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|Games can harm children concentration in studying, but also help them improve their cognitive skills
2 - The number of children playing games through internet online has increased slightly over th e years. (What is the...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 20, 2016 / taariya - Oct 21, 2016
|TED Summary, Draw your future by Patty Dobrowolski
2 - Hi Cachaaaaaaaa, it's a nice and valuable writing then. However, I have some suggestions for you. All you...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 20, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Oct 21, 2016
|Daniel Levitin tells how to figure out a problem before it happens or how to minimise the damage
3 - Ho Yonathan Here some suggestions for your writing and he shared his experience when he cannot could not...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 7, 2016 / Cachaaaaaaaa - Oct 20, 2016
|Modern forms of communication transformed people's minds and their time spent on seeing friends.
2 - Hi Thuytrang here some suggestions for your writing ... has had a negative effect on theirthe social lives....
Writing Feedbackthuytrang0712 - Oct 20, 2016 / Cachaaaaaaaa - Oct 20, 2016
|The diagrams display the tools and steps to create cement in the cement production
2 - Hi Faridadwi Here some suggestions to improve your writing We can see that It is obviously seen that...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Oct 10, 2016 / Cachaaaaaaaa - Oct 20, 2016
|The benefit of playing sports for human life
2 - Hi there, there are several correction from me to make your writing much better.. keep your health...
Writing Feedbackuliser - Oct 20, 2016 / debby17 - Oct 20, 2016
|Ho Chi Minh City at rush hours
2 - Hi there Uliser... Your writing is good, but it will be much better to do some correction below.....
Writing Feedbackuliser - Oct 20, 2016 / debby17 - Oct 20, 2016
|Facebook and Google Will Stretch Internet Cable from LA to Hong Kong (Article Summary)
3 - Hi Fauzan, here's another one from my end; - TheThis two internet colossal - collaboratecollaboration to build advance...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 20, 2016
|Computers have contributed to medicine, but they brought many hindrances in human development
Writing FeedbackMarcos - Oct 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 20, 2016
|The UK'S Ageing Population In 1985 and Prediction for 2035
2 - Hi Muhammad, I hope my remarks and corrections for your analysis essay is not too late. First stop,...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 20, 2016
|Robots and machines are gradually replacing people in their works.
Writing Feedbackchau97 - Oct 20, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 20, 2016
|Learning language by children is very beneficial. It is my essay for IELTS writing task 2
6 - [Correction] Language is key in the modern world, and we cannot develop ... Personally and i agree are basically...
Writing Feedbackmegamedi - Oct 20, 2016 / DJMI - Oct 20, 2016
|Computers are made with expecting purpose helping people's life more easier. And negatives?
3 - Hi guy, I have just improved something in your paragraph, I hope it is correct and helpful for you....
Writing Feedbackprettyinside - Oct 19, 2016 / Fancl - Oct 20, 2016
|The employment in the modern world, computer era.
Writing FeedbackBill Freo - Oct 20, 2016 / Bill Freo - Oct 20, 2016
|Happy partners were significantly more likely to report better health
4 - Hi Eva, I believe this is my first review of your essay and I hope my suggestions are helpful....
Writing Feedbackeve01 - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|..it's hard to live without it.. The advantages and disadvantages of the invented computer;
3 - Hello Samson!! Making a few changes. Hope it helps!! I would suggest Starting off the esay with the...
Writing Feedbacksamson - Oct 19, 2016 / DoctorWho - Oct 19, 2016
|A Walk to Margaret Falls. (Due Monday) Proof Read + Editing for Descriptive Essay
5 - Hi JC, thank you for writing back and acknowledging our assistance here on EF, I hope your revision is...
Writing FeedbackPewPew - Oct 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|TED SUMMARY - Jim Hemerling: 5 ways to lead in an era of constant change
3 - Hi Rosa, upon reading this summary essay as well as the other essays you have written, it is of...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Oct 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|There are several steps to make a forest. Firstly, by spreading the seeds into the moist soil.
3 - HI Gigih, here's another one from my end. - Nowadays,the ( don't forget your linking verbs ) forest...
