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Advertising nowadays more and more affects in our lives, we can see advertise everywhere such as : televisions, newspapers, radio, buses, and many places in our city. They support much kind of products to achieve their high sales and help them easy to touch the customers.
But in another cases sometime they overstate the truth and make the customers confuse, so once or twice we will buy a product but they don't have enough qualifies like advertising talk about them, that is the bad things because it make us lost the trust with products of that company. For example I bought a washing machine because I saw they advertise that 100% washing clean, but actually when I bought it , it worked so bad, I waste a lot of time to complaint with that company and require them to change another one.
I agree that we should use advertise like the best way to present our products to customers , it make many kinds of business can develop by the way affect to mutual, beside that customer will have more information about products to help them easy to compare and chose a the good once. But I think the Market Management Offices should find the good methods to control the information in advertising, these jobs will compel the company more respect to customers and help in our country have a good market environment to attract more investors.
I think in our modern life, we have many ways to improve our sales but I think the company should choose the ways that for a long life of product, we should tell the truth and do the right things. That will make the company have strength in their business and pride of themselves about what did they do.