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|Parents are more competent than school to show children how to be a decent citizen
5 - INTRODUCTION overall this is enough. you paraphrase the question then giving your personal opinion which indicated that you...
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29 - Oct 29, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 31, 2016
|Being healthy is not an easy task today, but there are always ways to manage this
3 - Aloha ichanpants89, thank you for your suggestion, I hope you want to double check my essay. Here is my...
Writing Feedbackibe13 - Oct 31, 2016 / ibe13 - Oct 31, 2016
|Why making children, who lack artistic talent, learn painting and drawing in Art classes at school?
2 - Talking about your idea, you said that "I totally disagree with such an idea because they should be thought...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Oct 31, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 31, 2016
|How to stop the deadly disease that is spread by mosquitoes? Mosquito, malaria, and education
4 - @dils I think you should try an oppening that invites the reader to engage to your story, try something...
Writing Feedbackdils - Oct 31, 2016 / Lixtik - Oct 31, 2016
|Lightbulb made of modified E. coli fuses Biology and Electronics
2 - @Yonathan Hi Jonathan, I think you have a really good entry here. try to pay a bit more attention...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 31, 2016 / Lixtik - Oct 31, 2016
|An appropriate colour can result in comfort and motivation, therefore capacity for work and health
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Oct 31, 2016 / naelendra - Oct 31, 2016
|Over the years, an issue dealing with air pollution has been emerging.
4 - Hi Sman, I believe this is the first time I will review your essay and just like everyone here...
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Oct 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 31, 2016
|In the modern world, we compete each other to grab the level of success. We forget about our health
2 - Next cause --> you should use more coherence words such as In addition, moreover (maybe it would make your...
Writing FeedbackIvanMS027 - Oct 31, 2016 / intanrahayu11 - Oct 31, 2016
|A new study reveals that happy people have a great sense to cheer their spouse up
3 - Hi Dila, here's another one from my end; - Happiness is related to the physical - happier are...
Writing Feedbackdils - Oct 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 31, 2016
|The increasing damage of pollution caused by aero transport emerges an opinion to reduce air travel
Writing Feedbacklanazaldo - Oct 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 31, 2016
|Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.
2 - Hi Muhammad, below are my thoughts on your essay with the focus on the right words to incorporate in...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 31, 2016
|Common Painkillers 'increase heart failure risk'
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 4, 2016 / dils - Oct 31, 2016
|The popularity of reading books by citizens of Burnaby between 2011 and 2014
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Oct 29, 2016 / dils - Oct 31, 2016
|The Economist - What are the candidates' plans for America's budget?
3 - ... between Barack Obama and one candidate of Amerika president selectionAmerica presidential election. When the Barack Obama's era, they...
Writing FeedbackMathew88 - Oct 31, 2016 / amrillahmk - Oct 31, 2016
|Restricting the air travel to prevent air pollution
Writing Feedbackdils - Oct 31, 2016 / nda18 - Oct 31, 2016
|The idea of banned air transportation is not the best solution for air pollution
4 - Nowadays, many people travelled around the world faster and more easilyeasier, thanks to air transportation. ... of their efficiency...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 31, 2016 / amrillahmk - Oct 31, 2016
|Air pollution and planes. The government should look for a solution in the industrial sector instead
2 - @Kimichi89 Hi Kimichi, I would say that argument against factories are not strong enough. You might want to elaborate...
Writing FeedbackKimichi89 - Oct 31, 2016 / arifkoushik - Oct 31, 2016
|Nowadays it is very difficult to stay healthy in this modern world
3 - Hi Nur, below are my thoughts on your essay, first of all, the tittle, it's missing a word or...
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Oct 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 31, 2016
|TED Summary: Why we Need to Talk About Depression by Kevin Breel
5 - Hi Jojo, Here some suggestions for you. Kevin Breel, is a person who suffering from depression about...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 4, 2016 / dils - Oct 31, 2016
|The decreasing figure of animals and plants in tropical forests / threats to plant life
NEW - The graph and chart below give information about species extinctions and threats to plant life. Data of decreasing...
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|Over time, the people's lifestyle had been changed. The technology can be a main factor for it
2 - hi.. good writing.. I have some suggestions.. ... people's lifestyle had been[you mean that you want to make...
