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|In the modern era, English has a momentous role to hone communication ability of pupils
4 - Hi.,.Nousha your IELTS writing is great, you have presented and organized the ideas appropriately. however, here some advice for...
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|Aziz Abu Sarah, a tourism entrepreneur and peace builder from Palestine - report
3 - Hi Rosa.. It is a good job because this is free of major mistakes. However, you have to remember...
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|TED Talk Summary; Nicholas Stern: The State of The Climate - and What We Might Do about it
3 - Hi Aldo Let me give you some correction (many) Countries, nowadays, face remarkable enhances onin the urban areas...
Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 21, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 6, 2016
|Anthony Goldbloom, Machine learning expert, shared his experience in TED channel.
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 6, 2016 / kiev - Oct 6, 2016
|IELTS Writing Task II The internet has transformed the way information
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|Article Summary - How to Use Google to Plan Your Trip
3 - Hi Lincoln, I would like to share a few insights for your essay. - travelers planning their trips....
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 6, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 6, 2016
|Wiriting Task 2: Problems associated with the internet and what solutions ?
3 - Hi Pandai, running through your essay, I must say that you have made a very clear view of your...
Writing FeedbackMFES2016 - Oct 5, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 6, 2016
|Summary Article: Russia stresses importance of cyber-security cooperation with Indonesia
2 - Hi Ibal. I am delighted to read your summary because you have shown the better progress. One having to...
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|The comparison of relations between workers and their supervisor, and workers among their colleagues
3 - Hello, here some inputs for you The presented pie charts presentgive information about the comparison of ......
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|Is the Internet really dangerous? Inappropriate contents, lack of direct communication
3 - Hello Abraham, ... approaches could be theaddressedin solution to overcome suchsome phenomenon. ... set of restriction to ban...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 5, 2016 / PHA2016 - Oct 6, 2016
|Task 2: In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past
3 - Hey Nguyendo, These following correction are suggested to you : Nowaday (Nowadays ), the number of one-person households is...
Writing Feedbacknguyendo - Oct 6, 2016 / Ifan21 - Oct 6, 2016
|Some companies require great apperance, while other value the work quality more.
3 - Hi Bekuk, your writing is pretty good. The followings are my comments: Some companies need that their employee...
Writing FeedbackBekuk22 - Oct 5, 2016 / Fitri12 - Oct 6, 2016
|People can be measured by their habits, not by the clothes they wear, as some suggest
3 - Hi Ryan, you have a pretty good essay, the following are my comments: This is because people who...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Oct 5, 2016 / Fitri12 - Oct 6, 2016
|Problem and Problem-Solving of the Internet Drawbacks
5 - Hi Alfa, you have a pretty good writing, unfortunately on the second paragraph, you have not fully developed the...
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|IELTS Writing Task 2 : Money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.
3 - Hi naruetai.i give some advice,perhaps useful for you. 1.It is considered bysome that money is a key to happiness....
Writing Feedbacknaruetai - Oct 5, 2016 / Dioba - Oct 6, 2016
|Some think that foreign language better to be taught since elementary school rather than high school
2 - Hi Fauziyah. These below are my view focusing on the contents of your writing Hopefully, they can help you...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 5, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 6, 2016
|TED Summary: What it Takes to be a Great Leader by Roselinde Torres
2 - Hi Yonathan.. These below are my thoughts towards your summary. I really hope you can review those and avoid...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 5, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 5, 2016
|The triumph of the Internet has initiated a new era: The Merits and Drawbacks of The Internet
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|Article Summary Task: Physic Nobel goes to discovers of world of stranger things
2 - Hello Yonathan, Their work involved by using the mathematical (...) superconductors and superfluidssuper-fluids. This Those/these work will...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 5, 2016 / PHA2016 - Oct 5, 2016
|Internet Problem, ex. inappropriate content, infected websites, etc.
3 - Helllo Brother Let me give you some advices Please pay attention with your singular or plural. ......
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 5, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 5, 2016
|What's wrong with your password?
