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|The information about the transformation of area shrouding the lake from 2000 to 2009.
2 - ... many public facilities were added around (...) residential areas ware decreased in that moment. ... derelict warehouse...
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Dec 1, 2016 / Wilyaftika23 - Dec 1, 2016
|Some people claim, that the improvement of technology has decimated the value of traditional culture
2 - Hi, Fatmajana here is my suggestions - In your introductory paragraph, you need to paraphrase the prompt first....
Writing Feedbackfatmajanna - Nov 30, 2016 / ifraanisa05 - Dec 1, 2016
|The alteration of the lakeside in 2000 and 2009 is shown in the diagram
2 - ... Art Centre is(was) rebuilt ... ... derelic warehouse is(Was) demolished ... ... shopping centre is(was) built opposite the...
Writing Feedbackifraanisa05 - Dec 1, 2016 / Wilyaftika23 - Dec 1, 2016
|The maps show some development that have been made in the Lakeside from 2000 to 2009
2 - ... of residential area in 2005 (2000), were(was) constructed to be car ... ..., which (was) changed into ......
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Dec 1, 2016 / Wilyaftika23 - Dec 1, 2016
|Who was more eager to get an advanced education? Men, women and after full or part-time education?
Writing FeedbackChingTang - Dec 1, 2016 / faizunaa17 - Dec 1, 2016
|A process of generating electricity by using wave energy is portrayed through two illustration
2 - Hi faizunaa17, ... when the water fulfills the chamber, and ... After that, the turbine twists ,...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Dec 1, 2016 / ChingTang - Dec 1, 2016
|Quitting smoking in your 60s - there is no age limit to stop
Writing Feedbackibe13 - Dec 1, 2016 / chanchalsingh199 - Dec 1, 2016
|Finland has the possibility to become the first country which avoids using coal as energy source.
2 - Hi. Here are my suggestions towards your essay Started fromStarting in 2030, burning of coal ... to...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Dec 1, 2016 / IvanMS027 - Dec 1, 2016
|Jakarta's Governor Was Questioned for Hours by Police as Part of a Blasphemy Probe
Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Dec 1, 2016 / faizunaa17 - Dec 1, 2016
|Shape-shifting tech will change work as we know it
2 - Hello, ... at creating interfaces that to manipulate people created inform(information ) to allow urban planners ... we...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Dec 1, 2016 / Anna94 - Dec 1, 2016
|Locked in the fridge; Don't Do This To Your Tomatoes
2 - Hi Miss Septidara. I have read your summary closely. Actually, you presented the informative summary well. There were...
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29 - Dec 1, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Dec 1, 2016
|Samsung is developing a completely round smartwatch of its own
2 - Hello, ... the same period nevertheless , (nevertheless is usually used in the initial of sentence, not in...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Dec 1, 2016 / Anna94 - Dec 1, 2016
|These days, formal dress became a trend in the most of companies and institutions.
4 - These days, clothes formally becomesbecome trend in most of ... People who workswork have accustomed to wear ... ...
Writing Feedbackalfinkurnia - Dec 1, 2016 / Pramudia27 - Dec 1, 2016
|Writing Task I about the factors which influence the happiness of spouses
3 - hello dioo.. this is my suggestion for your writing. hopefully it can help you. 1. you should attach your...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Dec 1, 2016 / Pramudia27 - Dec 1, 2016
|Effect of home-tutoring on student's performance in school: positive or negative ?
4 - Hi, there are several mistakes in your summary. 1. you should put introductory sentence in your summary consist...
Writing Feedbackcluan1999 - Nov 30, 2016 / Dioba - Dec 1, 2016
|The existence of Nano technology will be more widespread in the next decades.
2 - ... tiny size molecule(comma) so thatit can create anything. so==> conjunction==> sentence +comma+so+sentence Even, it predicts will take over...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Dec 1, 2016 / Pramudia27 - Dec 1, 2016
|Nano technology is created by tiny molecule that rearrange atoms
2 - ... created by tiny moleculmolecule with rearangingrearranging atoms. ... to create it in the factories. ..., there are so...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Dec 1, 2016 / Pramudia27 - Dec 1, 2016
|The team of marine conservation agency Oceana Atlantic discovered a Lantern Shark in Mediterranean
2 - hello andika.. this is my suggestion for you.. ... conservation agency OceanaOcean Atlantic discovered a ... They can...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Dec 1, 2016 / Pramudia27 - Dec 1, 2016
|'workers should be use tidy dress' - essay about dress smartly and performance
2 - Hello Dioba, This is my advice for you, hope it can help you. feel free to correction me too....
