However there are still people who follow alternate medical practices.
However, there are still people who believe in alternate medicines and also rely on them.In the past couple of decades, medical science has scaled new heights. However there are still people who follow alternate medical practices. In my opinion, these side-stream therapies are useless and in many cases they prove to be harmful.
.... Very impressive introduction
To begin with, these therapies use unreliable and sometimes confusing raw material for preparingproducing medicines.
In many cases, these compounds haverelieves the patient with a soothing effect but do very little to treat the actual problem.
You write extremely well.... Good structure, good grammar, good vocabulary and more than everything else, good ideas.
Good luck too! :D