2 - Hi.. your essay is quite brief.. I have something for you.. Password Is Important for privacy your computer...
Writing Feedbackarifin354 - Oct 5, 2016 / korbansuspendcuy - Oct 5, 2016
|Article Summary: The Economist; The 2016 Nobel prize for medicine goes to biological recycling
2 - Hello Korbansuspendcuy, I want to you gain some suggestion from me here we go Autophagy, the process...
Writing Feedbackkorbansuspendcuy - Oct 5, 2016 / alfa7 - Oct 5, 2016
|THE VICE PRESIDENTIAL DEBATE WAS A LOT MORE FUN ON TWITTER
2 - Hi PHA Let me give you some correction ... vice presidential debate of the 2016. Along(with) session, Kaine...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Oct 5, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 5, 2016
|TED Talk Summary: Patricia Ryan; Do Not Insist in English
Writing Feedbackkorbansuspendcuy - Oct 5, 2016 / ryan31 - Oct 5, 2016
|The free movement, is it necessary for economy or not?
2 - Hi Lincoln. In this meeting with you, I only focus on contents of your essay. Please, meet my notes...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 4, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 5, 2016
|Kio Stork made an explanation how we can create an exquisite relationship with strangers we meet
2 - ......, smile to them are such weird and avoidED things to do by majority ... It is a dangerous...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Oct 5, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 5, 2016
|Internet-based social networking sites are designed to help bring people together or bring drawbacks
2 - Hi, Here's some comment from me: However, i agree that such communications should deteriorate individual ... ...
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|Discussion: Free Trade and lack of capital, low standard products, and unskilled workers
4 - Hello Brother let me give you some advices it becomes controversial issue . Many local industries have...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 4, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 5, 2016
|Writing Task 1 - The relationship at work and with co-workers
3 - Hi Fadhil Let me give you some correction ... at work, there are(is a) distinction in data of...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Oct 4, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 5, 2016
|Summary of Artile World's hardiest animal has evolved radiation shied for its DNA By: Andy Coglan
2 - ...,water bear, is the most toughest creatures on the planet, [NO NEED COMMA] which can survive in AN extreme...
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|Summary article_Your Birth Control Pill Might Raise Your Depression Risk
2 - A research institute in Denmark conducted a study involving more that 1 million women and adolescent girls about...
Writing FeedbackDavid54 - Oct 5, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 5, 2016
|Social media on the Internet are getting improved, to make most people around connect to one another
2 - Hi Fadhila Let me give you some correction ... social media brings (a) negative effect on adolescent behavior(behaviour)...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Oct 4, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 5, 2016
|TEDx Summary How the Panama Papers journalists broke the biggest leak in history by Gerard Ryle
3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections Economic controls the world. That first sentence (...)...
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 4, 2016 / andika08 - Oct 5, 2016
|TED Summary: The Truth about Lying
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|Article Summary - Hurricane Matthew Makes Landfall in Haiti
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|There is advice that teenagers should reach a job before continuing to study in school or university
2 - Hello Your text will sound much more professionally written if you apply the following adjustments to it: ...
Writing FeedbackBekuk22 - Oct 4, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Oct 5, 2016
|Social networking is the leading cause why individuals are losing interaction among family members
2 - Hi Ilmy. I am pleased to read your essay because you have understood about the systematic of the essay....
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Oct 4, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 5, 2016
|The experience of working and saving money for the higher education - gap year from school benefits
2 - Hi Fadhil Let me give you some correction Teenagers get advices(piece of advice) by older people to have...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Oct 4, 2016 / Yonathan - Oct 5, 2016
|The pie charts gives information of survey result in 2005 and 2009 about employee and their bosses
3 - Hi andikaa. Here I left some suggestion for you. Hope it can help. Overall, the percentage of respon...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Oct 4, 2016 / ibal28 - Oct 5, 2016
|Ted Summary: The Single Biggest Reason Why Startups Succeed
2 - These are my few suggestions for your summary There are some findings INVENTIONS by Bill Gross about what...
