Including the picture of the graph is a must. The picture helps readers understand the logical order easily.
Thanks to the search on Google, I bring it to this board :D
Turning to the table, let me try to write an introductory statement:The table shows the average distance of miles traveled per person using different means of transport in England, from 1985 to 2000
Then followed by an overview:Overall, people from England were keen on travelling much in 2000, if compared to the year 1985. This can be seen from the total distance experiencing a dramatic increase, from 4740 to 6475, a rise of about 1735 measured in miles in 15 years.
bicycle and walking have slight decrease about 10 and 20 respectively among two yearsThe average people walked 255 miles in 1985. However, this experienced a slight decrease to 237 in 2000. At the same time, people riding bicycles covered the average distance from 51 to 41 miles.
For the next writing, please include the picture and use the language of comparison. By doing so, you will earn a good score :D