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|The facts about expenditure of European People in five countries in 2002 revealed in the table.
2 - Hai @Faizzuna17, I got some advice for your writing: 1. There is (WAS) some information about expenditure of...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Nov 8, 2016 / abangabul93 - Nov 10, 2016
|Does the rising popularity of telecommuting affect society's lives? IELTS writing Task 2
3 - ... the office thingy from a computer... ... activity is presumably near bynearby the development of ... ...
Writing Feedbacklanazaldo - Nov 10, 2016 / hitam_manis - Nov 10, 2016
|Getting new knowledge from book is good choice. TED 13 Why I read a book a day
2 - Hai @nurul66, I got some suggestions for your writing: 1. but they don't (DO NOT) know .. (in...
Writing Feedbacknurul66 - Nov 10, 2016 / abangabul93 - Nov 10, 2016
|Subjectivities in news make it gain less reliability.
2 - hi ekalamarsyari, i'd like to correct this good article.. Indonesian Presidential candidates in 2004 had some supported (from)...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Nov 10, 2016 / Kimichi89 - Nov 10, 2016
|The consequences of Work or Travel before Starting New Study Life in University
Writing FeedbackSarlindaDS_27 - Nov 7, 2016 / yurikeyuri - Nov 10, 2016
|Execution punishments for cruel murderers have become a hot issue for debate in recent years
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29 - Nov 6, 2016 / andika08 - Nov 10, 2016
|Children's manners and violent games - IELTS WRITING TASK2
2 - Hi Naoki, overall it is a good, well-written essay. However, here are some suggestion from me. Honestly, I am...
Writing FeedbackNaoki28 - Nov 10, 2016 / amrillahmk - Nov 10, 2016
|The types of things purchased in five regions of the world in 2002 is provided by the table
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Nov 8, 2016 / yurikeyuri - Nov 10, 2016
|After having experience for a year, students are finally understand and know their skills
4 - Other than that, people who are traveling on the other Cities ...>>... people who travel to the other Cities...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 10, 2016
|Reports show that diets and leisure, study were most popular in Sweden
3 - hi.. I have some views about your essay.. The table compares the amount[number] [amount is for uncountable...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016 / lanazaldo - Nov 9, 2016
|Modern communications mean that it's no longer necessary to write letters
2 - Fadhil, due to the gravity of the confusion caused by the way you developed your essay, I do not...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Nov 9, 2016 / Holt - Nov 9, 2016
|Today with the help from technologies, people can solve more problems than they used to.
3 - @Holt Thank you very much. The full instruction is " Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?...
Writing Feedbackfanceen - Nov 9, 2016 / fanceen - Nov 9, 2016
|The importance of having both the certificate of TOEFL and IELTS
3 - Thank you for the great compliment as well as the constructive suggestion Mr. Holt. I will learn it more...
Writing FeedbackKholil_PullnBear - Nov 9, 2016 / Kholil_PullnBear - Nov 9, 2016
|Does tourism has greater advantages? No doubt it has direct impact on the socio-economic condition
4 - Hi, I supposed your paragraph 2 tried to talk the advantages of the tourism. It seems too less...
Writing Feedbackfestivo - Nov 8, 2016 / Arlen - Nov 9, 2016
|There are several predominant factors to reach happiness
3 - Hi Meireza.. Here are my corrections towards your essay THAT HAPPINESS IS CONSIDERED HAPPINESS IS...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Nov 8, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 9, 2016
|We should use the time wisely and give our love to the others, in order to attract the happiness
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Nov 8, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 9, 2016
|Epistemology--Worldview--Ideology. We should learn philosophy to be open minded.
3 - @Holt I really thank to you for your kindness by giving me feedback. I will rewrite this essay to...
Writing FeedbackAskarie26 - Nov 8, 2016 / Askarie26 - Nov 9, 2016
|Writing Task 2: young people have no leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to study hard
2 - Arlen, this essay reads like a solid 5 to me in the scoring band. While the introductory paragraph is...
Writing FeedbackArlen - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 8, 2016
|People have trouble to explain the meaning of happiness
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 8, 2016
|Food, drink and tobacco were the highest demanded products in some countries during the year 2002
2 - Meireza, the first and foremost problem that I can see in the way that this essay was written lies...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 8, 2016
|Customers spent their money for different things. What was the common shopping preference in 2002?
