Hello, Lynn. Your points and your writing are quite good. Maybe you can try to relate the conclusion more to the entire essay or the topic--you didn't mention consumer rights organizations anywhere else...=)
I would agree that advertising has a great impact on the sales of any product
. Consumers seem to be urged to buy cheap, discounted,
but unnecessary goods because they
are frequently advertised on television or other types of media.
One of the reasons for this prompt responding to advertisement
is that advertised products
look too appealing for consumers to deny the deals
. It is obviously seen that there would be a long queue of ladies, early in the morning, standing in front of
they received the information that "the early birds will get a fridge at one dollar". They are pulled to come not only to
that extremely cheap deal, but alsobecause
the shoppers of other items displayed in the shops. Do any
of them really need another fridge if they already have
one at home?
but also the shoppers of other items displayed in the shops
Are the shoppers or the items being displayed in the shops?