Writing FeedbackDioba - Dec 1, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Dec 1, 2016
|Nanotechnology - a breakthrough technology has been introduced by scientist
4 - Hi, there are several minor mistakes in your summary, feel free to correct my advice. 1.However, there are a...
Writing Feedbacknda18 - Dec 1, 2016 / Dioba - Dec 1, 2016
|The wind turbine with its components and best locations to generate electricity effectively
3 - Hi Miss Yurike. These are my few corrections through your writing. THE DIAGRAMS REVEALS HOW A WIND...
Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 30, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Dec 1, 2016
|Television is Challenging Hollywood
4 - hai andi I have some advice for you hope it helps please put your attention in conjunction since...
Writing Feedbackl1h4h - Nov 30, 2016 / ryan31 - Dec 1, 2016
|The process of finding English and French Language Educators in Ontario
3 - Dear Yurike, here some advice for your writing and feel free to correct me too! ... French-language teachers...
Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 29, 2016 / mem77 - Dec 1, 2016
|Taiwan promises increased investment in Indonesia
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|McDonalds takes part in novel technology.
3 - hi, these are my thought towards your summary the most modern breakthrough tend to be a simple technology,...
Writing FeedbackNinaJoesuf25 - Dec 1, 2016 / nda18 - Dec 1, 2016
|IELTS Writing Task II about someone take a job in a gap time
5 - The aforementioned evidence reveals that the dire effect of taking a job in the course of gap year outweigh...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Nov 30, 2016 / NinaJoesuf25 - Dec 1, 2016
|summary : The world in 2076: The population bomb has imploded
2 - Dear Riandi, here some advice for your writing and feel free to correct me too! ...they are too...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Dec 1, 2016 / mem77 - Dec 1, 2016
|(TED Summary) Robot that "show emotion"
6 - hi alfin, these are my thought towards your summary David Hanson, as a (...) show his invention, presented...
Writing FeedbackAK354 - Nov 30, 2016 / nda18 - Dec 1, 2016
|Article summary : National scene: Vocational students to get skill certificates
2 - Nda, your summary is very good. It offers almost all of the important key points that were discussed in...
Writing Feedbacknda18 - Dec 1, 2016 / Holt - Dec 1, 2016
|(Summary Article) Only Rich Kids Should Go to College
3 - Hello Alvin, we meet again, waw, it was so amazing that you create new account, i hope it don't...
Writing FeedbackAK354 - Nov 30, 2016 / faizunaa17 - Dec 1, 2016
|Help Performing Marker's Revisions on Advertisement Analysis Essay
3 - I enjoyed editing one of your paragraphs. You have a lot of good material. Here are a few suggestions...
Writing FeedbackLaplace18 - Nov 30, 2016 / EditorPal - Dec 1, 2016
|The time when young people finished their school and before take a lecture in the college
Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 30, 2016 / faizunaa17 - Dec 1, 2016
|These days, most of countries have faced intensity of teenagers crime.
3 - Hi, these are my thought towards your essay First paragraph : These days, most of countries have...
Writing Feedbacknurhikmahtp - Nov 30, 2016 / nda18 - Nov 30, 2016
|A comparison of the local official's spending annually in several lands in 1980, 1990, and 2000
2 - Overall, the higher eduction always in a ... - ...the higher education have always stayed/stood at the highest level...
Writing Feedbackrizal - Nov 30, 2016 / krempetkov - Nov 30, 2016
|(Summary Article) We may be able to tap into our memories from infancy
3 - hy Ded, I have some sugsestions for you... ... or three years moments iswere rarely happen. Some opinions said...
Writing Feedbackded15 - Nov 30, 2016 / rizal - Nov 30, 2016
|Summary article. I want to talk about article of John's job interview.
Writing FeedbackIkhlasul iman00 - Nov 30, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 30, 2016
|REMEMBERING MATH TEACHER JAIME EXCELENTE
Writing Feedbackanonym28 - Nov 30, 2016 / AbibMuhammad - Nov 30, 2016
|India shrine: Women enter Mumbai's Haji Ali after ban ends
2 - In India,(comma) a group of women had (...) were banned by the people to understand Sufi.follow Sufi. Although,(Comma)...
