vancandoit 1 / - Oct 2, 2019 #1ielts general training-line graphThe line graph illustrates the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. It is evident that The percentage of wastes of which the place saw a rapid change. Both companies A and B followed by the downward trend as oppose to the tones of waste in company C was rose considerablyNote: please give me a comment about my overview about line graph.
chloeyyy123 3 / 5 1 Oct 3, 2019 #2It good for you to point out the trend, but I think you can talk more about the crossover point.
roswita116 16 / 37 17 Oct 7, 2019 #3@vancandoitHi, there. I would like to give you some advice about your introduction and overall. 😁1. Use synonym to paragraph question.(eg:company=corporation, amount=quantity)2.Give at least 2 main features (the most or the least) to write your overall. As I can see your overall, you just provided one feature. As a second feature you can write down that company A and company C converge toward each other around 2013.Hope this would help !😁