Dioba 68 / 104 7 Sep 27, 2016 #1IELTS Summary Task:Learning VacationsIn recent years, surveys show almost one-third of travelers each year more prefer choose learning program more than other types of vacations. The main reason is they can enjoy the value of a vacation with new ways, not only just spending their time for useless thing. A couple of years ago, types of vacations are more preferred for young people such as students of French spending their time studying language in Paris and students which is focus on marine environment learn how to diving and accompany researchers become their assistance. Now, so many travel programs offer some educational endeavors. For example schools in Britain providing some courses such as history and philosophy for travelers in which enroll in residential colleges around the country or travelers can honing their cooking skills and how to prepared traditional meals. Not only got new experiences, but also improve knowledge and skills.
BAMS14 18 / 29 Sep 27, 2016 #2In recent years, surveys shows almost one-third of travelers each year more prefer choose( redoundand) learning program more ...... value of a vacation with new ways, not only(SHOULD FOLLOWED BY BUT ALSO) just spending their time for useless thingWASTING TIME .( BE CAREFULL WITH GRAMMAR AND CHECK FIRST BEFORE UPLOADED)GOOD LUCK!