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|Animals Starving in Venezuela Zoos
2 - Dear Aris You've done well, i adore the way of your writing. But, there are several inputs for me....
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 27, 2016 / Fatirtalent - Sep 27, 2016
|Almost one-third of travelers each year prefer learning program more than other types of vacations
2 - In recent years, surveys shows almost one-third of travelers each year more prefer choose( redoundand) learning program more ......
Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 27, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 27, 2016
|Youngest female airline captain' - 26-year-old Kate McWilliams
2 - hi friend i have some suggestion for making essay to be better in reading she never thought before...
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Sep 27, 2016 / bismillah - Sep 27, 2016
|How to make work-life balance work by Nigel Marsh
2 - Nigel Marsh lays out [explained/highlighted/pointed out/came up with an idea about/described/spoke, etc. use past tense since it just a...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 27, 2016
|Comparing car theft - numbers of robbed vehicles in different countries
4 - Hi rizaldohabibie,after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps useful for you. 1.presents the information about car robbery...
Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 26, 2016 / Dioba - Sep 27, 2016
|The best speaker must be able to present HAIL - honestly, authenticity, integrity, love
2 - instead of wrote those as two simple sentences, you may enhance your work by writing: speaking is vital...
Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 27, 2016
|Make People Listen To Our Speak
2 - Hi Ucha Let me give you some advice Most of people always speak without havingmeaningfulness(meaningless) and powerfulness(powerless) ....
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Sep 27, 2016 / Yonathan - Sep 27, 2016
|Online sales in retail sector between 2003 and 2013
4 - The pie chart presents IMPARTING KNOWLEDGE about the percentage of ... ... was followed by clothes as the...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Sep 25, 2016 / Ucha MSN - Sep 27, 2016
|Anthony Goldbloom's new perspective on what machines can and can't do
4 - you may more effectively write :......a company which operates the cutting edge learning machine and ....... This...
Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 27, 2016
|Summary News from BBC: Aid reaches Madaya and other besieged towns
2 - Hello Pizarro.. Welcome to Essay Forum. I am delighted to tell you that you have been the right medium...
Writing FeedbackAfdhel - Sep 27, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 27, 2016
|In this topic, the speaker talks about the idea of mastery and mind
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 27, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 27, 2016
|An Article Summary: Everything You've Heard about Alcohol being Good for You is a Lie By Elizabeth N
3 - from the structure or function, since you wrote 'as' in the beginning , you still need to add...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 27, 2016
|Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015 and predictions for 2025
2 - Hi @Yonathan Your essay is good. The information are well presented. Just consider some issues I have noticed...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 27, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 27, 2016
|The number of export commodities and service from Someland in one decade
Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 27, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Sep 27, 2016
|The percentages of Bulgarian people who wished to live abroad
5 - Hi Cachaaaa Let me give you some advice.. The given bar chart givesyou could change with other vocab...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Sep 26, 2016 / Sari Trisna - Sep 27, 2016
|In 2015 export of dairy products had dominated comparing to other products
2 - Halo, you have done great I will try to give some advice ... exports of Someland which devided...
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 27, 2016 / fauziyahtami - Sep 27, 2016
|TED Summary Jamie Oliver Talk About Obesity and Food
3 - ... United States will die because of what they eat every day. In America, the biggest death factor is...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 22, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 27, 2016
|COMPARISON OF THE CAR THEFT IN EUROPE AND CANADA
3 - Hi bismillah. Here I left some suggestions for you, hope it can helps you. The line graph shows...
Writing Feedbackbismillah - Sep 26, 2016 / ibal28 - Sep 27, 2016
|Good News: The tech to change your grandma's life is already here (Summarizing)
3 - This daycurrently and age, either mine or grandma or all grandparents across ... ... from one place to another...
Writing Feedbackzul2805_es - Sep 26, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 27, 2016
|SUMMARY TED 3 of Patti Dobrowolski - how to reach a dream
5 - hi.. i wanna suggest some advices.. Draw[drawing] a picture at our current condition and draw[drawing] a picture at...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 26, 2016 / rizaldohabibie - Sep 27, 2016
|Summary of TED How does cancer spread through the body ? (Ivan Seah Yu Jun )
4 - Cancer has become a common problem yet because thorny problem in ... The predominant qiestionquestion comes cancer distribution ......
