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|The employment in the modern world, computer era.
Writing FeedbackBill Freo - Oct 20, 2016 / Bill Freo - Oct 20, 2016
|Happy partners were significantly more likely to report better health
4 - Hi Eva, I believe this is my first review of your essay and I hope my suggestions are helpful....
Writing Feedbackeve01 - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|..it's hard to live without it.. The advantages and disadvantages of the invented computer;
3 - Hello Samson!! Making a few changes. Hope it helps!! I would suggest Starting off the esay with the...
Writing Feedbacksamson - Oct 19, 2016 / DoctorWho - Oct 19, 2016
|A Walk to Margaret Falls. (Due Monday) Proof Read + Editing for Descriptive Essay
5 - Hi JC, thank you for writing back and acknowledging our assistance here on EF, I hope your revision is...
Writing FeedbackPewPew - Oct 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|TED SUMMARY - Jim Hemerling: 5 ways to lead in an era of constant change
3 - Hi Rosa, upon reading this summary essay as well as the other essays you have written, it is of...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Oct 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|There are several steps to make a forest. Firstly, by spreading the seeds into the moist soil.
3 - HI Gigih, here's another one from my end. - Nowadays,the ( don't forget your linking verbs ) forest...
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|There are four ways to become powerful when we are speaking in front of people
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|The stress in not our enemy - it may become a friend
3 - Hi Rosa, right of the bat, the title of the essay is quite confusing; Kelly McGonigal: How to...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Oct 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|This Baby Got Herpes After Being Kissed By a Stranger (Article Summary)
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|People's reasons for using the car in city
4 - Other use!! (used) for Taking children to school and to ... Only 15 % transportation used for shooping!!...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 16, 2016 / SaharHdi - Oct 18, 2016
|Caring for people and spreading happiness
4 - Hi Annie, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope to assist you in your writing by providing you...
Writing Feedbackanniele01 - Oct 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 18, 2016
|As Iraqi and coalition forces invade Mosul, the last ISIS stronghold in Iraq
2 - here is my opinions, hope it's useful for you: -a million people >> millions of people -you can use...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 18, 2016 / trangthuynguyen - Oct 18, 2016
|Could a Saturn Moon Harbor Life? (TED Summary)
3 - Hi Fauzan, here's another one from my end; - Cassini Spacecraft had landed and reported - active region...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 18, 2016
|The death of the Thai king throws the country into turmoil
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 18, 2016
|Summarize article : Extremely Dangerous' Hurricane Nicole to Pummel Bermuda
4 - Hi Andika, here's my take on your essay; - Hurricane N icole makemade anthe - effect forto the...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 18, 2016
|Overweight mothers give birth to biologically older babies
2 - This summary is full of problems. Part of the problem with your work is that you use the wrong...
Writing FeedbackBams17 - Oct 18, 2016 / Holt - Oct 18, 2016
|Why are group study sessions more helpful and efficient than studying alone?
6 - Rick, it sounds to me like you were supposed to write a comparison essay based upon the title that...
Writing FeedbackActivelung - Oct 8, 2016 / Holt - Oct 17, 2016
|The Power of Negative Thinking by Tomas Chamorro-premuzic
2 - ... research F or almost a decade between REGARDING people's perception on OF their abilities ... true abilities to...
Writing Feedbackkiev - Oct 17, 2016 / Holt - Oct 17, 2016
|A Day in the Life of Hollywood Paparazzi
7 - Hi Kiki, Below some feedback from me: It IS UNDENIABLEcannot be denied that famous people IS surrounded...
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Oct 13, 2016 / kiev - Oct 17, 2016
|Changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000
2 - The given three pie chart information the chart give information about the spending (...) starting from 1980. 1990...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 16, 2016 / Thuy Trang - Oct 17, 2016
|The ubiquitous fast-paced development in many technological areas
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|A number of jobs have been lost when computers replaced many positions
2 - Hi Luu, below are my thoughts for your essay; - FromOver the last century, - the technology has...
