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Essay Prompt:Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
One of the important criteria could be used to measure the learning of students is assigning daily homework. Whether teachers should assign homework or not, is the issue, which will be discussed. From my point of view, Students need to be managed by their teachers in out of school by giving them the homework, which would be helpful to understand whatever they have learnt in the school. It is not only giving the students the clear direction for the study, but help teachers to understand the educational condition of each student.
Daily homework helps students to be more active in both home and school. By doing everyday activities, students would be able to review whatever they learn in the school and find related answers which would be asked in the homework. Through it, they would be able to ask questions from parents or teachers about vague parts of their duties. The regular homework can encourage students to come up new questions about last topic in the classroom next day. In addition, being more active during the semester, help students to be more ready for the final exam.
Another advantage of assigning question to students is making a mutual relationship between teachers and students. By asking more questions about the topic, students would know how to make a strong connection with their teacher. Homework would clarify the educational condition of each student. As a matter of the fact, the ability of students to learn is different. Therefore, teachers would be able to measure student's abilities to learn by following their homework. As a result, they would know which student needs more attention. They also would be recognized that overall ability of student to learn studies is good or not. Consequently, a teacher will have a big picture of a class.
To sum up, based on above reasons mentioned, the consequence of assigning daily homework would be useful for both students and teachers. Teachers would recognize the total educational conditions of the students and students could understand their faults through reviewing their assignments by teachers.