Advertisements effect
Advertising helps businesses reach potential customers who have the capability of buying the products. Due to brand awareness among consumers, advertising assists customers to make a decision regarding which product and service to buy. For instance, Target-audiences of Coca Cola are children and adolescent and they are successfully brought this kind of fizzy drinks popular to children around the world through varieties of advertising campaigns. In fact, it not only helps companies reach prospective customers but also create customers by domino phenomenon, the more new customers you gain through advertising, the more word of mouth those customers, in turn, will share with others.
Nowaday, advertisting greatly contributes to the development of any economy, the advertising industry has become a huge industry because of the large product and service supples . Yet the expense of advertisting is not cheap, it attracts potential consumers for brands that brings profit. As a result, a multibilion-dollar industry appeared, many companies specializing in marketing was born such as BBDO, Ogily and Mather... Moreover, it has been creating sinigficant job opporturnities that necessary to decline unemloyment rate for a country.
However, advertising sometimes can be very harmful to people in general, with the development of technology, we are constantly bombarded with advertising which can lead to negative consequences. Consumers must always be wary of the claims made in it since such claims are often exaggerated or untrue, it is normality that people are compelled to such advertising, the reason why we making a decision buying goods impulsively. For example, two restaurant owners in Thailand has been arrested due to the misinformation about the discount program, they were also identified as law-breakers. Another remarkable point is commercials and promotion videos, an effective tool using for advertisement. Thanks to catching melody, beautiful scenes,... it can easily attract attention. Nevertheless, an increasing sexually explicit advertisement has designed causing serious influences on our children. The government is supposed to impose regulations on the advertising industry to protect consumers.Holt Educational Consultant - / 14,801 
4780 As you did not provide the instructions for the writing of this paper, I can only offer you grammar related advice. For more focused advice and analysis of your work. I need to know what kind of essay you are writing, what test it is for, and what the discussion instructions are. Please provide that next time to get advice from a contributor.
Majority of your errors are on the spelling side. It appears that you need to brush up on your English language skills. Read more English materials to familiarize yourself with the words and sentence structures. You need to download the free exercise sheets available online to help you with this problem.
Spelling:
Nowaday - nowadays
advertisting - advertising
supples - supplies
multibillion-dollar - multibillion dollar
Ogily - Ogivly
sinigficant - significant
opportunities - opportunities
unemloyment - unemployment
Punctuation Issues:
law-breakers - lawbreakers (no hyphen required)
beautiful scenes ,... - choose only one punctuation mark.
These are errors that you should have caught if you had only bothered to spell check and edit your paper before submitting it. I cannot comment on the content as I only know the topic and title, but not the writing instructions for the essay. I can do that when you post your next essay. Provided you remember to post the writing instructions along with the essay.