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 26, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 27, 2016
|Butter, margarine and other spreads consumed during 26 years timeline
3 - the highest consumption it was clearly that butter consumption rose from around 140 to 160 grams...
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Sep 26, 2016 / Diqon - Sep 27, 2016
|Sports heroes in the field of badminton in Indonesia
3 - Hi Att, Sharing is fun, right!? The followings are my humble comments for u. Indonesian citizens cheered shortly...
Writing FeedbackAtt98 - Sep 26, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 27, 2016
|The grade of school of Bulgarian students who were anxious to leave their country and stay abroad
2 - Hi Andika. These are my thoughts for your writing. Please, you meet my notes and deal with them. ...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 26, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 27, 2016
|The percentage of Bulgarians who were expecting to live abroad, based on their education
2 - Hi Eva. Let me help you to finalize your writing. In this moment, I only concentrate to your contents...
Writing Feedbackeve01 - Sep 26, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 27, 2016
|From 1981 to 2007 butter was the most popular spread that was consumed by people
2 - Between 1981 and 1986, butter consumption rose from around 140 to a peak of 160 gramsTHAT IS NOT MATCH...
Writing FeedbackSari Trisna - Sep 26, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 26, 2016
|The rank of education of Bulgaria citizens who chose to live in another country
3 - hallo there are few advice for you Base on bar chart, the highest percentage of education rank to...
Writing FeedbackBekuk22 - Sep 26, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 26, 2016
|Essay on: Academic Cheating
Writing FeedbackTeddyp2006 - Oct 26, 2006 / Getty25 - Sep 26, 2016
|IELTS Task 2 - surveillance technologies provide individual tracking information
2 - Since early 21 century surveillance ... Governments in this case aim [...] those undercover observation .Its an opinion discussion...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Sep 25, 2016 / Mayank7g - Sep 26, 2016
|Job interview just a piece of cake
2 - Hi Giansy here are my suggestions ==> the answers (response) they should give of the questions (along the...
Writing FeedbackGiansy11 - Sep 26, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 26, 2016
|U.S Meat & Poultry Consumption, Per Capita, Boneless By Species - Writing Task 1
2 - Hi fatirtalent, I made some corrections which I think you might appreciate on your writing task 1 It...
Writing FeedbackFatirtalent - Sep 26, 2016 / Janet7 - Sep 26, 2016
|The Rewards of Taking Risks: Facing my Fear of Public Speaking
2 - ..., the bullying escalated in middle school to the point where I ... -I think you should remove the...
Writing Feedbackleo nma - Sep 26, 2016 / akn_24 - Sep 26, 2016
|The number of people, who want o leave Bulgaria according to their education rank around three years
Writing FeedbackGiansy11 - Sep 26, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 26, 2016
|In 1981 butter was the most popular spread among others
2 - Hi fauziyahtami, you have done a great job, here are my suggestions for you ==> The graph below...
Writing Feedbackfauziyahtami - Sep 26, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 26, 2016
|Summary Article : These Are the Forgotten Victims of the West's Drought
4 - Hallo Andika, i have some corrections for you. It became changed the environment which are is (look the...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 16, 2016 / Giansy11 - Sep 26, 2016
|Creativity is as important in education as literacy and we have to treat it with same status.
3 - Hi Aris05 In this topic, the speaker would sayspeak about creativity. ... education as literacy,and we ... ......
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 26, 2016 / Janet7 - Sep 26, 2016
|Most People are missing out on incredible opportunities all of the time, making bad decisions
2 - Hii Eve.. it is clearly summary, i only want to give some suggestions. 1. carefully with the capital...
Writing Feedbackeve01 - Sep 26, 2016 / Giansy11 - Sep 26, 2016
|GRE argument writing issue - censoring internet at workplace
4 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections ... Climpson Industries should be impelement electronic tools...
