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|Internet is used for updating information, communicate with others and easily to fulfill daily needs
2 - Hi Hairul. Welcome to Essay Forum. Let me help you to finalize this essay. I wanna give you corrections...
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|General debate whether the environment damage is serious or acceptable to the international laws
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|The addiction to the Internet seems to be a concerning issue, and many people suffer from it
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|The common silkworm's life cycle and how silk cloth is harvested from them
5 - Hi Farida, I have been an avid reviewer of your work, wether it is an analysis, an essay, argumentative...
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|Human activity is more pleasure due to the sophisticated existence of Internet
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|Many people has acknowledged that internet makes their daily business more accessible
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|It is true that the Internet affects the way people live. Our life is much more easier now.
2 - This idea comes nowhere. Also, you need to write this present tense, not the past one. Let me...
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|People's lives are much more comfortable since the introduction of cutting-edge the internet
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|The changing rates of crime in the inner city from 2003 - 2012
3 - Hi ! here are my several suggestions, hope it will help a lot, regards The line graph showsillustrates/depictsthe...
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|There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family
NEW - There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. Where...
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|Beneficial relaxation. Learning vacation is a new kind of holiday
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|It is certain that the clear water resource became a rarity in the several countries.
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|People who decide to have kids should better cogitate on how they can meet their children's needs
3 - Hi Bung Ilham. Here are my suggestions to improve your score in the writing section. In this moment, I...
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|Environmental issues are caused by human's activities. Task 2 (practice): "improving environment"
3 - Environmental issues are caused by human's activities. As a consequence, every person (i think it is better to change...
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|What can be done to reduce the use of cars? SEVERAL EXAMPLES OF INTRODUCTION
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|How a wind turbine will be built and where it is located
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|Maintaining repeated customers is a prevalent aim within a business. My summary about Brand Loyalty
2 - Hi Aris. In this moment, let me help you to finalize your writing grammatically. Make you sure to meet...
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Aug 31, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 31, 2016
|A wind turbine consist of tower, generator, wind sensor, and blades controlled by a computer.
5 - A wind turbine consistS of A tower, A generator, A wind sensor, and blades ... The best locations for...
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|It's not necessary to earn money by children when they are still on parents care
5 - Hi, thank you for feedback! But anyway, 'thing' phrase sometimes becomes too informal for academic essay, that's why...
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|Natural deterioration has became a major concern in any part across the globe.
3 - Hi Jomul.. I'd like to give you a hand... Natural deterioration has becamebecome a major concern in ......
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|TED Talks : How to Make Stress Your Friend
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|The changes at West park School since 1950 - after the demand for personal vehicles increased
2 - Hai Ziad. I have some constructive feedbacks for you. ... Secondary School at West Park first was constructed...
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|A phenomenon of social networking is rapidly increase in 21st century. SUMMARY TASK 7
2 - Hai occa. I have some interesting feedback for you ... social networking is rapidly increaseincreasing in 21st century....
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|We pay too much attention to actors and other celebrities, and the media sometimes sensationalize it
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|Celebrity Life or Inspiring Personal Life?
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|West Park Secondary School map. The building experienced a significant change from 1950 to 2010.
2 - Ilmi_03..., it is good to see you again here with a very good report writing. However, some changes are...
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|Individuals vs. environment - PRACTICE IELTS WRITING TASK 2 : ESSAY TYPE AGREE OR DISAGREE
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|Reducing emission production, processing waste, planting the number of plants - all for environment
2 - Hello there^^ There are differentdifferences of perspectives that (...) and businesses be able to develop the surrounding, meanwhile...
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|The Design of a Wave-Energy Machine and Its Best Location
3 - There are two diagrams about the design of ... => you are supposed to use a paraphrase in introduction...
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|Facts about celebrities are always interesting to follow, and the lives of ordinary people?
2 - Hi ashelarisa, let me you a hand, this is my suggestions for you. I hope it will develop your...
