obama Congratulates Trump
2 - Sman, you misunderstood the reason for President Obama's invitation to Donald Trump to join him for breakfast at the...
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Nov 10, 2016 / Holt - Nov 10, 2016
|Reading a lot of books is beneficial - it will make you a tough person
2 - ... they do not have right roles PRECEPTS. ... happiness are a couple of people's INHABITANTS' goals ... To...
Writing Feedbackabangabul93 - Nov 10, 2016 / Ucha MSN - Nov 10, 2016
|Reading books help to extend knowledge without wasting much money. TED summary
3 - Rahasia, it is really important that you provide us with the link to the article, video, or audio file...
Writing Feedbackhitam_manis - Nov 10, 2016 / Holt - Nov 10, 2016
|TED SUMMARY about the necessity of reading
3 - Orestes, the next time you post your summary, please include a link to the original article or video so...
Writing Feedbackorestes - Nov 10, 2016 / Holt - Nov 10, 2016
|Summary Article: Animals Eat Ocean Plastic because it Smells Like Food
3 - Abul, first up, you need to remember that when you write a summary essay, you must always include the...
Writing Feedbackabangabul93 - Nov 10, 2016 / Holt - Nov 10, 2016
|Execution punishments for cruel murderers have become a hot issue for debate in recent years
5 - Hi @septiadara29, Here few corrections on your essay: ... cruel murderer have becamebecome a hot issue for...
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29 - Nov 6, 2016 / asmaraj96 - Nov 10, 2016
|Should I read one book daily? Why? - Tai Lopez TED summary
3 - Dear Abdul Hakim, here some advice for your writing and feel free to correct me too! In Hollywood...
Writing FeedbackKimichi89 - Nov 10, 2016 / mem77 - Nov 10, 2016
|The facts about expenditure of European People in five countries in 2002 revealed in the table.
2 - Hai @Faizzuna17, I got some advice for your writing: 1. There is (WAS) some information about expenditure of...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Nov 8, 2016 / abangabul93 - Nov 10, 2016
|Does the rising popularity of telecommuting affect society's lives? IELTS writing Task 2
3 - ... the office thingy from a computer... ... activity is presumably near bynearby the development of ... ...
Writing Feedbacklanazaldo - Nov 10, 2016 / hitam_manis - Nov 10, 2016
|Getting new knowledge from book is good choice. TED 13 Why I read a book a day
2 - Hai @nurul66, I got some suggestions for your writing: 1. but they don't (DO NOT) know .. (in...
Writing Feedbacknurul66 - Nov 10, 2016 / abangabul93 - Nov 10, 2016
|Subjectivities in news make it gain less reliability.
2 - hi ekalamarsyari, i'd like to correct this good article.. Indonesian Presidential candidates in 2004 had some supported (from)...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Nov 10, 2016 / Kimichi89 - Nov 10, 2016
|The consequences of Work or Travel before Starting New Study Life in University
Writing FeedbackSarlindaDS_27 - Nov 7, 2016 / yurikeyuri - Nov 10, 2016
|Children's manners and violent games - IELTS WRITING TASK2
2 - Hi Naoki, overall it is a good, well-written essay. However, here are some suggestion from me. Honestly, I am...
Writing FeedbackNaoki28 - Nov 10, 2016 / amrillahmk - Nov 10, 2016
|The types of things purchased in five regions of the world in 2002 is provided by the table
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Nov 8, 2016 / yurikeyuri - Nov 10, 2016
|After having experience for a year, students are finally understand and know their skills
4 - Other than that, people who are traveling on the other Cities ...>>... people who travel to the other Cities...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 10, 2016
|Reports show that diets and leisure, study were most popular in Sweden
3 - hi.. I have some views about your essay.. The table compares the amount[number] [amount is for uncountable...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016 / lanazaldo - Nov 9, 2016
|Today with the help from technologies, people can solve more problems than they used to.
3 - @Holt Thank you very much. The full instruction is " Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?...
Writing Feedbackfanceen - Nov 9, 2016 / fanceen - Nov 9, 2016
|The importance of having both the certificate of TOEFL and IELTS
3 - Thank you for the great compliment as well as the constructive suggestion Mr. Holt. I will learn it more...
Writing FeedbackKholil_PullnBear - Nov 9, 2016 / Kholil_PullnBear - Nov 9, 2016
|Does tourism has greater advantages? No doubt it has direct impact on the socio-economic condition
4 - Hi, I supposed your paragraph 2 tried to talk the advantages of the tourism. It seems too less...
Writing Feedbackfestivo - Nov 8, 2016 / Arlen - Nov 9, 2016
|There are several predominant factors to reach happiness
3 - Hi Meireza.. Here are my corrections towards your essay THAT HAPPINESS IS CONSIDERED HAPPINESS IS...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Nov 8, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 9, 2016
|We should use the time wisely and give our love to the others, in order to attract the happiness
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Nov 8, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 9, 2016
|Epistemology--Worldview--Ideology. We should learn philosophy to be open minded.
3 - @Holt I really thank to you for your kindness by giving me feedback. I will rewrite this essay to...
