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Autism is a spectrum disorder; Introduction to Autism


Ceressie 2 / 3  
May 14, 2007   #1
Ceressie Smith
SED: 6021 Spring/Summer-07
Essay Analysis

Autism is a spectrum disorder. The symptoms and characteristics of autism can present themselves in a wide variety of combinations, from mild to severe. Two children, both with the same diagnosis, can act very differently from one another and have varying skills. Public awareness of autism has increased and more and more children are being identified as having ASD. Early diagnosis, treatments and positive behavioral support is needed for children with Autism Spectrum Disorder.

Parents of children with autism often have many questions about their child's behaviors, diagnosis and treatments. The Book, The Autism sourcebook; Everything You need to Know About Diagnosis, Treatment, Coping, and Healing, ( Karen Siff Exkorn,2005) is an informative, easy reading, guide into the world of autism. Parents and educators will find it to be a vital resource book.

In Chapter 3, Understanding Your Child's Behavior, (Exkorn, K. pg. 38), the author discusses how most behaviors in children are considered typical behaviors but those same behaviors can be atypical in children with ASDs. It is a matter of severity.

One example would be children spinning around. All children engage in spinning. A typical child may spin around and fall to the ground laughing before switching to another

form of play. A child with ASD may spin for hours. Another example would be typical children who eat only chicken nuggets for every meal are considered to be picky eaters.

Children with ASDs who eat chicken nuggets for every meal are considered to be engaging in an idiosyncratic behavior characteristic of an ASD. The difference is the intensity, frequency, duration, and nature of the behavior. These behaviors are present along with a cluster of other behaviors that are symptomatic of ASDs.

Throughout this chapter the author list parental concerns and questions and then answer them by showing the parent what a typical child looks like verses a child with ASD in the same situation. I thought it was great how the author presented the parent questions and then the answers. I've heard many parents ask these questions and this chapter is a must read for parents, very informative.

In chapter 2, The science and fiction of Autism, (Laura Schreibman, 2005), the author discusses the characteristics of Autism. She states the hallmark feature of autism is the deficit in social behavior and attachment. Children with autism often do not bond with their parents, do not play with other children, may ignore or avoid the social initiation of others, and refer to be alone. She discusses each characteristic:

- Deficits in Social behavior and Attachment
- Deficits in Communication
- Restricted, Repetitive, and Stereotyped Patterns of Behavior
- Abnormalities in Response to the Physical Environment
- Abnormalities of Affect
- Intellectual Functioning
- Disruptive Behaviors
As one can see, it can be very frustrating, challenging, and overwhelming to raise and care for a child with autism Parents need all the help and assistance possible.

In chapter three, the author talks about the importance of diagnosis and assessment.
She states four reasons why diagnostic criteria and a classification system for autism are critical:
1. For scientist to be able to communicate clearly the nature of study populations. The more precise, comprehensive, and detailed a classification system is, the more valuable it is as a means of communication for researchers.

2. Diagnostic precision is important to clinicians for the development, implementation, and evaluation of treatment.
3. Educators and other community service providers depend upon diagnosis and classification systems for appropriate placement for children with autism.
4. Diagnosis and classification are always important to other community entities such as governmental agencies, the legal system, and insurance companies.
Diagnosis and assessment usually provide the individual with a label, ,and as stated by the author, diagnosis can be a two-edged sword in that it can just as easily be used to deny as well as qualify individuals for service

In comparison, Exkron and Schreibman provide two excellent books full of practical information, examples and quotations.

Schreibman's book is more scientifically reliable with a wealth of research knowledge. Exkron's book was less scientific and more "parent friendly" and compassionate. The contrast would be the format of the books and the way the content material was presented. They are both vital resources for parents and professionals who are involved with children who have autism spectrum disorders.

References:

Schreibman, L. (2005). The Science and Fiction of Autism. MA: Howard University Press

Exkron, K. (2005). The Autism Sourcebook: Everything You need to Know About Diagnosis, Treatment, Coping, and Healing. NY: HarperCollins Publishers Inc.

Rajiv 55 / 400  
May 15, 2007   #2
Ceressie,

You are obviously quite sincere about the subject and what you are trying to say. Why are you studying Autism though?... just a thought.

thanks

Rajiv
EF_Team2 1 / 1,709  
May 15, 2007   #3
Greetings!

You have a very well-written essay! I have just a few editing comments.

You don't say what the exact assignment was; if you were to compare and contrast the two books, you should probably mention them both in your opening paragraph, including them as part of your thesis statement.

The Autism sourcebook; Everything You need to Know About Diagnosis, Treatment, Coping, and Healing, ( Karen Siff Exkorn,2005) - I would imagine you are probably supposed to use APA referencing for your paper...? If so, your citations are not quite standard. Your in-text parenthetical citation should have the author's last name and the year; if you quote directly, put the page number as well: (Exkorn, 2005, p. 3). If you use the author's name in the sentence (and, ideally, you would, the first time), do it like this: "Exkorn (2005), discusses how most behaviors of in children are considered "typical behaviors" (p. 3). [I added a direct quote for demonstrative purposes.]

You don't need a citation here:
In Chapter 3, Understanding Your Child's Behavior, (Exkorn, K. pg. 38),
but you can put (p. 38) at the end of the sentence.

ASDs. - You use this a couple of times instead of ASD. I'm not sure why the "s" is there if it's called "Autism Spectrum Disorder"--unless there is more than one kind?

You have a couple of typos here:

Throughout this chapter the author lists parental concerns and questions and then answers them by showing the parent what a typical child looks like versus a child with ASD in the same situation.

may ignore or avoid the social initiation of others, and prefer to be alone.

1. For scientists to be able to communicate clearly

Were you specifically instructed to give your personal opinion, as if writing a book review? If so, this is fine: I thought it was great how the author presented the parent questions and then the answers. I've heard many parents ask these questions and this chapter is a must read for parents, very informative. - If not, though, you might want to take it out; only put your personal opinion in a formal writing assignment if instructed to do so.

There are lots of sites online with information on proper citation form! Just do an internet search with the type you are supposed to use: "APA citation" or "MLA citation" or "Harvard citation," etc.

Good luck with your studies!

Thanks,

Sarah, EssayForum.com
OP Ceressie 2 / 3  
May 19, 2007   #4
For years I have been interested in autism. I am presently in the autism spectrum disorder program for primary children. This is my sixth year. I love my job....

Ceressie
OP Ceressie 2 / 3  
May 19, 2007   #5
Thank you very much for all your help!

Ceressie
OP Ceressie 2 / 3  
May 19, 2007   #6
Hello,

I am working with autistic children.
I am also taking a class each year in order to learn more about children with autism.

I wrote this essay for class.

Thanks for your comment!
supasikh 1 / 2  
May 20, 2007   #7
Well Written i have watch shows about the disorder but this essay give me much more information.


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