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|Sir Ken Robinson, in his presentation on TED Talk, discussed about education that kills creativity
2 - Hello Sasariri i have a twice of advice to you ... human creativity in (the) world education systems...
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|Writing Task 2 - speaking local language helps to understand culture of a country?
3 - hi mr lincoln.. please let me.. please.. to suggest you some advice.. :) The majority of people regard...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 27, 2016 / lanazaldo - Oct 27, 2016
|Cosmopolitan summary- Sharing a Bed with Your Kids Is Not So Great for Their Mental Health
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 27, 2016 / ifraanisa05 - Oct 27, 2016
|Learn Culture from its Language which is the utmost important instrument to communicate with people
3 - Hi nda18. Here are my suggestions for you. ... language is the utmost important(you can also write utmost...
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|The most attraction places to visit by different people living in Australia
3 - Hi.. good writing.. let me give some suggestions.. ..., are presented in the bar chart measured by percentage[it...
Writing Feedbackamrillahmk - Oct 27, 2016 / lanazaldo - Oct 27, 2016
|Comprehending communication relies on cultural mastery of the local language.
Writing Feedbackdils - Oct 27, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 27, 2016
|Is it true, that in order to understand the culture of a country, we must speak the local language?
3 - Hi Yonathan, let me give some advice, perhaps useful for you. 1. For instance, nowadays the college students learn...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 27, 2016 / Dioba - Oct 27, 2016
|Communication via Internet - it simulates a simple dialogue like people had done in the past.
2 - this essay would be able to discuss about ... ... some discussions via internet more easy.is because it...
Writing FeedbackMathew8 - Oct 27, 2016 / amrillahmk - Oct 27, 2016
|Some people think that to lead a successful life a university degree is important.
Writing FeedbackTANJIN - Oct 27, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Oct 27, 2016
|IELTS essay TASK 2; it is easier to understand culture by speaking the language
2 - Hi Rizaldo Let me give you some correction ... able to reflect the way of the communitiescollective thinking...
Writing Feedbacklanazaldo - Oct 27, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 27, 2016
|Both deforestation and global warming are very important issues of human beings in today's world.
3 - Hello Alfa7 there are some advice to you, pay attention if you wish There are lot of problem(s)...
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 27, 2016 / Mathew8 - Oct 27, 2016
|Ken Robinson declared about the importance of creativity in education
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 27, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 27, 2016
|Culture and Language. When we want to learn abroad culture, we have to master the language first.
3 - Hello, Hope you doing well, lemme give you some suggestion ==> ... before we can speak (the) local...
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 27, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Oct 27, 2016
|One way to restore our body and mind is traveling. Article summary - Traveling
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Oct 27, 2016 / dils - Oct 27, 2016
|Sir Ken Robinson in his public speech shared about how the schools kill children's creativity.
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Oct 27, 2016 / alfa7 - Oct 27, 2016
|Media Habits Today - celebrities became the role model for ordinary people
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Oct 26, 2016 / alfa7 - Oct 27, 2016
|'not many succeeded in their own business' - Being Entrepreneur - Advantages and Disadvantages
2 - ... can make people's liveslife more independent. It is as long as when they work, there is no more...
Writing Feedbackibe13 - Oct 27, 2016 / Ucha MSN - Oct 27, 2016
|Writing task 2- The opinion about communication with others via online
5 - ... are appearing especially the easy access to communicationease of communication access by using the internet. Firstly, social...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 27, 2016 / Ucha MSN - Oct 27, 2016
|The modern technology allows to communicate conveniently without meeting face to face directly
NEW - Writing Task 2 (What Are The Advantages Of International Communication Online) the novel invented technology like internet and...
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|Creativity and literacy are very important in education. TED Talk "Do Schools Kill Creativity"
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 27, 2016 / jam_casio51 - Oct 27, 2016
|The common people's live is very interesting. Media for Celebrities or Ordinary People?
4 - Hello ifra! I will give you some opinions about your essay. Introduction: (1) ... radio usually shows thedaily...
