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|Climate change: human's role and effects - exploratory essay
4 - Your thesis is too broad in the sense that you are talking about human activities in general. That makes...
Writing Feedbackkhoado - Oct 19, 2016 / Holt - Oct 22, 2016
|An Article Summary: A Scottish Noblewoman and Her Palace
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Oct 12, 2016 / andika08 - Oct 22, 2016
|People have to be more careful for choosing their clothes because it may cause some problems
5 - Hello, here's my suggestion Beside that there is A person GIVING comment about their appearance. SEVERAL FEATURES CONCERNED......
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Oct 5, 2016 / Huynh Anh - Oct 22, 2016
|The urban areas should have good traits of rural areas. Issues of living in a large community
3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections for you ... gradually replaced by the crowded...
Writing FeedbackHangPham287 - Oct 13, 2016 / andika08 - Oct 22, 2016
|Every country should develop tourism more, as well as enhance management
5 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections for you After that,It is mean increasing the...
Writing FeedbackYuh - Oct 12, 2016 / andika08 - Oct 22, 2016
|Children development and Tv - essay for ielts task 2
Writing Feedbackmegamedi - Oct 21, 2016 / ryan31 - Oct 22, 2016
|Effects of modern forms of communication such as email and messaging
2 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections for you ... social website, we easily contact...
Writing FeedbackHuynh Anh - Oct 21, 2016 / andika08 - Oct 22, 2016
|The advantages caused to humans when the computer was invented.
5 - When the computer was born, people used it to make their work more efficient. After the invention of computer...
Writing FeedbackQtraam - Oct 17, 2016 / inav321 - Oct 22, 2016
|IELTS. 'the money should be better spent' - Wasteful Space Program - Agree or disagree
5 - I believe it is useful for many people to be spent on dealing with welfare and medical care. .I...
Writing FeedbackNaoki28 - Oct 21, 2016 / inav321 - Oct 22, 2016
|Smokers should find other places to smoke, thus have respect to non-smokers
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 21, 2016 / inav321 - Oct 22, 2016
|The sophisticated processes of making peanut butter
2 - Hello @hanimps97, Here are some feedback: ... butter from harvesting the peanuts to packaging the product into...
Writing Feedbackhanimps97 - Mar 14, 2016 / chloeheuy - Oct 22, 2016
|Do you support that the nuclear technology should be used for constructive purposes?
Writing Feedbackdebby17 - Oct 20, 2016 / eve01 - Oct 22, 2016
|Nursing is the one of the most rewarding profession in the world. Nursing school personal statement.
2 - Allona, your essay is not responding to the prompt requirements at all. What you wrote is a justification essay...
Writing FeedbackNursing_student - Oct 21, 2016 / Holt - Oct 22, 2016
|Why do you think people decide to go to school? Use specific reasons and examples.
5 - Hello again, justivy03! "However, the succeeding paragraphs, the 3rd and the conclusion is not as strong as it...
Writing FeedbackActivelung - Oct 19, 2016 / Activelung - Oct 21, 2016
|Children are better to spend their golden age by seeking knowledge and not earning money
2 - First off, I really like the points that you've made but I think you can maybe organize it to...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 20, 2016 / yjung17 - Oct 21, 2016
|WRITING TASK II - MONEY IS THE ONLY MOTIVATION OF WORKER STAY AT THE SAME WORK
3 - Hello kiki23! Here is my feedback as to your writing. Hopefully this will strengthen your paper later on. I...
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Oct 21, 2016 / Activelung - Oct 21, 2016
|Money is the only reason why people rely on a same company for a long time
2 - generally speaking, it is good essay but it has some mistakes. For example, introduction is not good that you...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Oct 20, 2016 / megamedi - Oct 21, 2016
|How many books have been read at Burnley by men and women?
6 - hi lola ^,^ i would give you some feedback >>>put picture graph that you explain then readers...
Writing FeedbackLola12 - Oct 16, 2016 / eve01 - Oct 21, 2016
|Writing Task II, Contributing factors of working in the same company
2 - Russel, you really are good at developing your reasons in support of a discussion. However, this strength of yours...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 20, 2016 / Holt - Oct 21, 2016
|The majority of people moved to some big cities from their hometown to have a good condition to live
6 - hai samson I have some suggestions for you 1. avoid to use subject pronoun such I, YOU, THEY,...