Writing FeedbackJayR - Sep 22, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 26, 2016
|Artic snow dissolved are killing animals and will be caribou aground
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 26, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 26, 2016
|TED Summary: Forget Multitasking, try monotasking by Paolo Cardini
2 - According to merriam webster [capitalization issue ] dictionary, multitasking is the ability ... ... on monotask project and...
Writing Feedbackkiev - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|Try a lot of different things in a month by Mutt Cutts
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 26, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 26, 2016
|Summary Article: Keep your goals to yourself
2 - Hi Atthya, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you find this website to be...
Writing FeedbackAtt98 - Sep 26, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 26, 2016
|GPS Accuracy in Australia versus moves of tectonic plates in America
5 - confusing sentence. = at this moment, Australia continent has shifted it is a common phenomenon which...
Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|A Fuel Tanker Fire in Mexico's Gulf Coast
5 - capitalization issue, it is a name of a company. successfully andwhiletheythose [refer to firefighting boats, not firefighters...
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|Summary TED: Your Body is My Canvas
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 25, 2016 / Aris05 - Sep 26, 2016
|An Article Summary: William, Kate, George, and Charlotte Arrive in Canada for the Royal Tour
3 - Hi Ali, below are my thoughts on your summary essay. 2nd paragraph - The whole family members appeared...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 26, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 26, 2016
|Theft crimes in some countries in regard of cars
2 - Hello alamysah, The line graph comparesshows which comparison the theft of car in four ... It is...
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 26, 2016 / PHA2016 - Sep 26, 2016
|Going to Mars Could Mess Up the Hunt for Alien Life
3 - America made a great celebration of its independence day by properly landing thousand rovers on the surface of...
Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|Overall, there are four kind of meat noted in the graph: Beef, Pork, Broilers, and Turkeys.
2 - The graph presents information about you need verb meat and poultry consumption in US( at introduction you should be...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 26, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 26, 2016
|Summary of article Blind people use brain's visual cortex to help do maths ( Colin Barras)
3 - Hello Ifan i have advice to you about your spelling simple mental arithmatic orservation .... observation inside...
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 26, 2016 / Alamsyah Ismail - Sep 26, 2016
|Resume : Janet Iwasa: How animations can help scientists test a hypothesis
3 - Scientists usually use a small objects[singular/plural issue] as objects of research andwhich must be seen directly, sometimes it difficult...
Writing Feedbackzero01 - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|Summary : Jack Ma can't solve Indonesia's e commerce dilemma
2 - Ryan, welcome to the big family of EssayForum, a place where you can ask for writing help. You can...
Writing Feedbackcat10 - Sep 26, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Sep 26, 2016
|CCTV Cameras Are Being Used To Monitor People Activity - Writing Task 2
2 - Hi Faridadwi Let me give you some advice... In several cases, inhabitants(citizen) who are monitored do ... ......
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Sep 25, 2016 / Yonathan - Sep 26, 2016
|To become a good citizen or benefit students as individuals
4 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections . It is more significant (...) individuals, ....
Writing Feedbackkwang997 - Sep 22, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 26, 2016
|There is no doubt that talented individual lives sophisticated lives, and some of them are overpaid.
5 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections ... talented individual lives sophisticated lives with the...
Writing FeedbackMayank7g - Sep 21, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 26, 2016
|EILTS Writing Taks 1 : Summeries' Environment Impacts of Loging
3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections The disanvantage disadvantage of loging is which are...
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 13, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 26, 2016
|Two major factors that influence happiness among young people: achievement at work and doing hobbies
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Sep 25, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 26, 2016
|The only way for women to show their qualities is by getting involved in economy and politics
2 - it is evidence that you have a passable writing skill proved by you well-structured sentence and paragraph. you, somehow,...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|TED SUMMARY: The Courage To Tell A Hidden Story by Erman Mohammed
Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Sep 26, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 26, 2016
|Today, the health care system world is threatened by nurse migration
5 - Hey Dioba.. It is such a great essay . These following correction are subjected to your essay : ...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 22, 2016 / Ifan21 - Sep 26, 2016
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