Writing Feedbackifraanisa05 - Oct 26, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 27, 2016
|The changes of the headland which are caused by strong tidal, have been illustrated in the diagram
3 - Hello fadhil! I will give you some opinions about your essay. Introduction: (1) ... is that the power...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Oct 26, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 27, 2016
|COMMUNICATION ONLINE - people are now able to keep in contact with others by using their gadgets
3 - The questions: What are the advantages of International communication online? Are there any disadvantages to this? compares to...
Writing Feedbackvinau - Oct 27, 2016 / hirani03 - Oct 27, 2016
|The illustrations shows the process of generating electricity by using wind rotary motor
5 - The illustrationspictures show the process of... Before you put the overall, you have to paraphrase the question. Make sure...
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Oct 27, 2016 / hirani03 - Oct 27, 2016
|What type of wind turbine location is necessary to generate maximum electricity?
3 - Hi Miss Septia These are my correction to finalize your writing. Please, you review them. ^_^ ... by...
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29 - Oct 27, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 27, 2016
|How the electricity can be produced by wind turbine and where is the best location to put it
3 - ... how the electricity can be produced GENERATED by A wind turbine and where is the best APPROPRIATE...
Writing Feedbackifraanisa05 - Oct 27, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 27, 2016
|Owning an enterprise or becoming an employer: CAMBRIDGE BOOK 5.5 - 6.5 | UNIT 6 PAGE 64
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Oct 27, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 27, 2016
|Nowadays people are more interested to have an own company, despite some dangers and drawbacks.
3 - Hi this is my suggestion. 1. ... for competing with other (company) and ready to ... Preposition+Ving---> so you...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Oct 27, 2016 / badafebriani17 - Oct 27, 2016
|The form of a wave-energy machine and several locations that it can be placed
5 - 1. Wind sensor function is accepts a wind and lit generator there are double subject, may you can change...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Oct 27, 2016 / badafebriani17 - Oct 27, 2016
|There are many opportunities to be an entrepreneur - and benefits too.
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Oct 27, 2016 / Holt - Oct 27, 2016
|There are other alternative ways to understand the culture faster, than learning language
Writing Feedbackajibboy - Oct 27, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 27, 2016
|The range of fresh regular teachers in Ontario - back from 2001 to 2007.
5 - 1. it can be seen that DEMAND of french language teachers HAD BEEN bigger than English teachers. (Be careful...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Oct 26, 2016 / Wilyaftika23 - Oct 27, 2016
|There are several people who like to achieve excellence in facing work tasks, and enjoy their job
3 - Fadhil, your conclusion is not properly developed. I do not know if you were taught this in class but,...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Oct 27, 2016 / Holt - Oct 27, 2016
|Wind turbines can be located in different places which means different output, benefits or drawbacks
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Oct 27, 2016 / Beauty17 - Oct 27, 2016
|Statistics of first-year (English/Franch) tutors job some years ago
6 - Hi badafebriani17. Here are my suggestions for you. ... the percentage of the number of teacherteachers who have...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Oct 26, 2016 / IvanMS027 - Oct 27, 2016
|Simple method of producing electricity by wind turbine but troublesome process of its location
3 - Hello, Hope you doing well, lemme give you some corrections ==> The diagrams illustrate turbine by using (the)...
Writing Feedbackibe13 - Oct 27, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Oct 27, 2016
|Each location offers different advantages and disadvantages based on wind strengths and scenery look
3 - Hello Aini, i will give you some suggestion : The turbine consist of blades, steel tower, wind sensor, generator,...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Oct 27, 2016 / faizunaa17 - Oct 27, 2016
|The figures inform on the design/location of a machine that can produce electricity from wind power
2 - Hi Ivan, Here's my contributions towards your report summary of IELTS writing task 1. I hope you can follow...
Writing FeedbackIvanMS027 - Oct 27, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 27, 2016
|The electricity generating design from wind turbine and its best place as location
2 - Hi Miss Meireza.. These are my thoughts towards your writing. Hopefully, these can finalize yours. Please, meet my notes...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Oct 27, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 27, 2016
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 : CAMBRIDGE BOOK 5.5 - 6.5 | UNIT 5 PAGE 56 - WIND TURBINE
2 - Aloha Faiz, here are my thoughts (1) I still found some mistakes in using adjective clause - ...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Oct 27, 2016 / ibe13 - Oct 27, 2016
|News about ordinary people bring other people's attention for local problems
5 - Hello reski. let me give you some suggestions 1. Because of that, people can know local, international or...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Oct 26, 2016 / badafebriani17 - Oct 27, 2016
|Kids tend to eat what they like or do want they want to do, without considering the adverse effects
5 - Hello nuraini, i will give you suggestion: 1. Be care full singular and plural/ countable and uncountable noun...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Oct 25, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Oct 27, 2016
|Physical education for students - sports lessons as part of the curriculum?
