This is for IELTS Task 1 practicing, right? ... Anyways, you need to comply with two things; First, have a meaningful topic for your post when you open a new thread (in the"Subject" field). Second, your IELTS essays need to be posted to "Writing Feedback" forum.
Also, you should make use of the "Attach file(s)" feature to add your graphs to the post. Those images would help you earn more relevant feed backs from others.
The main reasons for this decision lie in having interest in subject and gaining qualification,accoutingaccountingfor 40% and 38% respectively
.... this is report writing and therefore be more specific and official;
The main reasons for adults deciding to study are due to their interest in subject and their desire for gaining a qualification.Nearly similar,
.... what do you mean?