Writing Feedbackgoldieu - Oct 4, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 5, 2016
|The benefits and drawbacks pertaining to experience a workplace before continuing study
4 - I'd use Grammarly to your advantage, it's a free program that automatically checks for errors and alerts you about...
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|The outcome of observation on the relationships among employees with their manager and partnerships
2 - ... about the relationship ofamong employees with their manager and partnerships inboth year , 2005 and 2009 and itwhich...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Oct 4, 2016 / hirani03 - Oct 4, 2016
|Ghosts and Poltergeists: more common than you think?
2 - ... by some people causing the negative energies phenomenonenergy phenomenons ; such as heard ... However, the ghost...
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Oct 4, 2016 / hirani03 - Oct 4, 2016
|Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people
NEW - Ielts writing TASK 2 - Word usage and sentence length problems! Many newspapers and magaziens feature stories about...
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|The free movement of goods across national borders; IELTS writing task 2
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|TED Summary: The unexpected beauty of everyday sounds by eklit Hadero
4 - Hi Alfa...Hopefully the followings will help There are some major errors in the use of simple past tense,...
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 3, 2016 / Fitri12 - Oct 4, 2016
|Survey of Workers at Work (Supervisor and Co-workers)
2 - AtIN 2005, survey of relationships with supervisor shows that61 percentof workerShavehad a very good relation with their bosses. which...
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|Result of the survey on workmen's relations with the chiefs and colleagues
2 - it is important to present the graph here The given pie charts provide information about the percentage of...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Oct 4, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Oct 4, 2016
|SUMMARYS The colorful propaganda maps in 20 century wars
4 - Helo bams, Hope you doing well, lemme give you some suggestion ==> Maps made to persuade to the...
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|Many media celebrities allegedly exert negative implications on youth generation
3 - Dear Ronaldo, here are some advices for your essay, feel free to correct me, Many media celebrities -->...
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|Speaking like a leader - most people does not have good speaking skills
2 - Helllo brother Let me give you some advices ... in the several countries do not have good manner...
Writing FeedbackBams17 - Oct 4, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Oct 4, 2016
|TED Talk Summary: Richard St. Johnson; 8 traits of success
2 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections When we people ask about what the meaning...
Writing Feedbackkorbansuspendcuy - Oct 3, 2016 / andika08 - Oct 4, 2016
|TED summary- A New Way to Heal Hearts without Surgery
2 - Hi fauziyah, here is some suggestions for your writing in order to improve it. This phenomenon is caused...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Oct 4, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Oct 4, 2016
|Writing Task 2 Social Media Have Negative Or Positive Effects?
2 - Dear Faridadwi, here are some advices for your writing, feel free to correct me if I get wrong, ...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Oct 4, 2016 / fadhilmd25 - Oct 4, 2016
|Article Summary - Donald Trump is right, America's airports are awful
5 - ... of the USA, Donald Trump's(YOU SHOULD KNOW USING 'S I GIVE YOU SOME EXAMPLE DENI'S BOOKS, JONI'S CARS,...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 4, 2016 / Bams17 - Oct 4, 2016
|Ted Summary - Technology hasn't changed love. Here's why
3 - Hi Fadhil, I have some advice for you - Helen Fisher started her presentation by the overview of...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Oct 4, 2016 / goldieu - Oct 4, 2016
|The new developed ink can be used to 3D-print flexible bone implants in any size, shape and form
2 - Hello Yonathan These below are my thoughts towards your summary. Hopefully, that can help you significantly. Check it out...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 4, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Oct 4, 2016
|Robotic race cars. The autonomous vehicle was a dream and it has been dream since 1939
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|Free Trade System - a long-life controversy in myriad side of array of countries
2 - hai alfa I have several suggestions for you I hope it helps avoid to use subject pronoun such...
Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 4, 2016 / ryan31 - Oct 4, 2016
|TED Talk Summary: Rory Stewart - Why Democracy Matters
2 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections ... often considered to be in the notorious...
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