Writing Feedbacksydneynguyen - Oct 26, 2016 / sydneynguyen - Oct 27, 2016
|Writing Task 2-media-celebrity-ordinary people. On which group media should focus more?
6 - Hello Pram! Allow me to give you some suggestion. ..., and Medias were better to expose ... ...and...
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Oct 26, 2016 / nurainiyusuf16 - Oct 27, 2016
|The proportion of money spent on different basic necessities in a country, during six decades
2 - Initially, the proportion of food at 11.2% increased dramatically to 34% in 2010. ...saw an alteration from2.4% to 4.5%...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Oct 27, 2016 / Pramudia27 - Oct 27, 2016
|Naturan process - Erosion of a headland
3 - Hi Ilmi. These are a few suggestions to improve your writing. Hopefully, these can help and finalize yours. ...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Oct 26, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 27, 2016
|Essay about food waste in the past, present and future - introduction writing
3 - Hi Kylian. I think I can help you create a stronger introduction. Here is what I am thinking: ...
Writing Feedbackkylianligtelijn - Oct 26, 2016 / Holt - Oct 27, 2016
|13-year-old student in one school choose the study.
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Oct 26, 2016 / IvanMS027 - Oct 27, 2016
|A slight increase in the recruitment of French language teachers in Ontario between 2001 and 2007
3 - Hello Anna! Allow me to give you some suggestion. Overall, there was a slight increase increased in the...
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Oct 26, 2016 / nurainiyusuf16 - Oct 27, 2016
|Technology has encouraged many developed countries to advance space exploration
2 - Hi Miss Dhyla.. These are my thoughts towards your essay. Hopefully, these can help you. ... space exploration,...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Oct 26, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 27, 2016
|Mission going to outer space; Space Exploration, National Pride or Internationa Effort?
2 - Hi, that is great feedback essay but i think you need to state some of the ways space exploration...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Oct 26, 2016 / chikomm16 - Oct 26, 2016
|Every student should be encouraged, regardless his achivement
2 - ... improvement related to their academic history are the ones who should be rewarded. I firmly believe their...
Writing Feedbackamrillahmk - Oct 26, 2016 / collegebound28 - Oct 26, 2016
|Cherishing my goverment that cares for people's health and knowledge
2 - There are problems with your spelling and grammar throughout the essay. Let me tell you something though, while other...
Writing FeedbackQuetquet103 - Oct 26, 2016 / Holt - Oct 26, 2016
|There is another side of people's life that need to be served at the public TV - no more gossips!
2 - Hi mardian24, I have some mistakes want to show u about your writing Most television programs show about activities...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Oct 26, 2016 / Quetquet103 - Oct 26, 2016
|The graph provides information regarding the recruitment number of English & French language tutors
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Oct 26, 2016 / faizunaa17 - Oct 26, 2016
|Mostly famous people such as entertainment workers and sport athletes dominate in news
2 - He famousFamouspeople such as entertainment workers entertainer and sport ... ... know other side of livelife that need more...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Oct 26, 2016 / faizunaa17 - Oct 26, 2016
|Using the Internet to communicate have changed our lives
2 - Hello, i will give you suggestion: And nowadays , people usually use Internet ... Because in the first...
Writing Feedbacksamson - Oct 26, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Oct 26, 2016
|We Should Pay Too Much Attention to Celebrities Lives or Ordinary People?
NEW - Writing Task 2 The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationship of celebrities such as actors,...
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|It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments
Writing Feedbackminhphamqb - Oct 26, 2016 / minhphamqb - Oct 26, 2016
|The controversial issue about whether it is necessary to have a fixed punishment for offenders
2 - Hello Kuokiman :) Let me give you some comments :) Perhaps, next time you should attachment your case...
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