Hi, joaodimas. I'll make a few suggestions to your essay:Seems that the way of democracy and political engagement are too slow and ineffective.
ItSeemsseems that the
wayways of democracy and political engagement are
too slow and ineffective.
Networks of corrupt politicians and private organizations are continuously nurtured with the appropriation of public funds, and perpetuates their power and influence.
Networks of corrupt politicians and private organizations are continuously nurtured with the appropriation of public funds,
andwhich perpetuates their power and influence.
Thus, scandals may seem a practical way of calling the voters attention and urging them to mobilize.
Thus, scandals may seem
to be a practical way of calling the
votersvoters' attention
to issues and urging them to mobilize.
Cases of corruption should be judged by investigation and trial, without interference of the public opinion.
Cases of corruption should be judged by investigation and trial, without interference
of theby public opinion.
This is not the case when a scandal is used by the press to manipulate against a politician or party, because the damage of reputation is already done when a tribunal finally gives the sentence.
This is not the case when a scandal is used by the press to manipulate
against a politician or party
,;becausereputations have already been damaged by the timethe damage of reputation is already done when a tribunal finally gives the sentence.
I hope that helps you some :)