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|There are four ways to become powerful when we are speaking in front of people
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|The stress in not our enemy - it may become a friend
2 - Hi Rosa, right of the bat, the title of the essay is quite confusing; Kelly McGonigal: How to...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Oct 19, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 19, 2016
|This Baby Got Herpes After Being Kissed By a Stranger (Article Summary)
2 - Fauzan, it looks like the summary is informative but in need of grammar correction in order to make it...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 19, 2016 / Holt - Oct 19, 2016
|People's reasons for using the car in city
4 - Other use!! (used) for Taking children to school and to ... Only 15 % transportation used for shooping!!...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 16, 2016 / SaharHdi - Oct 18, 2016
|Caring for people and spreading happiness
4 - Hi Annie, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope to assist you in your writing by providing you...
Writing Feedbackanniele01 - Oct 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 18, 2016
|As Iraqi and coalition forces invade Mosul, the last ISIS stronghold in Iraq
2 - here is my opinions, hope it's useful for you: -a million people >> millions of people -you can use...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 18, 2016 / trangthuynguyen - Oct 18, 2016
|Could a Saturn Moon Harbor Life? (TED Summary)
3 - Hi Fauzan, here's another one from my end; - Cassini Spacecraft had landed and reported - active region...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 18, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 18, 2016
|The death of the Thai king throws the country into turmoil
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 18, 2016
|Summarize article : Extremely Dangerous' Hurricane Nicole to Pummel Bermuda
4 - Hi Andika, here's my take on your essay; - Hurricane N icole makemade anthe - effect forto the...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 18, 2016
|Overweight mothers give birth to biologically older babies
2 - This summary is full of problems. Part of the problem with your work is that you use the wrong...
Writing FeedbackBams17 - Oct 18, 2016 / Holt - Oct 18, 2016
|Why are group study sessions more helpful and efficient than studying alone?
6 - Rick, it sounds to me like you were supposed to write a comparison essay based upon the title that...
Writing FeedbackActivelung - Oct 8, 2016 / Holt - Oct 17, 2016
|The Power of Negative Thinking by Tomas Chamorro-premuzic
2 - ... research F or almost a decade between REGARDING people's perception on OF their abilities ... true abilities to...
Writing Feedbackkiev - Oct 17, 2016 / Holt - Oct 17, 2016
|A Day in the Life of Hollywood Paparazzi
7 - Hi Kiki, Below some feedback from me: It IS UNDENIABLEcannot be denied that famous people IS surrounded...
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Oct 13, 2016 / kiev - Oct 17, 2016
|Changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000
2 - The given three pie chart information the chart give information about the spending (...) starting from 1980. 1990...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 16, 2016 / Thuy Trang - Oct 17, 2016
|The ubiquitous fast-paced development in many technological areas
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|A number of jobs have been lost when computers replaced many positions
2 - Hi Luu, below are my thoughts for your essay; - FromOver the last century, - the technology has...
Writing Feedbackltduc97 - Oct 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|Computers can help people save much time and money, but they are not flexible
3 - Hi Tuyet, below are my thoughts on your essay. - In the modern world, the technology has developing...
Writing Feedbacksnowrussia95 - Oct 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|A bucket and pulley system
2 - Hi Linh, first of all, I would like to say that you are very fortunate in discovering this website,...
Writing FeedbackLinhArs - Oct 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|One of the worst effects of tourism is environmental destruction
3 - Hi Ngo, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, please find a few suggestions below; - Tourism ofin many...
Writing Feedbackanhngo - Oct 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|Negative impacts of tourism and suggestions to improve it better
2 - Hi Emily, WELCOME to this very helpful and valuable website, Essay Forum has helped a lot of students and...
Writing FeedbackEmily Tran - Oct 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 16, 2016
|Topic: According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holi
6 - Hi Linh, Let's start small as i suggested in previous post. You could start with short writings (around...
Writing Feedbacklinhenglish - Oct 15, 2016 / Adreanna - Oct 15, 2016
|Motorways reduce time and distance of arriving to other cities, but they are also dangerous
8 - Oh that's great to hear, Danial! There's nothing more than a word of approval and appreciation of our inputs...
