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|Star basketball player endorses Hillary Clinton
3 - Cavalier stars basketball player STAR, James LeBron [NEED COMMA] has supported Hillary Clinton for TO BECOME THE...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 4, 2016
|Free trade across countries. Tuesday, October 4, 2016
3 - Hi Erwin.. these below are my suggestions for your essay. Hopefully, my notes can help you others argue...
Writing Feedbackerwiin1 - Oct 4, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 4, 2016
|A research published that the amount of ivory elephants in Africa were significantly decreased
2 - Hi PHA Let me give you some advice ... elephants in Africa were significantly decrease(decreased) of demand...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 4, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 4, 2016
|Article Summary: Digital advertising: Doesn't ad up
3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections This year'sRecently, advertising week event ... ... Google...
Writing Feedbackerwiin1 - Oct 4, 2016 / andika08 - Oct 4, 2016
|Anthony Goldbloom told his worries about his niece, Yahli, 9 months old.
5 - Hello, rosadesiana! Your essay is good, but I would give you corrections 1. ... most of professions...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Oct 3, 2016 / erwiin1 - Oct 4, 2016
|Article Summary: One of two lions that escaped from an enclosure in Leipzig zoo in Germany
Writing Feedbackgoldieu - Oct 3, 2016 / fauzankrn - Oct 4, 2016
|TED Summary: How to Stay Calm When You Know You'll be Stressed By Daniel Levitin
3 - Hi Fitri12.. Let me give you some advice.. ... stressful moments such as loosinglosing home keys ... ...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Oct 4, 2016 / sasariri - Oct 4, 2016
|Article Summary: National Geographic; Thoughie dies and species goes extinct
Writing Feedbackkorbansuspendcuy - Oct 3, 2016 / Fitri12 - Oct 4, 2016
|Kang Lee: Can you really tell if a kid is lying? (TED Summary)
7 - Hi Sasa, it's my pleasure to share regarding your writing. Sorry to say, your writing is confusing, since...
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 3, 2016 / Fitri12 - Oct 4, 2016
|The hidden light of Afghanistan (TED Summary)
4 - Helllo my frined I will try to give you some comments Afghanistan people were suffering from Taliban tribe...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Sep 27, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 4, 2016
|Being a workman or student? Graduates are easy to find in coffee shops, boutiques or other companies
2 - I agree with you 100% UNLESS the individual wants to become an entrepreneur. If someone can break at...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Oct 3, 2016 / Nishi7409 - Oct 4, 2016
|Hurricane Matthew due to hit Haiti with 210kph winds today
3 - Haiti faces a flsh flodds and EXTREME wind storm extremely which was IS a terrible hurricane. Tha THE...
Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Oct 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 4, 2016
|Nowadays, young people need guidance from adults. Should they take a job before go to university?
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Oct 3, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 4, 2016
|TED Summary : Street Art With A message Of Hope And Peace by El Seed
4 - The most interesting part was its Caligraffiti which is a mix between Calligraphy and Graffiti. The most interesting part...
Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Oct 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 4, 2016
|Article summary: Once Sleepy Singapore Has Become Asia's World City-While Hong Kong Is Lagging
3 - ....and two prominent marketS in the region ... .., which according to the writer asIS a result of ......
Writing Feedbackkiev - Oct 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 4, 2016
|Success is a continuous journey (TED Summary)
4 - Many people think that success is just one straight way. This is can[DOUBLE VERBS] explain why dopeople reach success...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 3, 2016
|An Article Summary: Climate Change Could Destroy Wild Relatives of Cereals By 2070
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Oct 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 3, 2016
|Human bones can by recreated in laboratory nowadays.
2 - Hi Ifan.. Here are my thoughts throws your summary. As Intellegent INTELLIGENT society, researchers have utterly (...)...
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Oct 3, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 3, 2016
|The speaker, James Oliver, talked about the importances of children to learn about healthy food.
2 - Hi, Aris05 I love to read your review here some advice to improve your writing In that video,...
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Oct 3, 2016 / Cachaaaaaaaa - Oct 3, 2016
|Strangers are not dangerous - we should talk to them keeping in mind cultural differences
6 - Hai, Yonathan. here are my thoughts ButHowever , Kio stated that most strangers ... most strangers are...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 3, 2016 / Aris05 - Oct 3, 2016
|Students do not continue their study directly after graduated from Senior High School or University
2 - Hi.. I have some suggestions for you.. ... or university believe that if they working first[work] before continue[continuing]...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Oct 3, 2016 / korbansuspendcuy - Oct 3, 2016
|How Big is the Ocean? It covers roughly 71% of Earth's surface.