Writing Feedbackltduc97 - Oct 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|Computers can help people save much time and money, but they are not flexible
3 - Hi Tuyet, below are my thoughts on your essay. - In the modern world, the technology has developing...
Writing Feedbacksnowrussia95 - Oct 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|A bucket and pulley system
2 - Hi Linh, first of all, I would like to say that you are very fortunate in discovering this website,...
Writing FeedbackLinhArs - Oct 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|One of the worst effects of tourism is environmental destruction
3 - Hi Ngo, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, please find a few suggestions below; - Tourism ofin many...
Writing Feedbackanhngo - Oct 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|Negative impacts of tourism and suggestions to improve it better
2 - Hi Emily, WELCOME to this very helpful and valuable website, Essay Forum has helped a lot of students and...
Writing FeedbackEmily Tran - Oct 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|Topic: According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holi
6 - Hi Linh, Let's start small as i suggested in previous post. You could start with short writings (around...
Writing Feedbacklinhenglish - Oct 15, 2016 / Adreanna - Oct 15, 2016
|Motorways reduce time and distance of arriving to other cities, but they are also dangerous
8 - Oh that's great to hear, Danial! There's nothing more than a word of approval and appreciation of our inputs...
Writing Feedbackpluskid - Oct 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 15, 2016
|A Questionnaire essay : What values do you share with XX's "Pleasant Life" philosophy?
Writing FeedbackKillua - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 15, 2016
|TED Talk "How Fear of Nuclear Power is Hurting The Environment"
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 12, 2016 / andika08 - Oct 15, 2016
|Discuss about computers are replacing more and more jobs nowadays.
2 - Hi nguyeneze7496. here are my suggestions for you: ... believed to bring a more modern and convenient life...
Writing Feedbacknguyeneze7496 - Oct 14, 2016 / ivanmsiegfried - Oct 14, 2016
|Describe some jobs positions that may be lost because of computers, and discuss at least one problem
2 - Hi Huynh Anh. your explanation is good and interesting either. here is my suggestion for you ... (AI)...
Writing FeedbackHuynh Anh - Oct 14, 2016 / ivanmsiegfried - Oct 14, 2016
|TASK 1 - downward and upward trend concerning value of fuel exports.
2 - Hi Timur_Ergashev, Check the amendment below. Overall,there werewas at highest amount in 2005 ... However,this trend which was...
Writing FeedbackTimur_Ergashev - Oct 14, 2016 / Naoki28 - Oct 14, 2016
|Based on the previous question, what do you think XX's business will be like in the next ten years?
6 - Hi Yunyi, thanks for your feedback and for appreciating what we do here on EF, well, I changed "have"...
Writing FeedbackKillua - Oct 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 14, 2016
|The government must make choices about how to spend money from taxes
Writing Feedbackzhdw1128 - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 14, 2016
|The more people travel, the more rubbish are thrown away.
6 - Hi Nguyen. please find additional suggestions below; - I thinkbelieve this statement is true - because the number...
Writing Feedbackalvisphantom - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 14, 2016
|Cuba's Underwater Jewels Are in Tourism's Path
3 - Hallo Ryan31, I will give you my opinions about your article summarize ..., marine life in Cuba was(because...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Oct 13, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 14, 2016
|In the past, most people would like to live in small house and have a big garden
5 - Hello Trang. I will give you some opinions about your essay. Introduction: (1) There are some grammatical errors,...
Writing FeedbackTrang Antigone - Oct 10, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 14, 2016
|Should we let ex-prisoners, who have become good people, talk to youngster about committing a crime?
4 - Hello nguyendo, I will give you some opinions about your essay Introduction : "It is true that a...
Writing Feedbacknguyendo - Oct 13, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 14, 2016
|What effects will these birth rate predictions have on developed countries
2 - Hallo Naoki28, I'll give you my opinion about your essay. Introduction: I think it will be good enough,...
Writing FeedbackNaoki28 - Oct 14, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 14, 2016
|Article review _ Are crocodiles warm or cuddly mothers?
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 13, 2016 / randompenguin - Oct 14, 2016
|What happened that people replace their work by use computer?