Writing Feedbackpluskid - Oct 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 15, 2016
|A Questionnaire essay : What values do you share with XX's "Pleasant Life" philosophy?
Writing FeedbackKillua - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 15, 2016
|TED Talk "How Fear of Nuclear Power is Hurting The Environment"
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 12, 2016 / andika08 - Oct 15, 2016
|Discuss about computers are replacing more and more jobs nowadays.
2 - Hi nguyeneze7496. here are my suggestions for you: ... believed to bring a more modern and convenient life...
Writing Feedbacknguyeneze7496 - Oct 14, 2016 / ivanmsiegfried - Oct 14, 2016
|Describe some jobs positions that may be lost because of computers, and discuss at least one problem
2 - Hi Huynh Anh. your explanation is good and interesting either. here is my suggestion for you ... (AI)...
Writing FeedbackHuynh Anh - Oct 14, 2016 / ivanmsiegfried - Oct 14, 2016
|TASK 1 - downward and upward trend concerning value of fuel exports.
2 - Hi Timur_Ergashev, Check the amendment below. Overall,there werewas at highest amount in 2005 ... However,this trend which was...
Writing FeedbackTimur_Ergashev - Oct 14, 2016 / Naoki28 - Oct 14, 2016
|Based on the previous question, what do you think XX's business will be like in the next ten years?
6 - Hi Yunyi, thanks for your feedback and for appreciating what we do here on EF, well, I changed "have"...
Writing FeedbackKillua - Oct 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 14, 2016
|The government must make choices about how to spend money from taxes
Writing Feedbackzhdw1128 - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 14, 2016
|The more people travel, the more rubbish are thrown away.
6 - Hi Nguyen. please find additional suggestions below; - I thinkbelieve this statement is true - because the number...
Writing Feedbackalvisphantom - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 14, 2016
|Cuba's Underwater Jewels Are in Tourism's Path
3 - Hallo Ryan31, I will give you my opinions about your article summarize ..., marine life in Cuba was(because...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Oct 13, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 14, 2016
|In the past, most people would like to live in small house and have a big garden
5 - Hello Trang. I will give you some opinions about your essay. Introduction: (1) There are some grammatical errors,...
Writing FeedbackTrang Antigone - Oct 10, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 14, 2016
|Should we let ex-prisoners, who have become good people, talk to youngster about committing a crime?
4 - Hello nguyendo, I will give you some opinions about your essay Introduction : "It is true that a...
Writing Feedbacknguyendo - Oct 13, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 14, 2016
|What effects will these birth rate predictions have on developed countries
2 - Hallo Naoki28, I'll give you my opinion about your essay. Introduction: I think it will be good enough,...
Writing FeedbackNaoki28 - Oct 14, 2016 / septiadara29 - Oct 14, 2016
|Article review _ Are crocodiles warm or cuddly mothers?
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Oct 13, 2016 / randompenguin - Oct 14, 2016
|What happened that people replace their work by use computer?
2 - Hi Trang I suppose that this essay is not for scholarship purpose but for IELTS one. Please kindly...
Writing FeedbackTrang Antigone - Oct 14, 2016 / Adreanna - Oct 14, 2016
|Showing interest in Engineering and which program within this appeals to me - MY BROWN SUPPLEMENT
4 - Hi Erica, I believe this is my first time to review your writing projects and I can assure you...
Writing Feedbackericaleleyang - Oct 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 13, 2016
|How the film industry portrays women and men in a particular role ( Genre Movie)
Writing Feedbacke76971072 - Oct 12, 2016 / e76971072 - Oct 13, 2016
|Unlike tourists in the 1960s and '70s, tourists return home with no experience of the local culture
Writing FeedbackQuetquet103 - Oct 12, 2016 / Activelung - Oct 13, 2016
|Keep your goals to yourself by Derek Sivers
2 - Hi Patta, please find a few additional suggestions for your analysis essay. - Many people have personal goals...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 13, 2016
|PTE - Essay writing practise : Parents should be held legally responsible for their children's acts.
6 - Hi Venkat, no worries at all, we are here to support you in all the endeavors you may have.We...
Writing Feedbackvenkat_v - Oct 12, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 13, 2016
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