5 - Hi erwin, here are my thoughts ..., consisting of five component basins component that are called the Atlantic...
Writing Feedbackerwiin1 - Oct 3, 2016 / Aris05 - Oct 3, 2016
|One of the tremendous hurricanes, called Matthew, was going to surge Haiti
2 - good essay.. just some slight grammar errors.. it was on [the] fourth grade for[of] dangerous level matthew...
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Oct 3, 2016 / korbansuspendcuy - Oct 3, 2016
|The Jakarta Post Summary: Sri Mulyani Indrawati 'the soft side of the iron lady'
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 3, 2016 / kiki23 - Oct 3, 2016
|Gene-Ocide, The Promise and Perit of "gene drives" (Article Summary)
3 - Hello sasariri, this is some corrections for me. And feel free to correct my writing too, thanks ......because...
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 3, 2016 / mem77 - Oct 3, 2016
|The issue of what should young people do directly after graduation from high school.
NEW - Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what...
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|Language and Science Course Enrolments at Redbrick College of Higher Education
NEW - The line graph presents how many students who registered in language and science courses at Redbrick College of Higher...
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|Global Population growth, box by box - new analog teaching technology
2 - Hello, Lemme give you some suggestion ==> Hans Rosling was launching(had launched) a brand new analog teaching ......
Writing FeedbackMFES2016 - Oct 3, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Oct 3, 2016
|Downloadable and printable clothing may be coming to our closets soon.
2 - Hello Goldieu, I want to you obtain some suggestions from me. here we go: Downloadable,and printable clothing...
Writing Feedbackgoldieu - Oct 3, 2016 / alfa7 - Oct 3, 2016
|Article Summary Task 1: High-living geckos survive snowy peaks by cuddling up
2 - Hello Yonathan I have some advice to you how cold-blood lizard id able to survive the freezing heights...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 3, 2016 / Alamsyah Ismail - Oct 3, 2016
|Dance is the language, and social dance is an expression that emerges from a community.
2 - Hello, Alamsyah Ismail! Your essay is very good, but I would give a spelling correction in your essay...
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Oct 3, 2016 / erwiin1 - Oct 3, 2016
|TED Summary - Joel Levine: Why we need to go back to Mars
2 - Hi, Abrahamlincoln! I would give you the corrections for your essay 1. revealed evidences (evidence ) that...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 3, 2016 / erwiin1 - Oct 3, 2016
|The today's world has three major sectors which created circumstances of land degradation
3 - Hai Alfa I have known the process of writing this post. However, you have to refer the explanation based...
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 2, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 3, 2016
|Article Summary - Russia and MH 17 Brought to BUK
3 - Hello, Abrahamlincoln! Your essay is good, but I would give you corrections 1. Australia, Belgium Malaysia and...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 3, 2016 / erwiin1 - Oct 3, 2016
|An Eruption at Rinjani in Indonesia Traps Hundreds of Tourists (Article Summary)
2 - Hello You've done well. However, there are inputs for you. Barujari mount which is located in inside caldera...
Writing Feedbackfauzankrn - Oct 3, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 3, 2016
|Writing Task 1: The Men and Women Attending Various Evening Courses at an adult education centre
2 - Hi Goldvina, Welcome to EssayForum :) The detailed descriptions below are my contributions towards your report summary of...
Writing Feedbackgoldieu - Oct 3, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 3, 2016
|TED Summary: A Rich Life with Less Stuff: The Minimalists
4 - Hi Fitri, Your summary is excellent. The topic is interesting and informative. However, I noticed some grammatical issues. -Luckily,...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Oct 3, 2016 / Iedha01 - Oct 3, 2016
|Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck.Do you agree?
2 - Hello, neikneu! Your essay is very good, but I would give you the corrections for your essay ...
Writing Feedbackneikneu - Oct 3, 2016 / erwiin1 - Oct 3, 2016
|Summary : Scramble to rescue tourists on slopes of Lombok volcano (source : The Times)
6 - Halo there, Let me give some suggestion regarding to your summary I' ve notived that you contructed your...
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Sep 30, 2016 / Iedha01 - Oct 3, 2016
|TED Summary - How Great Leader Inspire Action by Simon Sinek
4 - HI there, Your summary is excellent. It has a good flow and understandable. However, thre are only some grammatical...
