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Advertising causes unhealthy eating habits. Do you agree or disagree?


thaitam 9 / 14  
Sep 6, 2010   #1
In the age of mass media explosion, advertisement plays an extremly important in developing particular trends towards fashion, architechture, travel, or food. However, recently, people start to controvert that advertising causes unhealthy eating habits. In my point of view, eating habits are influenced by many others factors, such as wrong concept of beauty, pressure of work, religion belief, etc. Therefore, I totally disgree with the statement.

Admittedly, advertising has exerted many exaggarated effects to attract customers to buy their products. Fans of a famous singer rarely considerably choose to use the proper products, just simply that the product is being used by her idol. However, advertising is just a medium to promote products, thus it's unfair if we blame advertising for causing unhealthy eating habits. In my observation, here are some root causes of unhealthy eating habits.

Firstly, the increasingly pace of living changes the way people eat, especially people who are in high ranks. Commonly, they are responsible for the great important tasks in society, so they are usually under pressure. They tend to work double others, in some cases, skipping meals is ussual possibly. Or they enjoy the meals by having fast foods like hambugers, sandwiches, pot noddles, etc. Thus people gradually form a bad habit, regularly having whatever as long as can fullfill their stomach, no longer taking paytion to nutrients.

Recenty, " being slender is being beautiful" is new trend among young women. Producers themselves create the new concept towards beauty. These vulnerable ladies willing to refuse the nutrious food though they are very hungry or nearly being fainted. Without follwing specialist's advice, they freely do what they want, or try to itimate the mode of super models. Hence, the misunderstanding of healthy beauty causes many serious diseases, it's by means of advertising.

In conclusion, advertising partly influences peoples' food choice, not mainly chance the habits of eating. Therefore, people should equip enough knowledge about nutrious foods so that we can have a rational eating habit.

Hope to see your feedback soon! thanks!

ryutei133 5 / 24  
Sep 6, 2010   #2
... plays an extremely important role in...wrong conception ...
...has exerted ... effect on attracting customers...

Fans of a famous singer rarely considerably choose to use the proper products, just simply that the product is being used by her idol.

considerably means much, a lot. do you mean:
Fans of a famous singer rarely consider whether the products they choose are useful. They buy the products simply because the products are being used by their idol.

Well, I think you've misunderstood the meanings of some words. (such as vulnerable, equip, fulfill, usual....)
Maybe you could consult bilingual dictionaries. It really helps to understand the words better, since they are explained in English. :)
jems007 5 / 10  
Sep 7, 2010   #3
you made some spelling mistake.You will be easy to recognize if you will use Google explorer.
....ladies willinggoing to refuse .
...thoughIn result, they are very hungry or nearly being fainted
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,335 129  
Sep 7, 2010   #4
Practice 10 times whenever you see a correction. In recent weeks, I have begun to think that is very important to reprogram ourselves by practicing correct sentences ten times each.

However, recently people are starting to argue that advertising causes unhealthy eating habits.

In my point of view, eating habits are influenced by many other factors, such as wrong concepts of beauty, pressure of work, religious belief, etc. Therefore, I totally disagree with the statement.

Admittedly, advertising has exerted many exaggerated effects to attract customers to buy their products.

Fans of a famous singer rarely considerably choose to use the proper products, because they simply choose the product that is being used by their idols.

Firstly, the increasing pace of living changes the way people eat, especially people who are in high ranks.

Watch out for spelling errors: Without follwing specialist's advice, they freely do what they want, or try to itimate the mode of super models.

In conclusion, advertising partly influences peoples' food choices, but it is not the main factor in determining habits of eating. ---- is this what you mean?

Practice 10 times each!! Type and speak each sentence 10 times, and the mind will be reprogrammed!

:-)


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