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Question:
Some people believe that the best way to learn anything is " learning by doing ". Others would rather learn through books and from teachers. Think of learning a language. Which way do you think is a better way to learn a language ?
Answer :
I remembered my grandfather's words since I first started to learn English as a second language . He said to me " Your teachers and books will show you the most effortless way to speak fluently " . I strongly believe in my grandfather's advice .And learner should attend classes and study well from books , instead of getting language from public .
Generally , teachers have a clear experience in what is the best for any student to learn fast , as they have taught many different students every year . Also , excellent books would do that too . You are free to decide which book or course you take depending on your level .Whereas , In the streets , you will not have a choice like this .
In addition , It is very rare to see someone in public places stopping you while you are talking to him or her to say to you " hey , you are using the wrong grammar here or the incorrect word " . While , teachers will stop you because they have to teach you . And every good books have the key solution , so you can correct your mistakes by yourself .
At the same time while you are having your studies , you probably would to practice out of classes .And this is good in a way . You will have an exciting time but you still don't know if you are using the language properly . If you tip a video of you or record yourself , you will have the opportunity to cheek later and correct your mistakes .
In my opinion , I would like to say that it is better and faster to learn a new language from teachers and books , rather than involving in outside learning .
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