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After Africa's Sahara Desert, the next great desert is Taklimakan Desert


rosadesiana 38 / 40 2  
Sep 14, 2016   #1
TASK 3 - PLANT LIFE IN THE TAKLIMAKAN DESERT

After Africa's Sahara Desert, the next great desert is Taklimakan Desert which the width can be compared with Finland. 85 percent of the region consists of Sand dunes where the vegetation cannot grow prolifically. In an intolerable area which the temperature is unstable and change dramatically, have a high saltine and scorching summer, the plants can probably found only at a transitional zone where the open desert and oases give advantages and contribute to the plant growth.

An array of plants who thrive in such conditions include Populus euphratica, tamarix ramosissima, and Alhagi sparsifolia have been defending with different mechanisms. The coping methods are; drawing in as much water as possible, having an extensive roots to saturate water far from the standing tree, having strong roots to stabilize itself when the sandstorms come, closing the pores to minimize the loss of moistures and dilute the normally toxic salt by increasing the number its cells.

akbarmappiare 31 / 469 275  
Sep 15, 2016   #2
Hi Rosa..
This is my vantage point about this summary

... Desert which the ITS width can be ...
In an intolerable area which the ITS temperature is unstable and changeS dramatically, have HAS a high saltine (...), SO the plants can probably found FIND only at a transitional zone where ...

An array of plants who WHICH thrive in such conditions include (...) Alhagi sparsifolia have HAS been defending with ...
The coping methods are IS (Its verb agreement refers to COPING) ; drawing in as much ...

Note: Rosa, you have shown positive progress. I believe you can master this skill if you wanna improve some notes. Pay attention to Verb Agreement. I have seen that you get confused when you face between HAVE and HAS. On the one hand, you have to remember that the MODALS always pair with V1. Apart from that, you are supposed to review your summary more and more before you upload to make you what you write is what you mind. I cannot find the way to understand the last sentence in this summary because you created the complex sentence, but you slipped the actual meaning.

Keep spirit.
GOOD LUCk


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