2 - Bada, when you summarize your report, you should make sure to mention a complete overview of the information in...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 8, 2016
|The happiness is hard to characterize - there are different answers and conclusions about this.
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 8, 2016
|Happiness is an abstract thing that cannot be measured.
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Nov 8, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016
|The table gives a clue on consumer spending on different articles
3 - Hello Mardian! I want to give you some suggestion. food/drink/tobacco = diet it can be seen that...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Nov 8, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016
|Happiness is the essential matter that it complicate to explain - there are several ways to be happy
3 - Hello Wily! I want give you some suggestions. Satisfaction is the purpose all of ... Happiness is...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Nov 8, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016
|People have difference ways to achieve satisfaction - holiday assignment on the happiness
2 - Hello Pram! I want to give you suggestions. I guess your introduction do not answer the prompt....
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Nov 8, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Nov 8, 2016
|Happiness is a magic which is very hard to describe
2 - Hello, For instance, a business man (it can be connected ) who has many companies never feel (fell...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Nov 8, 2016 / Anna94 - Nov 8, 2016
|It is immediately apparent that food/drink/tobacco quantities were the largest among all countries.
3 - Hi Asep, BE CAREFUL of using sentence. Because if you say over the time, usually the time signals...
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29 - Nov 8, 2016 / faizunaa17 - Nov 8, 2016
|Writing Task 1 - consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Nov 8, 2016 / Holt - Nov 8, 2016
|Leisure and education became the least expenditure that people spent on in 2002.
3 - Hi. Here are my suggestions for you. ..., Italy, Sweden, and Turkey (you forgot to mention Spain) in...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Nov 8, 2016 / IvanMS027 - Nov 8, 2016
|The use of road transport in delivering some goods in Britain is constantly growing
4 - ..., there was a fluctuation increase and stayed at 80 in 1990. Furthermore, There was a slight decrease...
Writing FeedbackIvanMS027 - Nov 7, 2016 / Wilyaftika23 - Nov 8, 2016
|The proportion of consumer spending based on sort of item and several countries in Europe
4 - Hi Pram, let me give some comments 1. ..., and Turkey) in 2002 isare provided by table Because...
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Nov 7, 2016 / mardian24 - Nov 8, 2016
|THE CEMENT MAKING-PROCESS AND HOW TO USE IT as the component of buildings
5 - ... and how to use it as the component to produce concrete. ... are crushed by a crusher machine...
Writing FeedbackSarlindaDS_27 - Nov 6, 2016 / Wilyaftika23 - Nov 8, 2016
|There are five steps and several types of equipment that can be used in the cement-making process
6 - Hi, I want to make some comments 1. ... information about how to steps and equipment are used...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Nov 6, 2016 / mardian24 - Nov 8, 2016
|The amount of materials transported based on four vary modes of transport in the UK
6 - Hi bada, let me give some comments 1. ... number of materials that transported based on ... You...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Nov 7, 2016 / mardian24 - Nov 8, 2016
|There are some factors which can help people to gain joyfulness.
3 - Hi Miss Septi. Here are my correction for your essay in the side of contents. Please, you call your...
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29 - Nov 8, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 8, 2016
|Most people in all surveyed countries tend to spent their money on food, drinks, and tobacco
Writing Feedbackifraanisa05 - Nov 7, 2016 / faizunaa17 - Nov 8, 2016
|Happiness itself differ from one to another and it cannot be explained by words
2 - Hello Miss Ifra. I have read your essay closely and found some which you should improve. I focus on...
Writing Feedbackifraanisa05 - Nov 7, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 8, 2016
|Having look great without cosmetic surgery
2 - Hi and welcome to essayforum :) Here are my suggestions for you. ... in this case(,)iI want to...
Writing Feedbackkarimi_4u - Nov 7, 2016 / IvanMS027 - Nov 7, 2016
|The volume of goods in million tonnes in United Kingdom, years 1974-2002
2 - Merieza, there is an incomplete overview in your opening paragraph. You must always present at least 3 sentences in...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Nov 7, 2016 / Holt - Nov 7, 2016
|Writing Task 1 - The graph above shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974
5 - Hallo.. here some notes about your essay.. ... illustrates the number of stuff(stuff is informal, you can replace...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Nov 7, 2016 / Beauty17 - Nov 7, 2016
|Whether or not should young adults live with their parents for a longer time?
