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|Summary of TED HOW DO CARBOHYDRATE IMPACT YOUR HEALT, (Richard .J wood)
2 - Hello Ifan, Nice essay therefore I have some suggestion to your writing. according on to Richard [who ]...
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 14, 2016 / PHA2016 - Sep 14, 2016
|My opinion about TEDTalks: Gary Haugen "The hidden reason for poverty the world need to address now"
5 - hello tata, overall, your essay is good and i believe it can give us more information about it. but,...
Writing FeedbackTata77 - Aug 15, 2016 / mem77 - Sep 14, 2016
|UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden statistics regarding banana and coffee.
3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections ... in several European countries are depicted illustrated...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Sep 6, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 14, 2016
|Reason For Visit New Zealand: sightseeing, walking, boating, volcanoes, museums
2 - hi andhika08 The bar chart show Shows the percentage of reason for visitvisiting / to Visit New Zealand. The...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 14, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 14, 2016
|Fiction and non-fiction books - which of these two types of books do you generally prefer to read?
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|The relationship between sovereignty and the law is relatively straightforward. When it comes to pol
2 - Dear kiki23, here are some of advices for your summary: Issue appeared in Britain politics these days is...
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|Is damaged tropical rainforest caused by Logging industry?
5 - Hello PHA, It's incredible simple text, these following correction for your writing : Now days (Nowadays or at present...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 13, 2016 / Ifan21 - Sep 14, 2016
|Summary: More Young Americans Live with Parents Than With Lovers
4 - Hello bung ilham, here i left the comment for you In the meantime, many young generation prefer...
Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Sep 13, 2016 / Fira28 - Sep 14, 2016
|The logging industry supplies the raw materials for array of products
Writing Feedbackmawahi bussalam - Sep 13, 2016 / dils - Sep 14, 2016
|The climate crisis in United States - significant increase of heat
3 - ...there was a significant increase in U.Sheat from 31 degrees Fahrenheit ... >>>> i suggest to replace "heat" with...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 13, 2016 / angga93 - Sep 14, 2016
|The result of adult education survey - Cambridge 1 Practice 1 - Correct if Found Some Wrong
2 - Hi @faizunaa17 I like the idea in the first paragraph. However, it should be more engaging whenever you...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Sep 14, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 14, 2016
|I am in favour of an overseas university degree rather than in home country school
Writing Feedbackany577 - Sep 14, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 14, 2016
|Great increase of fish consumption in China from 600 grams/person/week in 1995 to 850 grams in 2010
Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 13, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 14, 2016
|Top Takeaways from presidential candidates's views on Science - Laura Parker - Articles Summary
2 - Hi Fadhil.. I am delighted to read your summary. Honestly, it is good enough because this is free of...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 14, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 14, 2016
|Environmental problems are too great to be managed by individuals; real change at government level.
2 - Dear Mahesh, there are some of advices from me for your essay: ... on impact of air pollution...
Writing Feedbackmahesh27 - Sep 13, 2016 / fadhilmd25 - Sep 14, 2016
|The difference three foods in China people consumes in year 1985-2010
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 13, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 14, 2016
|Summary Article How to Eat More Vegetables And Less Meat in Three Weeks
6 - Hi Farida, Your essay gives us precious message for stay healthy with nutritious meals. However, I found dome mistakes....
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 30, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 14, 2016
|Dinner makes a difference - summary
3 - Hi.. Please allow me to help you by giving some suggestions of your writing Your topic is quite...
Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Sep 13, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 14, 2016
|Logging impact. A great deal of the industries commit the activities of cutting down trees.
3 - Hello Your text could be improved (stylistically) if you apply the following adjustments to it: A great...
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 13, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Sep 14, 2016
|The proportion of the nationalities among the tourists in New Zealand from around the world
2 - Let me lend you some help to improve your introduction: ... information about the proportion/percentageof the homeland of...