2 - Hi Trang I suppose that this essay is not for scholarship purpose but for IELTS one. Please kindly...
Writing FeedbackTrang Antigone - Oct 14, 2016 / Adreanna - Oct 14, 2016
|Showing interest in Engineering and which program within this appeals to me - MY BROWN SUPPLEMENT
4 - Hi Erica, I believe this is my first time to review your writing projects and I can assure you...
Writing Feedbackericaleleyang - Oct 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 13, 2016
|How the film industry portrays women and men in a particular role ( Genre Movie)
Writing Feedbacke76971072 - Oct 12, 2016 / e76971072 - Oct 13, 2016
|Unlike tourists in the 1960s and '70s, tourists return home with no experience of the local culture
Writing FeedbackQuetquet103 - Oct 12, 2016 / Activelung - Oct 13, 2016
|Keep your goals to yourself by Derek Sivers
2 - Hi Patta, please find a few additional suggestions for your analysis essay. - Many people have personal goals...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 13, 2016
|PTE - Essay writing practise : Parents should be held legally responsible for their children's acts.
6 - Hi Venkat, no worries at all, we are here to support you in all the endeavors you may have.We...
Writing Feedbackvenkat_v - Oct 12, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 13, 2016
|Every country should develop tourism more, as well as enhance management
3 - Hi Yuh would like to give some opinions about your writing ... may cause the lack of accomodations...
Writing FeedbackYuh - Oct 12, 2016 / naelendra - Oct 13, 2016
|How Wild Animals Are Hacking Life in the City
4 - Hi there, I want to give advice There are several example of this. (There are several examples of...
Writing Feedbackoktoberlin12 - Oct 11, 2016 / Afdhel - Oct 13, 2016
|10 things we need to apply in the way we talk to other people without feeling bored
2 - Hi Russell. In this moment, I do not suggest about your summary because the basic rule for creating the...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 12, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 12, 2016
|"Mentor is not always those one who still alive" - TED Summary by Tai Lopez (The law of 33%)
2 - Hi Russell.. These below are my thoughts about your summary. Hopefully, those can help you greatly and finalize yours...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 12, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 12, 2016
|TED SUMMARY : OCEAN LIFE IN THE SEA FLOOR
2 - Hi Riandi.. These are my thoughts towards your summary. I hope you review my notes and deal with them....
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Oct 12, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 12, 2016
|TOEFL independent writing: People now can better protect the environment than they could in the past
3 - Thank you so much! The unidiomatic sentences like "intenser sense of protecting the environment" are my headaches, I can't...
Writing Feedbackthinkhowxh - Oct 8, 2016 / thinkhowxh - Oct 12, 2016
|The Key to Family Happiness is Really Simple
3 - Hi Muhamad, before I give you a few suggestion in enhancing your essay, I must say that I agree,...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Oct 12, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 12, 2016
|Why the letter X represents undefined or an unknown?
3 - Hi Patta, please find a few suggestions the will hopefully be helpful to your revision. - Letter 'X'...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 12, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 12, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2. It is generally agreed today that when a country develop its technologies, the long-es
Writing FeedbackMaximKlopunov99 - Oct 11, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 12, 2016
|Give me some advice about How to introduce yourself?
4 - Hi Bambang, below are additional thoughts for your revision. - Speaker TED-xTED speaker X talked about - how...
Writing FeedbackBams17 - Oct 12, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 12, 2016
|Bringing enjoyment. Movies take us to the world of imagination.
4 - By providing the context when language is used, movies support us so that we can study the language faster...
Writing Feedbackwaterforce1205 - Oct 8, 2016 / Huynh Anh - Oct 12, 2016
|Almost all families at present are small - not as the same as in the past, when families were larger
2 - Hello Your text is understandable, but some of the sentences sound little awkward. Check the applied corrections below:...
Writing Feedbackltduc97 - Oct 12, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Oct 12, 2016
|John McWhorter described why we -as human- have to learn different languages
2 - English is taking over the world, everybody is speaking English, the language of internet, language ... >>this is spoken...
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