2 - Xin, I wish that you had attached the original prompt along with your essay. That prompt is supposed to...
Writing FeedbackXinxuer - Nov 7, 2016 / Holt - Nov 7, 2016
|Before entering university students in many countries do some activities like working or traveling.
2 - hello, Mr., @mardian24 :) let me give you some suggestions :) ... necessity in college or pay enrolment...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Nov 7, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Nov 7, 2016
|Our stuff is transported in various ways. Which method was the most common between 1974 and 2002?
3 - Hello Anna, kindly check my suggestion below :) Four years later, using road was a slight increased...
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Nov 7, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Nov 7, 2016
|a raise in the price of petrol is not the best solution to handle traffic and pollution problems
Writing Feedbackamrillahmk - Nov 7, 2016 / Holt - Nov 7, 2016
|It is good for young people to work before going to university to enrich their skill and experience
2 - Nur, your line of reasoning in this essay is choppy. There are inconsistencies in your flow of thought and...
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Nov 7, 2016 / Holt - Nov 7, 2016
|Too many people have their own vehicle - a lot of cars means problem with traffic and pollution
3 - I have some suggestions: ... already become one ofhuman humans' primary needs. your essay is too...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Nov 5, 2016 / SYDA - Nov 7, 2016
|The proportion of the quantity of goods transported (unit in million tonnes) in Britain
2 - Hello, ... (unit in million tonnes) in British [Britain , British is the residents of Britain ] between...
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Nov 7, 2016 / Anna94 - Nov 7, 2016
|The youngsters have to get a job or even travel before they take course in a school
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Nov 7, 2016 / Anna94 - Nov 7, 2016
|When a high school students graduate, most of them are encouraged to postpone their studies
2 - When high school studentS graduated from school, most of them ARE encouraged to postpone their studies and THEN...
Writing Feedbackifraanisa05 - Nov 7, 2016 / RAY93 - Nov 7, 2016
|Each mode of transport reveals an upward trend - the demand for carrying goods is rising
2 - Nura, you have to ensure you properly rephrase the topic question. You could say " The chart illustrates...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Nov 7, 2016 / okorobiadimma14 - Nov 7, 2016
|Writing Task 2 : Young people; work or travel vs starting university studies
2 - Taking a holiday or getting a job is become younger people choose after finish their studyan option for students...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Nov 7, 2016 / amrillahmk - Nov 7, 2016
|Students travelling and working before continuing to study after graduating from secondary school
2 - Hi miss @Pramudia27, I just have few corrections for you :) ... is the desire of every tanager...
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Nov 7, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Nov 7, 2016
|Students are encouraged to not directly continue their studies but work or travel for 12 months
2 - Here are some comment on grammatical errors. Students who have finished their study have ccompleted high school ......
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Nov 7, 2016 / okorobiadimma14 - Nov 7, 2016
|In some states, after teenagers finish their high school, they are suggested to find jobs
2 - Hi...faizunaa17 your writing is good. task responses are also good. I have some correction of it . ...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Nov 7, 2016 / SYDA - Nov 7, 2016
|The number of commodities transported in United Kingdom 1984-2002 using various transportation
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Nov 7, 2016 / badafebriani17 - Nov 7, 2016
|The proportion of some equipment carried away all over UK
5 - hi, tika here are my thoughts ... over twenty-eight-years periodperiods there were fluctuation ... In 1974, for...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Nov 7, 2016 / ifraanisa05 - Nov 7, 2016
|The benefits of finding a vacancy or sightseeing popular places after graduating high school
4 - Hi asep! ...a job or visit other place.places other + noun plural another + noun singular misspellings...
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29 - Nov 7, 2016 / ifraanisa05 - Nov 7, 2016
|Engaging in work and traveling for a year, are suggested for teens who want return to study
4 - Hi, tika. here are my suggestions for you Walking and travelingtravelling for a year are suggested by ......
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Nov 7, 2016 / ifraanisa05 - Nov 7, 2016
|How to write an descriptive report on designing an recipe for an low income family
2 - Amanda, let us first address the formatting problems of your essay. When you introduce the family, devote one paragraph...
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