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|On Women's Equality Day, More Tech Companies Promise Change
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|Citizens obligation and business cooperation - "Only large companies can improve environment"
2 - Hi Erpin92 The firms could maintain the employees' life ... Therefore, the waste of factory could not flow...
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|The mass media has been more interesting to show well known people's way of life
2 - hi! i catch some grammatical errors. hope you can follow through ... to report people who live usuallynormally...
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|These days, many entertainment news report celebrities activities and their private lives.
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|People prefer live today in some urban areas and communicate less with local residents.
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|The environment improvement depends only on large companies since individuals can't do much alone
4 - Hello Maulida! Nice to see you in essay forum! Here a little feedback for you. The improvement of...
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|Big companies could improve environment rather than people because they have big impact on society.
3 - Hi, Heru22 Check the amendment below. However, there are a number of reasons why not only ... ......
Writing FeedbackHeru22 - Aug 30, 2016 / Naoki28 - Aug 30, 2016
|Large companies and individuals are no difference in maintaining the environment
4 - hi... Environmental damage is alarm. Some people said that is pressing issue can only be solved by...
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|Parents have been through a lot of things, that's why I believe that they are outstanding teachers
4 - hai dipa i have some suggestions for you i hope it helps In the worldNowadays, people believe that...
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|The machine for generating electricity consist of two main parts : steel tower and a computer room
3 - Atikah, it is a nice thread. I can easily follow the process of this machine. However, there are some...
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|IELTS Essay Writing Test 3 About Agree and Disagree
7 - Hi, Aida, I just want to give some corrections on grammatical error and misspelling. ... role in improving...
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|How to See the Upcoming 'Great American Eclipse' (SUMMARY)
5 - Since 1979, total eclipse never crossescrossed American continent (past > 1979) ... because the total eclipse willwould cross...
Writing FeedbackErpin92 - Aug 25, 2016 / Hary01 - Aug 30, 2016
|"Big can more" - possible ways to better the environement.
NEW - Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only large companies and businesses can make a difference. To what...
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|TED - Averting the Climate Crisis. Make the massive persuasion campaign.
3 - Hi Aris! we acquireecquired the new temperature records in January. Prior average of januariesJanuary's tempereature The...
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|Individuals are too limited to make a difference in the environmental development
2 - Hi Ilham, I find in reading your essay. It's a well-written essay; the flow of your ideas is good...
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|It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people su
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|IELTS Task 1 Wind Turbine Design and The Optimum Location
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 30, 2016 / aidafitria18 - Aug 30, 2016
|Writing IELTS task 1 : the components of a wind turbine and where it can be placed
2 - Hi there...., including the original prompt of this diagram is a must, as to know that you are being...
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|Should the media report ordinary people lives more than celebrities' lives? IELTS WRITING TASK 1
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|Students have today more chances to study abroad, than it was before - practice on IELTS
3 - Hi Azmi, this time I would only focus on your introduction. As the prompt asks you to explain the...
Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 29, 2016 / ilankelo21 - Aug 30, 2016
|A wind turbine works by wind power, producing electricity efficiently when located on a high surface
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|The spread of the internet issue - IELTS TASK 4: FULLY-DEVELOPED EXAMPLES
6 - Hello Hary^^ ... advantages of the internet which has giveninabout educational field. (I think in this sentence need...
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|Radio, television, and Internet shows over and over gossips stories and entertainment news
2 - hi,, dinar Radio, television, and the internet go overgives stories about gossips ... As a result, many...
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|BOARDING SCHOOL FOR CHILDREN - good option for the contemporary parents who doesn't have enough time
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|Crimes in Newport city between 2003 and 2012. The burglary had the highest number among incidents.
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|Participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries
2 - Hi Ilmi! levels of population in developing and developed countries = you can change the passage by :...
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|The number of participants in education and science program in 1980 and 1990 based on a survey.
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|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Degree Study Abroad
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|IELTS Task 1 & Task 2 : Participation Levels in Science and Education
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|SUmmary TEDtalk: the first 21 days of a bee's life
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