is illustrates
is illustrated (Remember Passive voice be+V3)
a 10-years
if you add article "a" it should be without S = a 10-year period, or if you do not put "a" = over 10 years
The fluctuated trend also shown in Italy which started
subject verb agreement problem
Compared with
compared to.. remember, do not always add "with" as the replacement of "dengan" because it is not the same.
common mistakes:
berbeda dengan = different
with (incorrect), different from (correct)
sama dengan = same
with (incorrect), same as (correct)
CMIIW (Correct Me if I am Wrong)