Writing Feedbackali26 - Nov 30, 2016 / vickynurhakim98 - Nov 30, 2016
|The Birth of Jesus Summary
Writing Feedbackaul05 - Nov 30, 2016 / yjung17 - Nov 30, 2016
|A company should hire an employee who has a brilliant idea and is able to work individually
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Nov 30, 2016 / Ikhlasul iman00 - Nov 30, 2016
|The feature of wind plants and where they are applied
3 - Hallo Lincon, This is my advice for you, hope it can help you. feel free to correction me too....
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Nov 30, 2016 / AK354 - Nov 30, 2016
|The "housing" category in United States had higher proportion of expenditure than others
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Nov 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Nov 30, 2016
|Apple has announcement, that it will sell refurbish Iphone for the first time in nearly a decades.
3 - Hi alfin, let me give you some comments 1. which knowns as producedproducer from iphone, macbook 2....
Writing Feedbackalfinkurnia - Nov 11, 2016 / mardian24 - Nov 30, 2016
|Most of children in elementary school have a dangerous habit of overusing their handphone
5 - Even, almost every parentsparent gives handphone to their son (the word "every" indicate singular, so you use only "parent")...
Writing Feedbackalfinkurnia - Nov 28, 2016 / yurikeyuri - Nov 30, 2016
|The position of a wind turbine is determining the amount of electricity produced.
4 - Hi alfin, let me give you some comments 1. Please include the picture to help readers understand about...
Writing Feedbackalfinkurnia - Nov 30, 2016 / mardian24 - Nov 30, 2016
|'Head hunting' - solitary and work in a team
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Nov 30, 2016 / mardian24 - Nov 30, 2016
|Most of adolescent decide to work than continued their study to university - Exercise Writing task 2
3 - Hi alfin, let me give you numerous suggestions 1. These days, most of adolescent decidesdecide to work ......
Writing Feedbackalfinkurnia - Nov 30, 2016 / mardian24 - Nov 30, 2016
|Diverification of Monotasking and Multitasking Skill
3 - Hi, let me give you numerous comments 1. There are a number of error spellings Monotasking ----> Mono...
Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 30, 2016 / mardian24 - Nov 30, 2016
|Writing Task I about wind turbine generated electricity
Writing FeedbackDioba - Nov 30, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Nov 30, 2016
|It is believed that English has removed other languages due to its popularity.
2 - Lincoln, Here's my contributions towards your TED's video summary. I hope you can follow through and gain some improvements...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Nov 30, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 30, 2016
|A line chart about how many times per year the juveniles in Australia ate fast foods
2 - Ching Tang, IELTS buddy is a website that has many IELTS sample answers and questions. Do you expect the...
Writing FeedbackChingTang - Nov 30, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 30, 2016
|SOME PEOPLE THINK WHEN RECRUITING, COMPANIES SHOULD AIM TO TAKE ON PEOPLE WHO ARE INNOVATIVE..
2 - Reski, apart from the above-mentioned feedback from one of EF members, I would like to mention your weaknesses in...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Nov 30, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 30, 2016
|Benjamin Todd advises to do valuable things in our life.
Writing FeedbackDioba - Nov 30, 2016 / nda18 - Nov 30, 2016
|Chinese Astronauts Back on Earth After Monthlong Stay in Space
Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 30, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Nov 30, 2016
|A person who is able to give a new idea and is independent, is appropriate to be recruited for a job
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Nov 30, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Nov 30, 2016
|Companies Should Recruit People Who are Able to Work in Team and Dutiful
2 - Anna, I can see that your writing is getting better. I do really like the way you elaborate your...
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Nov 30, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 30, 2016
|Is it true that being innovative and independent gives you a better chance to get an awesome job?
2 - Ivan, Here's my analysis towards your IELTS task 2 essay. I hope you can follow through. 1st paragraph:...
Writing FeedbackIvanMS027 - Nov 30, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 30, 2016
|TASK 2 - INNOVATIVE & INDEPENDENT WORKERS vs TEAM WORK & INSTRUCTIONAL EMPLOYER
2 - Faiz, - ...and able to do task alone, the others are more keen on selectingtheworkers that have skillful...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Nov 30, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 30, 2016
|Positive consequences and drawbacks of working before going to University
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Nov 30, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 30, 2016
|Companies have made their own standard for recruiting employees.
4 - Hello, let me give my correction for you This essay will first discuss aboutfirstly, the essay will discuss...
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