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Advantages of learning English


huybinh111 2 / 3 1  
Nov 5, 2012   #1
For a long time, English is considered as a foreign language in Vietnam. It has been taught not only in large cities but also in rural areas. So why is English taught and why do we have to learn it?

It isn't only a subject at school. It is a language and has many advantages. Some students say that it is not necessary to learn English, others say they learn English to get a good record. But it is not the positive aspect of learning English. Let's think about my ideas:

Firstly, you can be friend with many people worldwide. There are more than 200 countries, and in most of them, English is spoken as mother language or a second language or a foreign language. Because of this, you can communicate with more than three billion people over the world by using internet or travel. Secondly, with ability in reading English, you can easy to search any information which you want, from sciences, education to music or sport. Especially, you can download documents using for your major. Finally, English give you many chance to have a good job. There are many foreign companies and domestic companies which require employee's English skill. If you can speak English, you will have more opportunities.

In fact, it is necessary to learn this language. It open your relations, your future, and your life. Now, let try to learn it.

Jennyflower81 - / 690 96  
Nov 5, 2012   #2
For a long time, English ishas been considered as a foreign language in Vietnam.

Some students say itthat learning English is not necessary,to learn English,while others say theythat learning English helps a personto get a good record. But itthat is not the most positive aspect of learning English.

Firstly, you can be friend with many people worldwide.

You mean to say: "The main benefit of speaking English is that you can communicate with many people worldwide.

Especially, you can download documents using for your major. Finally, English give you many chance to have a good job.
Maybe say it like this: "When in school, knowing English is helpful when doing research for your major. A person who speaks English may have a better chance of finding a job."
OP huybinh111 2 / 3 1  
Nov 5, 2012   #3
Thank to Jennyflower81 for adjusting my writing.
The adjusted writing is very helpful for me in the next English examination.
"you can be friend with many people worldwide " My mean is that somebody with other from a strange person to a friend. But I don't know how to describe it.

Thank you again.
I hope we can be friends.


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