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Agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face Communication is better?


sandipsinh 37 / 90 3  
Feb 8, 2014   #1
Today world is whirling with the fast and easy modes of communication available and why not? Currently every sector of the world is depended on communication from families to news channel.

Communication has made the connection easy for the people of the world, also it spreads awareness and keeps populace aware of happening around them. Although various mode of communication is used by people as per their convenient but face to face method of conversation is much effective and efficient.

Old fashion way of communication was very time -consuming, imagine - how would business operate if they have to wait for several days to exchange messages for their deals? Everything would be slow, resulting into low progress. But with Invention of Graham bell, offered telephone to the world that facilitate people to connect with each other in fraction of seconds. Similarly many other methods of communication are used by people of 20th century such as web and internet. But face to face conversation has shoved past all other modes of communication with its benefits of active and expressive conversation such as when people are talking face to face - they can express their view with their body gesture and facial expression that make even most worst matter easy to resolve for example - my mother used to stroke her hand on my head while suggesting me to not waste my time watching T.v and use that time resourcefully rather than scolding on me.

Cell phone and internet conversation are also useful in a scenario when we do not want to face somebody. This method help to keep two people connected despite holding grudges against each other. On the flip side face to face conversation sometimes spoil the skirmish more as it is easy to attack a person ,you are furious on. Certain profession and need of business sternly relies on face to face conversation such psychologist need to attend his patient to counsel him and provide him desired services, same demand is mandate by the corporates to present their presentation to their client as face to face conversation make their lengthy explanation easy as well more appealing, with that it also helps them to resolve queries generated by their traders. In today's technology world also many industry and professions depend on face to face conversation.

People choose every method of communication in their daily life to make their work and life relaxed. It is difficult to compare modes of communication although traditional way of conversation -face to face conversation, is preferred by people, families and business to convey most basic as well critical messages.
leoking 7 / 24 1  
Feb 8, 2014   #2
i prefer a short introduction with 2 sentence. introduce the question+ opinion

example
Face-to-face communication is usually the most effective form because there is the least chance for a misunderstanding to occur. On the other hand, letters, e-mail, and telephone calls are more efficient means of communication. In my opinion, the latter type of communication is better because efficiency is becoming increasingly important in the workplace
Pahan 1 / 1,906 553  
Feb 9, 2014   #3
Old fashion way of communication was very time -consuming, imagine - how would business operate if they have to wait for several days to exchange messages for their deals?

This sentence is very confusing. Do not lengthen your sentences unnecessarily. And complete telling one idea before you start another one. Pay more attention to clarity of your sentences and ideas. Limit one idea to one sentence!

This method helphelpsto keep two people connected despite holding grudges against each other.
You need to pay attention to your essay structure too. Follow what dumi has suggested!
OP sandipsinh 37 / 90 3  
Feb 11, 2014   #4
Thanks everybody , I appreciate your help. I'll fallow the structure suggested by Dhrumi.


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