Writing FeedbackAskarie26 - Nov 8, 2016 / Askarie26 - Nov 9, 2016
|Writing Task 2: young people have no leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to study hard
2 - Arlen, this essay reads like a solid 5 to me in the scoring band. While the introductory paragraph is...
Writing FeedbackArlen - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 8, 2016
|People have trouble to explain the meaning of happiness
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 8, 2016
|Food, drink and tobacco were the highest demanded products in some countries during the year 2002
2 - Meireza, the first and foremost problem that I can see in the way that this essay was written lies...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 8, 2016
|Customers spent their money for different things. What was the common shopping preference in 2002?
2 - Bada, when you summarize your report, you should make sure to mention a complete overview of the information in...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 8, 2016
|The happiness is hard to characterize - there are different answers and conclusions about this.
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 8, 2016
|Happiness is an abstract thing that cannot be measured.
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Nov 8, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016
|The table gives a clue on consumer spending on different articles
3 - Hello Mardian! I want to give you some suggestion. food/drink/tobacco = diet it can be seen that...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Nov 8, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016
|Happiness is the essential matter that it complicate to explain - there are several ways to be happy
3 - Hello Wily! I want give you some suggestions. Satisfaction is the purpose all of ... Happiness is...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Nov 8, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016
|People have difference ways to achieve satisfaction - holiday assignment on the happiness
2 - Hello Pram! I want to give you suggestions. I guess your introduction do not answer the prompt....
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Nov 8, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016
|Happiness is a magic which is very hard to describe
2 - Hello, For instance, a business man (it can be connected ) who has many companies never feel (fell...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Nov 8, 2016 / Anna94 - Nov 8, 2016
|It is immediately apparent that food/drink/tobacco quantities were the largest among all countries.
3 - Hi Asep, BE CAREFUL of using sentence. Because if you say over the time, usually the time signals...
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29 - Nov 8, 2016 / faizunaa17 - Nov 8, 2016
|Writing Task 1 - consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 8, 2016
|Leisure and education became the least expenditure that people spent on in 2002.
3 - Hi. Here are my suggestions for you. ..., Italy, Sweden, and Turkey (you forgot to mention Spain) in...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Nov 8, 2016 / IvanMS027 - Nov 8, 2016
|The use of road transport in delivering some goods in Britain is constantly growing
4 - ..., there was a fluctuation increase and stayed at 80 in 1990. Furthermore, There was a slight decrease...
Writing FeedbackIvanMS027 - Nov 7, 2016 / Wilyaftika23 - Nov 8, 2016
|The proportion of consumer spending based on sort of item and several countries in Europe
4 - Hi Pram, let me give some comments 1. ..., and Turkey) in 2002 isare provided by table Because...
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Nov 7, 2016 / mardian24 - Nov 8, 2016
|THE CEMENT MAKING-PROCESS AND HOW TO USE IT as the component of buildings
5 - ... and how to use it as the component to produce concrete. ... are crushed by a crusher machine...
Writing FeedbackSarlindaDS_27 - Nov 6, 2016 / Wilyaftika23 - Nov 8, 2016
|There are five steps and several types of equipment that can be used in the cement-making process
6 - Hi, I want to make some comments 1. ... information about how to steps and equipment are used...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Nov 6, 2016 / mardian24 - Nov 8, 2016
|The amount of materials transported based on four vary modes of transport in the UK
6 - Hi bada, let me give some comments 1. ... number of materials that transported based on ... You...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Nov 7, 2016 / mardian24 - Nov 8, 2016
|There are some factors which can help people to gain joyfulness.
3 - Hi Miss Septi. Here are my correction for your essay in the side of contents. Please, you call your...
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29 - Nov 8, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 8, 2016
|Most people in all surveyed countries tend to spent their money on food, drinks, and tobacco
Writing Feedbackifraanisa05 - Nov 7, 2016 / faizunaa17 - Nov 8, 2016
|Happiness itself differ from one to another and it cannot be explained by words
2 - Hello Miss Ifra. I have read your essay closely and found some which you should improve. I focus on...
Writing Feedbackifraanisa05 - Nov 7, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 8, 2016
|Having look great without cosmetic surgery
2 - Hi and welcome to essayforum :) Here are my suggestions for you. ... in this case(,)iI want to...
Writing Feedbackkarimi_4u - Nov 7, 2016 / IvanMS027 - Nov 7, 2016
|The volume of goods in million tonnes in United Kingdom, years 1974-2002
2 - Merieza, there is an incomplete overview in your opening paragraph. You must always present at least 3 sentences in...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Nov 7, 2016 / Holt - Nov 7, 2016
|Writing Task 1 - The graph above shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974
5 - Hallo.. here some notes about your essay.. ... illustrates the number of stuff(stuff is informal, you can replace...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Nov 7, 2016 / Beauty17 - Nov 7, 2016
|Whether or not should young adults live with their parents for a longer time?
2 - Xin, I wish that you had attached the original prompt along with your essay. That prompt is supposed to...
Writing FeedbackXinxuer - Nov 7, 2016 / Holt - Nov 7, 2016
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