Writing Feedbacksamson - Oct 10, 2016 / ryan31 - Oct 21, 2016
|People from small villages or remote areas are trying to seek a way to live and work in large cities
4 - Hi, Huynh Anh, you've a readable writing and nice as well, but here is some suggestions for you. ...
Writing FeedbackHuynh Anh - Oct 7, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Oct 21, 2016
|Writing Task 2 Colors As A Reflection Of People's Personality
2 - Hi Farida here some suggestions to improve your writing Apple and Wikipedia use it in their logos (each...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Oct 5, 2016 / Cachaaaaaaaa - Oct 21, 2016
|Writing Task II , Relocating giant industries to regional area
2 - Russel, you actually crafted your essay in a manner that shows an understanding of the prompt. You were able...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 20, 2016 / Holt - Oct 21, 2016
|Games can harm children concentration in studying, but also help them improve their cognitive skills
2 - The number of children playing games through internet online has increased slightly over th e years. (What is the...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 20, 2016 / taariya - Oct 21, 2016
|TED Summary, Draw your future by Patty Dobrowolski
2 - Hi Cachaaaaaaaa, it's a nice and valuable writing then. However, I have some suggestions for you. All you...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 20, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Oct 21, 2016
|Daniel Levitin tells how to figure out a problem before it happens or how to minimise the damage
3 - Ho Yonathan Here some suggestions for your writing and he shared his experience when he cannot could not...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 7, 2016 / Cachaaaaaaaa - Oct 20, 2016
|Modern forms of communication transformed people's minds and their time spent on seeing friends.
2 - Hi Thuytrang here some suggestions for your writing ... has had a negative effect on theirthe social lives....
Writing Feedbackthuytrang0712 - Oct 20, 2016 / Cachaaaaaaaa - Oct 20, 2016
|The benefit of playing sports for human life
2 - Hi there, there are several correction from me to make your writing much better.. keep your health...
Writing Feedbackuliser - Oct 20, 2016 / debby17 - Oct 20, 2016
|Ho Chi Minh City at rush hours
2 - Hi there Uliser... Your writing is good, but it will be much better to do some correction below.....
Writing Feedbackuliser - Oct 20, 2016 / debby17 - Oct 20, 2016
|Facebook and Google Will Stretch Internet Cable from LA to Hong Kong (Article Summary)
4 - Hi Fuzan here some suggestions for your writing between North America and Asia which isare known as ...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 17, 2016 / Cachaaaaaaaa - Oct 20, 2016
|Computers have contributed to medicine, but they brought many hindrances in human development
Writing FeedbackMarcos - Oct 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 20, 2016
|The UK'S Ageing Population In 1985 and Prediction for 2035
2 - Hi Muhammad, I hope my remarks and corrections for your analysis essay is not too late. First stop,...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 20, 2016
|Robots and machines are gradually replacing people in their works.
Writing Feedbackchau97 - Oct 20, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 20, 2016
|Learning language by children is very beneficial. It is my essay for IELTS writing task 2
6 - [Correction] Language is key in the modern world, and we cannot develop ... Personally and i agree are basically...
Writing Feedbackmegamedi - Oct 20, 2016 / DJMI - Oct 20, 2016
|Computers are made with expecting purpose helping people's life more easier. And negatives?
3 - Hi guy, I have just improved something in your paragraph, I hope it is correct and helpful for you....
Writing Feedbackprettyinside - Oct 19, 2016 / Fancl - Oct 20, 2016
|The employment in the modern world, computer era.
Writing FeedbackBill Freo - Oct 20, 2016 / Bill Freo - Oct 20, 2016
|Happy partners were significantly more likely to report better health
4 - Hi Eva, I believe this is my first review of your essay and I hope my suggestions are helpful....
Writing Feedbackeve01 - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|..it's hard to live without it.. The advantages and disadvantages of the invented computer;
3 - Hello Samson!! Making a few changes. Hope it helps!! I would suggest Starting off the esay with the...