Writing FeedbackSarlindaDS_27 - Oct 31, 2016 / lanazaldo - Oct 31, 2016
|Information of Bulgarian people who remain in country after graduation for continuing their studies
3 - Hello sarlindaDS_27 I have a twice advice to you, hope it can help you elementary school or lower...
Writing FeedbackSarlindaDS_27 - Oct 31, 2016 / Mathew88 - Oct 31, 2016
|Over-grazing was the most dominant aspect of worldwide land degradation. IELTS chart
6 - Hii, there is my advice for you: 1. The given chart presents the predominant causes why agriculture land...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 2, 2016 / Gigih12 - Oct 31, 2016
|I disagree that the air travel is the big cause to generate big air pollution across the globe
Writing Feedbackhitam_manis - Oct 31, 2016 / Kimichi89 - Oct 31, 2016
|Some people think that air transportation usage needs to be cut to lower air pollution.
3 - Hi fauziyah let m give you some correction ... declared that the most agent cause of air pollution...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 31, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 31, 2016
|Working as an employee in an industry/office or having own business - Task 2 hal 64 unit c
4 - Hi beauty17, I want to make some comments 1. ... people avoid to starts their own business ......
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Oct 27, 2016 / mardian24 - Oct 31, 2016
|The dilemma of practicing the new stuff or merely following the previous approaches.
2 - hello @sinahector there are several suggestions for you. here we go ..., man has made a tremendous amount...
Writing Feedbacksinahector - Oct 31, 2016 / hitam_manis - Oct 31, 2016
|If you want to free your time to start live healthier, just make it happen!
2 - Hello Pramudiana27. i think your essay is pretty good, but this is my suggestion. 1. Meanwhile, others have opposite...
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Oct 31, 2016 / badafebriani17 - Oct 31, 2016
|Writing Task 1 - the proportions of students attending
4 - Hello I will give you suggestion: 1. Please check your sentence using 2. Be careful preposition and conjunction using...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Sep 29, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Oct 31, 2016
|Parents and school as a place for children to get knowledge and friendly habits in society.
3 - Hi, I want to make some comments 1. Becoming parents are biggest responsibility for keep their children ......
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Oct 30, 2016 / mardian24 - Oct 31, 2016
|Article Summary - Liberty moves north
3 - Hello, i will give you suggestion: Please check your tense using: Even there are has been a proliferation of...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 31, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Oct 31, 2016
|Bulgaria immigrate - is there a relation between intelligence and willingness to immigration?
2 - Hello pramudia27. i think your essay is pretty good. but let me give you some suggestions. i like your...
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Oct 31, 2016 / badafebriani17 - Oct 31, 2016
|In the modern era, demanding of aviation company increases dramatically. Impact on the air quality.
3 - aloha @Mathew88 overall, your essay has unclear idea. Therefore, I, as a reader, cannot fully understand what you...
Writing FeedbackMathew88 - Oct 31, 2016 / ibe13 - Oct 31, 2016
|There is no doubt that air travel takes a part of responsibility to make the air pollution.
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 31, 2016 / alfa7 - Oct 31, 2016
|I agree, that the aircraft can make human avoid the impact of air pollution on the earth.
Writing Feedbackmymelody - Oct 31, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 31, 2016
|Public libraries should be preserved, and these are not a waste of public money
NEW - Some people say that public libraries are an important public resource and should be free, others say that they...
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|A comparison of the information about the proportion of Bulgarians who want to immigrate
2 - Aloha Meireza (1) "who have" looks common on your essay. You'd better say; "with"//"in"//"having" to change that phrase,...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Oct 31, 2016 / ibe13 - Oct 31, 2016
|It depends on ourselves, how much efforts we do to be fit and healthy.
4 - Hi ms. Nuraini. Here are my suggestions towards your essay: At present, a healthy life stylelifestylehavehas become a...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Oct 31, 2016 / IvanMS027 - Oct 31, 2016
|TOEFL task2: The more money people have, the more they should give away to charity.
2 - Firstly, this is their social responsibilities.The government needs a lot of money to build infrastructures such as schools and...
Writing Feedbackfanceen - Oct 31, 2016 / Pramudia27 - Oct 31, 2016
|Robotic race cars. The autonomous vehicle was a dream and it has been dream since 1939
Writing FeedbackDioba - Oct 4, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 31, 2016
|TED Beau Lotto, the TED speaker, began his speech with a game.