Writing Feedbackrian31 - Sep 13, 2016 / zul2805_es - Sep 14, 2016
|The result from a recent survey revealed the lack of geopolitical skills among American youth
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Sep 13, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 14, 2016
|Logging industry has many negative effects on the life in our planet.
2 - Hello Bams, I'm pleased to read your writing since it provides valuable information about illegal logging. some of your...
Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 13, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 13, 2016
|AMERICA DREAM - SUMMARY TED VIDEO
2 - Hi Riandi. Let me help you to finalize this summary. Riandi, based on the grammar, you can handle...
Writing Feedbackrian31 - Sep 13, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 13, 2016
|The interesting Al Gore speech on ecosystem
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Sep 13, 2016 / kiki23 - Sep 13, 2016
|Oil pipelines project has been protested by Native American
Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 13, 2016 / fadhilmd25 - Sep 13, 2016
|Have Three Weeks for a Vacation? There Are Trips for You (Summary of article)
3 - Hello classmate I have some suggestions for you I hope it helps first ensure for your source, I...
Writing FeedbackALMAJID14 - Sep 13, 2016 / rian31 - Sep 13, 2016
|Nowadays, felling the trees is used by the industry to complete the material needed.
4 - Hello rosa. This suggest is to make your writing better. Nowadays, felling the trees is used [done] by...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 13, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Sep 13, 2016
|TED: How Childhood trauma affects health across a lifetime
2 - Hi David, below are my thoughts on your essay. - Heart disease and lung cancer are several of...
Writing FeedbackDavid54 - Sep 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 13, 2016
|A 3D-printed jumbo jet? A resume of a talk given by Bastian Schaefer
2 - Hi Eka, below are a few suggestions to enhance your essay. - People cannot know about thewill never...
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|IELTS academic task 1 - Energy consumption & greenhouse gas emission.
Writing FeedbackTest_Taker15 - Sep 12, 2016 / Test_Taker15 - Sep 13, 2016
|The range of nationality of people, who has journeyed to New Zealand
2 - Hi Gian, below are my thoughts on your analysis. The linking verbs are seen as very crucial detail that...
Writing FeedbackGian16 - Sep 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 13, 2016
|Summarize TED video : Taylor Wilson, who built a nuclear fusion reactor
3 - Hello mem77. I've read your writing and I find it that you are understanding the video well. However, this...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Sep 13, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Sep 13, 2016
|It is witnessed that the largest proportion of New Zealand's visitors come from Australia
2 - Hi Eva, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, we hope you find this website to be helpful and even...
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|Logging is a series of activities in the field of forestry which damage the environment
Writing FeedbackM Fajerianoor - Sep 13, 2016 / Aris05 - Sep 13, 2016
|Overall, the most travellers come from a place which is near to the visited country.
2 - Hi Almajid, please find a few suggestions for your analysis. - aboutof who where the people -...
Writing FeedbackALMAJID14 - Sep 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 13, 2016
|Just in the last two days there has been a temperature record in January for America.
2 - In the early for this topic explain about climate crisis. => you have no subject in this sentence. ...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 13, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Sep 13, 2016
|A single father from San Diego establishing a close bond with his little daughters
2 - Hii Fitry, your writing already get the structure, but lemme give you some advises. As shown (what information?) by...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 13, 2016 / Gian16 - Sep 13, 2016
|Several different citizenships of New Zealand's guest
2 - Hi Husnul, first of all WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope to provide you with the most...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Sep 13, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 13, 2016
|Oceans Given Boost as Nations Agree to Protect a Third Worldwide - Summary Article
4 - Hello,, these are my suggestion which focus on grammar and structure ... many things that must be protect...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 13, 2016 / ALMAJID14 - Sep 13, 2016
|The Impact of Divorce on Children
4 - hello You have a good summary I have some correction ... miserable condition called divorce, eventually. in the...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 13, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 13, 2016
|Dad Sings Disney Song With His Daughters, Your heart explodes with cuteness. Article summary
2 - Hello I think your text will win in value if you apply the following stylistic touches to it:...
Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Sep 13, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Sep 13, 2016
|Logging industry can affect forests by loss of water, nutrients, and shelter for living organisms
3 - Hi Yonathan, it's nice to share some information with you. Unfortunately your writing still leads me into confusion since...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 13, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 13, 2016
|"Big Families May Be The Best Way to Avoid Divorce"
5 - having Happy family is (...), especially for peoplethose who are getting marriagehave married and have a big family. Buthowever...
Writing FeedbackDavid54 - Sep 13, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 13, 2016
|Logging can damage the environmental life in forests - it brings deforestation
2 - hello lalu, it is nice to see your essay and also i am totally appreciate with your effort to...
Writing FeedbackLalu Aulia Sastr - Sep 13, 2016 / mem77 - Sep 13, 2016
|Tontowi Ahmad, the golden boy alongside Liliyana Natsir
2 - Hi Rian... It is enjoyable to read your writing since it provides some valuable information about the new idols...
Writing Feedbackrian31 - Sep 13, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 13, 2016
|The untold harm of logging to the environment by distracting both terrestrial and aquatic life forms
NEW - The logging industry, which supplies the raw materials for a large number of products, potentially has untold harm to...
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|Summary for TED "A warm embrace that saver live" (Jane Chen)
2 - Twenty millions of babies are suffering as premature [or just directly write, ..... are premature], intolerant temperature ... The...
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 13, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 13, 2016
|International Visitors to New Zealand: Country of Origin
4 - hallo i have few advice for you ... tourists visiting New Zealand and it is measured in percent....
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Sep 13, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 13, 2016
|Fulfilling the requirements for raw materials needs sacrifice of the environment
2 - Halloo dili.. here some corrections about your summary.. The logging industry has.. (the logging industries have...) Habitat...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 13, 2016 / Beauty17 - Sep 13, 2016
|Logging industry needs supply from environment to deliver products which leads to the massive damage
2 - Hi Dila. Welcome to Essay Forum. I am delighted to tell you that you have been a right medium...
Writing Feedbackdils - Sep 13, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 13, 2016
|How to Live Passionately by Isabel Allende-TED.
Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 13, 2016 / rian31 - Sep 13, 2016
|The majority of visitors who come to New Zealand are come from Australia.
2 - hai classmate I have some suggestions for you I hope it works The pie chart shows the precentagepercentage...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 13, 2016 / rian31 - Sep 13, 2016
|Summary Article : The six best places to try modern 'martabak' in Jakarta.
6 - Hallo permata992, here i left comment to your sentences Indonesia that popular with many meal of traditional cuisine...
Writing FeedbackPermata992 - Aug 20, 2016 / Fira28 - Sep 13, 2016
|Summary TED: Parenting In Modern World
2 - you tend to compose very simple sentences. You need to vary your writing skill at least by mixing...
Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Sep 13, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 13, 2016
|The percentage of tourist nationality in New Zealand
2 - The pie charts illustrates (verb agreement) the percentage of tourist nationality (it must be "foreign tourist") in New Zealand....
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 13, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 13, 2016
|An information and statistics in regard of international visitors who travel to New Zealand
NEW - International visitors to New Zealand: country of origin The pie chart show an information about where international visitors...
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|Ecotourism is the concept of sustainable tourism management. (Summarizing)
Writing Feedbackswr10 - Aug 25, 2016 / ibal28 - Sep 13, 2016
|Highly-invented-sophisticated technology have most important impact on living standards of mankind
Writing FeedbackDipa19 - Aug 29, 2016 / mem77 - Sep 13, 2016
|The ups and downs of 3 kinds of food ingredients in China for last 25 years
3 - Hi Rosa. Please, meet my thoughts.. BETWEEN 1985 AND 2010 You should mention the timeline clearly. Don't...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 13, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 13, 2016
|ielts Writing Task 2: Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case?
3 - Hello Mayang7g I am Ifan The essay you've created about the advantages of traveling is good These following some...
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