Writing Feedbacksamson - Oct 19, 2016 / DoctorWho - Oct 19, 2016
|A Walk to Margaret Falls. (Due Monday) Proof Read + Editing for Descriptive Essay
5 - Hi JC, thank you for writing back and acknowledging our assistance here on EF, I hope your revision is...
Writing FeedbackPewPew - Oct 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|TED SUMMARY - Jim Hemerling: 5 ways to lead in an era of constant change
3 - Hi Rosa, upon reading this summary essay as well as the other essays you have written, it is of...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Oct 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|There are several steps to make a forest. Firstly, by spreading the seeds into the moist soil.
3 - HI Gigih, here's another one from my end. - Nowadays,the ( don't forget your linking verbs ) forest...
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|There are four ways to become powerful when we are speaking in front of people
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|The stress in not our enemy - it may become a friend
3 - Hi Rosa, right of the bat, the title of the essay is quite confusing; Kelly McGonigal: How to...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Oct 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|This Baby Got Herpes After Being Kissed By a Stranger (Article Summary)
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|People's reasons for using the car in city
4 - Other use!! (used) for Taking children to school and to ... Only 15 % transportation used for shooping!!...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 16, 2016 / SaharHdi - Oct 18, 2016
|Caring for people and spreading happiness
4 - Hi Annie, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope to assist you in your writing by providing you...
Writing Feedbackanniele01 - Oct 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 18, 2016
|As Iraqi and coalition forces invade Mosul, the last ISIS stronghold in Iraq
2 - here is my opinions, hope it's useful for you: -a million people >> millions of people -you can use...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 18, 2016 / trangthuynguyen - Oct 18, 2016
|Could a Saturn Moon Harbor Life? (TED Summary)
3 - Hi Fauzan, here's another one from my end; - Cassini Spacecraft had landed and reported - active region...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 18, 2016
|The death of the Thai king throws the country into turmoil
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 18, 2016
|Summarize article : Extremely Dangerous' Hurricane Nicole to Pummel Bermuda
4 - Hi Andika, here's my take on your essay; - Hurricane N icole makemade anthe - effect forto the...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 18, 2016
|Overweight mothers give birth to biologically older babies
2 - This summary is full of problems. Part of the problem with your work is that you use the wrong...
Writing FeedbackBams17 - Oct 18, 2016 / Holt - Oct 18, 2016
|Why are group study sessions more helpful and efficient than studying alone?
6 - Rick, it sounds to me like you were supposed to write a comparison essay based upon the title that...
Writing FeedbackActivelung - Oct 8, 2016 / Holt - Oct 17, 2016
|The Power of Negative Thinking by Tomas Chamorro-premuzic
2 - ... research F or almost a decade between REGARDING people's perception on OF their abilities ... true abilities to...
Writing Feedbackkiev - Oct 17, 2016 / Holt - Oct 17, 2016
|A Day in the Life of Hollywood Paparazzi
7 - Hi Kiki, Below some feedback from me: It IS UNDENIABLEcannot be denied that famous people IS surrounded...
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Oct 13, 2016 / kiev - Oct 17, 2016
|Changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000
2 - The given three pie chart information the chart give information about the spending (...) starting from 1980. 1990...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 16, 2016 / Thuy Trang - Oct 17, 2016
|The ubiquitous fast-paced development in many technological areas
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|A number of jobs have been lost when computers replaced many positions
2 - Hi Luu, below are my thoughts for your essay; - FromOver the last century, - the technology has...
Writing Feedbackltduc97 - Oct 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|Computers can help people save much time and money, but they are not flexible
3 - Hi Tuyet, below are my thoughts on your essay. - In the modern world, the technology has developing...
Writing Feedbacksnowrussia95 - Oct 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|A bucket and pulley system
2 - Hi Linh, first of all, I would like to say that you are very fortunate in discovering this website,...
Writing FeedbackLinhArs - Oct 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|One of the worst effects of tourism is environmental destruction
3 - Hi Ngo, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, please find a few suggestions below; - Tourism ofin many...
Writing Feedbackanhngo - Oct 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
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