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Looking for alternatives
Oil production in the United states peaked in 1970. when will it peak world wide who knows maybe tomorrow, maybe next week, maybe next year. But it will peak some day and we need to be ready. One thing it depends on is How much people are willing to pay for it. If people are willing to pay $10 a gallon then we may have oil for a long time. But if people are not willing to pay $10 a gallon we might want to start looking for alternatives.
Oil reserves are being depleted around the world. As demand gos up, the price gos up so we get Rising Gas Prices. and Rising gas prices are causing most people to drive less. Or causing People to looking for alternatives to high gas prices.
The oil reserves are being depleted. Yes they are as country's like china can afford cars and start to buy more are more of then the demand for gas gos up. We be finding more all the time but According to John W. Schoen Senior Producer for MSNBC
"There is lots of oil out there," said Karl Kurz, vice president of marketing and minerals for Anadarko Petroleum. "But it's a finite resource; we can't get around that. Eventually, you're going to get to the point where there's not any more to find."(Schoen).
What happen when demand gos up, the price gos up so we get Rising Gas Prices. Not just unleaded gas at the pump but natural gas to. But they don't just go up they can come back down too. They fluctuate just when prices where getting close to $3.00 dollars a gallon, they started coming back down to around $2.20 a gallon. And seem to have leveled out. At least for now.
Rising gas prices are causing most people to drive less. They are running there air conditioning and heating less the more gas prices go up. People are making less trips to the store, only driving to where they have to. They are Going on sorter vacations. Buying cars that get better gas mileage or even buying hybrids.
People are looking for alternatives to higher gas prices. From Solar and wind to Hydrogen. People are even trying to make power out of cow and pig manure. Now solar and wind wont work to power your car. But Hydrogen will, In fact if you have a Fuel injected engine. In fact it's not that hard to convert it to run on hydrogen.
People are not willing to pay $10 a gallon. we should start looking for alternatives. Using wind, solar and other renewable energy to make power. The use that power to make Hydrogen that can be used to run our cars on. You will then have water coming out of your exhaust pipe, instead of poison gas.