is this supposed to be an academic text? If yes, you should avoid using informal language like
Don't be too quick to judge those who run this kind of software though. Lets begin our analysis first.
What are the impacts of bots on the world's most popular MMORPG's economy known as Runescape and are they negative?
I understand that you wanted to ask a question as a motivator, but be careful, opening the introduction with a question is tricky and you need to be a professional writer to do it perfectly. So, I would suggest to start the introduction with some general information.
You need to make the aims of the essay clear by adding a blueprint to the essay.
What are the effects of this black hole I speak of?
I personally prefer a text which gives me all the necessary information not making me think about what the writer is willing to convey. Asking question at the beginning of each body paragraph brings the same situation to me. So, you might want to revise the topic sentence.
hope this helps.