Hi ngong, happy to read your writing.
let me give some suggestions.
However, there are much wider benefits of having university degree for both individuals and society must be counted subsequenta wide number of benefits for them who have university qualification.
First, people who study in university have better social skills and more confident because of living away from home. A case in point is that many students have moved to hostel and met new friends.
Comment.
*much for noun uncountable, so no S in the last word.
*perfect tense form : have/has V3.
* "and" is parallel word, hence it should be the same form.
Hope helpful.