Nowdays, we usually think teenagers could receive a better education, their intelligence improved by scientific developpment,and they lived in a the modern society which has a great progress than its before.
This is too long... Remember, this exam has a major bearing on time management. So it is good to practice with time.... Follow the easy essay structure, the 4 para structure, and practice accordingly with time. 4 Paras include;
Introduction - Introduce the topic and express your opinion
Body para 1; First reason for your opinion + one specific example for that
Body para 2; 2nd reason + example
Conclusion; Sum up everything said above
So I do not agree with this view ,and my reasons will be listed as following.
Your introduction i s too lengthy for this task... :)
First at all, although teenagers today are cleverer than that were in the past,
... this sounds too stereotype thinking... If people of older generations were not clever we wouldn't have achieved such great advancement in technology.... I guess the man had been always clever.
they usually fistly focused is what they can obtain while they attempt to supplying offering their helps
.... they are usually very self-centered and reluctant to lend a hand to others.