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I accept as true that studying history and literature are needed by students


Halim15 7 / 11  
Aug 12, 2016   #1
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Learning of subjects is essential for scholars. Some people believe that pupils need for studying history and literature. However, others reason that science and mathematics are important too. Even though these are idea could be accepted to some context, here I will be summary to contribute both of them.

First of all, I accept as true that studying history and literature are needed by students. Because learners know exactly how about the old story had made in the world. For instance, they need for knowing World War I, World War II, and Cold War; they must know round of their hero's people in the world; overall what did happen in the past. When they could identify of them, it makes the huge range of their knowledge. So that, the strong analysis of them could be used when they recognize many cases such as political, economics, world history, and many kinds of literature.

From the other side, I think that for learning science and mathematics is vital. For the reason, it teaches people to think logical ability. So this is requirement also since children were in primary school. It is clear that every individual must pick up about of them subject lesson in school.

To sum up all mentioned above, both views are the great consequence for future.

Ilmi_03 47 / 69 11  
Aug 13, 2016   #2
Hi, Halim.
Here are some suggestions for your essay.

Even though these are idea could be accepted to some extentcontext , here I will be summary to contribute both of them . This essay will examine both of these views.

First of all, I accept as true that studying history and literature ...

So that, their strong analysis of them could be used when they recognize many cases such as political, (...), and many kinds of literature.

On the other hand , I think that for learning science and mathematics is vital because . For the reason, it teaches people how to applythink logical ability. So this is a requirement also since children ...

To sum up all mentioned above, both views are the great consequence for future. .... need more information about your idea, it is blur what consequence do you mean
Fadhilahumar91 61 / 73 6  
Aug 14, 2016   #3
Hi halim..

Here a my suggest fot you. But, when i have mistakes, please re-correct it.

Even though these are ideas could be accepted to some context,.....
First of all Firstly, I accept as true that studying history and ...

... how about the old storys had made in the world. For instance, they need for knowing to know World War I, World ...

From the other side In other hand, I think that for learning science and mathematics is vital. For the reason Because, it teaches people to ...

- Please pay attention for your singular and plural...

Thank you
Iforsa 35 / 54 5  
Aug 14, 2016   #4
he halim, here some suggestions from me
Even though these are ideas could (...) here I will be summary summarize to contribute both of them.
For instance, they need for knowing World War I, World War II, and Cold War;they must know round of their hero's people in the world overall what did happen in the past. your flow of writing is hard to follow, here some suggestions from me

world war I, World war II, and Cold War, for instance, are historical moment that they must know the heroes throughout the world.
thank you
hirani03 36 / 50 5  
Aug 14, 2016   #5
Hai halim...
I have read your essay. These are some corrections from me.

1. However, others reasonother reasons that science and mathematics ...
Even though these are ideas could be accepted to some contextcontexts , here I will be give summary to contribute both of them.

2. For instance, they need for knowingto know World War I, World War II, and ...
When they could identify of them, it makes the huge ...
... they recognize many cases such as politicalpolitics , economics, world history, ...

3. From the other sidesides , I think that for learning science ...

... individual must pick up about of themtheir subject lesson in the school.


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