Writing Feedbackdebby17 - Oct 1, 2016 / Iedha01 - Oct 3, 2016
|The pie chart gives explanation of land quality deterioration worldwide
2 - ... the table indicates the differences in causes of land degradation by in three regions: (...) which is are...
Writing Feedbackerwiin1 - Oct 2, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 2, 2016
|"I HAVE A DREAM" IS STILL A DREAM! ARGUMENT ESSAY
2 - Hi, I really liked your essay, but your prescriptions seemed very vague. Exactly how do you propose drawing...
Writing Feedbackathra - Oct 2, 2016 / TJLuschen - Oct 2, 2016
|Sources of energy have been playing a vital role in economic development in industrialized countries
2 - hi friend i have some suggestions for you I strongly believe that this change is an inevitable trend....
Writing Feedbackbichduyen1901 - Oct 2, 2016 / bismillah - Oct 2, 2016
|Top Honeymoon Destinations - the information of eight popular places for new British couples
2 - Hi debby, what bar chart? You are suggested to upload picture/diagram/chart for IELTS task 1 practice. Do...
Writing Feedbackdebby17 - Oct 2, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 2, 2016
|The pie chart and table represent information about three vital reasons that caused land degradation
3 - Hi Ismail, Here's my contributions towards your IELTS task 1 essay. I hope you can follow through. ...
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Oct 2, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 2, 2016
|The preferred evening course that both males and females (various ages) have recently attended
2 - Hi Sari, The detailed descriptions below are my analysis towards your report summary of IELTS task 1. I...
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 2, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 2, 2016
|Summary of TEDx How women wage conflict without violence
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Sep 29, 2016 / debby17 - Oct 2, 2016
|TED Summary: How Playing an Instrument Benefits Your Brain by Anita Collins
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Oct 1, 2016 / debby17 - Oct 2, 2016
|Task 1- The proportion of women and men attending various evening courses
2 - Hi Ardian354.. Let me give you some advice.. The bar chart give(s) information about amountnumber of man and...
Writing FeedbackArdian354 - Oct 2, 2016 / sasariri - Oct 2, 2016
|Chart analysis: the over-grazing had the biggest factor of unproductive land worldwide
2 - Hello Yonathan i think there ara no correlation between your summary and your picture that your upload .....
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 2, 2016 / Alamsyah Ismail - Oct 2, 2016
|The future of early cancer detections - Jorge Soto (Summary of TED)
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 30, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 1, 2016
|Differences in rates of various evening courses at an adult education center
3 - Hi Fauziyah, below are my thoughts on your analysis and I hope it helps with your revision. -...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 1, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 1, 2016
|IELTS Summary Task BlackBerry's Rise and Fall in 10 Phones
4 - Hi Dioba... Sharing is fun, right? Thus, it's my pleasure to share my thoughts regarding your writing. The...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 29, 2016 / Fitri12 - Oct 1, 2016
|Every conversation have a potential to start a conflict; how to improve face-to-face communication?
3 - Hi Sari, hopefully the followings will help .....they talks about something offensive. (this sentence is confusing. You also...
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Sep 30, 2016 / Fitri12 - Oct 1, 2016
|The chart shows international tourism is the highest incomes
6 - hello dioba it is great writing, but I have several advices hope it can improve your writing skills ...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 27, 2016 / ryan31 - Oct 1, 2016
|Think about something you want to add and try in the next 30 days
5 - Hi Kiev, hopefully the followings input will help TED Summary - Try something new for 30 days by...
Writing Feedbackkiev - Sep 27, 2016 / Fitri12 - Oct 1, 2016
|There is opening a high school in your community. Comment and discuss about the effects.
4 - Hi M. Javed, High school is the important medium to educate ... (You may also write: High school...
Writing Feedbackm javed - Sep 30, 2016 / Fitri12 - Oct 1, 2016
|Electronic media has changed the way people relate one another
3 - Hi Russell, first of all, I would like to share that, topics like this are definitely the topics that...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Sep 29, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 30, 2016
|M.S.Dhoni: The Untold Stroy ( Film Review)
Writing FeedbackAqsa Aqeel - Sep 30, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 30, 2016
|Air Leakage, Cooling Problems - wasted energy
2 - Hi Riandi, below are additional enhancements for your essay and I hope you follow through. - The diagrams...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Sep 30, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 30, 2016
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