Writing FeedbackDioba - Oct 6, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 31, 2016
|Fast food eaten by Australia Teenagers over 25-year period
2 - Hello Hope you doing well, lemme give you some suggestion The breakdown of information about [....] dropped dramatically...
Writing Feedbackamrillahmk - Oct 31, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Oct 31, 2016
|The number of Bulgarian community which move to live overseas, divided into education level
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Oct 31, 2016 / ibe13 - Oct 31, 2016
|WRITING TASK II - LACK ARTISTIC TALENT ON CHILDREN
3 - a well-structured essay, i love it although there are some grammar mistakes on other creative and practical lessons...
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Oct 31, 2016 / amrillahmk - Oct 31, 2016
|The percentage of Bulgarians abroad who have secondary education was higher than others
3 - Hello Miss Willy :) Let's discuss your summary :) The chart shows about => (redundant preposition )...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Oct 31, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Oct 31, 2016
|I don't know how to add more depth into my essay! Help me.
3 - @Holt Sorry for the late reply but everything is okay! I've been working really hard lately to try and...
Writing FeedbackFaithT - Oct 25, 2016 / FaithT - Oct 31, 2016
|The chart shows information about educational stage of Bulgarian who wanted study to overseas
2 - Hi BadaFebriani, Kindly find my remarks below in order to significantly improve your writing skill, especially in writing an...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Oct 31, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 31, 2016
|How many educated Bulgarians leave their country - the chart
2 - Hi Septia, Please take a closer look at my contribution below. I hope this would be helpful for your...
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29 - Oct 31, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 31, 2016
|IELTS Writing Task 1: Bulgarians who wanted to live in another country
3 - Hi Annisa, Here's my analysis towards your report summary of IELTS task 1. I hope you can follow through...
Writing Feedbackifraanisa05 - Oct 31, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 31, 2016
|There are opponent statements about how to get a healthy lifestyle in this modern world.
Writing Feedbackifraanisa05 - Oct 31, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Oct 31, 2016
|Why helmets don't prevent concussions and what might; TED
6 - Hello! I think it's good that you referenced sources for your essay, but I think before you move...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 3, 2016 / anageecantu - Oct 31, 2016
|The chart presents a research resulted by a Canadian providing the data about the sleep patterns
4 - HELLO, here my suggestion for you :) The chart presents a research [that was ] resulted by a ......
Writing Feedbackasmaraj96 - Oct 30, 2016 / Anna94 - Oct 31, 2016
|Number of Bulgarians who have different background education and want to stay abroad 2002 - 2008
3 - HELLO After that, between 2002 and 2006, both higher education and primary and lower education [you say both.......
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Oct 31, 2016 / Anna94 - Oct 31, 2016
|The data about global population progress and the proportion of urban areas in several world zones.
2 - Hi, ainunazwaria, I hope I can help you to write an essay 1. ... inhabitant proportion willwould increase...
Writing Feedbackainunazwaria - Oct 30, 2016 / Wilyaftika23 - Oct 31, 2016
|When we just have a little time for relax after work, we disregard our health sometimes
2 - ... they just have a littleLIMITED time for relaxRELAXING BODY AND REFRESHING BRAIN after doing many activities in...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Oct 31, 2016 / Ucha MSN - Oct 31, 2016
|Writing Task II _ Creative and Practical Subjects are Essential for Students' Future
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Oct 31, 2016 / fanceen - Oct 31, 2016
|Is school a suitable spot for pupils to study about how to adapt in the social society?
2 - For the first, please you always attach the question so that others can easily give valuable feedback of your...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Oct 29, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 31, 2016
|The data about educational background of Bulgarian Inhabitants who wanted to stay abroad
2 - Hi Faiz. These are my few corrections for your writing. Please, review them. ... who wanted to stay...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Oct 31, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 31, 2016
|In this modern era, everything has changed. Writing Task 2 - Difficult and Easy Healthy Lifestyle
2 - One of the problems to be healthy is that people I imagine this is appear think it because due...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Oct 31, 2016 / fanceen - Oct 31, 2016
|The global figure of habitant growth between 1800 and 2100 and the forecast of urban areas residency
3 - Hello! I will give you some opinions about your essay. (1) The breakdown of information (...) in global...
Writing FeedbackWasishaSisha - Oct 30, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 31, 2016
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