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Average annual spending on cell phone and residental phone services


anggicaroot 20 / 19 3  
Nov 23, 2015   #1
A breakdown of the average of spending by American people on mobile phone and landline phone services between 2001 and 2010, a 10-year period is illustrated in line chart. Overall, the both expenditures have different rates. In any case, while the cell phone had upward trend, the figure for residential phone services decreased gradually over the year.

In 2001, the most popular Us Consumer was on landline phone services that spent an average under $700, compared with $200 on cell phone services. After 5-year period, the figure for spending on residential phone services declined by $200, but on cell phone experienced a dramatic rise by approximately $300.

The amount of American people purchased on both types of phone services had similar rate in 2006, representing %500. Over following a year expenditure on mobile phone overtook the landline phone services. In 2010, spending on cell phone reached a peak around $750, while the average of spending on residential services fell markedly to $400.




fahmisadja 33 / 33 34  
Nov 23, 2015   #2
Hi Anggi,
I'll try to give you some comments...


A breakdown of the average of consumers spending in Americaby Americanspeople(American means Person of America, so you only need to add 's' after word 'American') on mobile phone and landline phone services(I'm not sure that it is appropriate, but sorry I have found the certain word yet)between 2001 and 2010, a 10-year period is(Better you choose one of them)illustratedrevealedinby the line chart. Overall, the both expenditures have different rates. In any case, while the cell phone had upward trend, the figure for residential phone servicesthe other decreased gradually over the yeartime frame .

In 2001, the most popular Us Cc onsumerswaswere on landline phone servicesthatwhichwas spent anataverage underless than $700, compared to with$200 on cell phone servicesat $200 . After a 5-year period, the figure for spending on residential phone services declined by $200to over $500 , but on cell phone experienced a dramatic rise by approximately at $300.

note : to make your nice flow, you can make different term to present your data. Sometimes you can uncover your level/percentage/price first, then item, then trend. or you can switch it, so your reader will enjoy your writing, and do not get bored.

Good luck then, I hope it can helps :)


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